[Faith-talk] Chapter 7 of my novel

[debby phillips]

Hi there! Although I understand and agree with the narrative of 
this chapter, I think you might want to bring it more like dialog 
or something.  It sounds preachy, and it will be a turn off to 
someone reading the book who knows nothing or little about 
Christianity.  You need to weave it into the story so that it is 
part of one of the characters' dialog, or something like that.  
I'm not sure how to tell you to do it.    Blessings,    Debby