[Faith-talk] Poppa Bear

[Poppa Bear]

Hello Donna, I completely agree. I have read so many books that were pre
20th century when run on sentences were a typical practice, but as I read
more contemporary authors I do not notice it. Most of my more recent
writings do not have so many of these run on sentences. Thanks for the
observation. I will try to get another chapter up today. The current novel I
am working on has been consuming quite a bit of time. I am trying to get in
about 1000 to 2000 words in a day. 

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From: Faith-talk [mailto:faith-talk-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Donna
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Sent: Friday, August 08, 2014 9:53 AM
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Subject: [Faith-talk] Poppa Bear

Poppa Bear, I am really enjoying your book.  The characters and story are
wonderful.  My only suggestion is as you rewrite your narration to watch for
run on sentences.  I am guilty of the same!  Sometimes two sentences can be
clearer!  Keep the chapters coming!  Prayers, Donna 

For we walk by faith, not by sight. 2 Corinthians 5:7 



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