[musictlk] voice teacher search
Amy Billman
amy0223 at gmail.com
Tue May 13 20:45:17 UTC 2014
SMH...
The word you're struggling with is Presbyterian.
Also, and send whatever email you feel is appropriate, but this smacks very
much of not quite friendly enough...
How do you know this person? Was she suggested to you as someone who teaches
lessons that perhaps would be a good fit for you?
It's wrong for me or anyone else here to rewrite this for you, but just my
opinion, I would inject a little less... This is my lists of needs and
demands, and a little more friendliness in here somehow.
Granted, perhaps this is in part because eloquence read this, but...
If I got a letter like this as a voice teacher I would be a bit taken aback.
Sometimes, communications like this are better not done in writing. Really.
In fact, as much as I'd want the student, I might run away; and I say this
honestly as someone who is blind who has taught voice to students both blind
and sighted.
I honestly wish that I could tell you why my immediate instinct upon reading
this would be to not want to go there...
But, I would say try to shoot for something a bit less corporate and formal
and a bit more friendly. It sorta feels like you're pummeling her with your
list of 7 things that you gotta have and expect.
Remember, you are not her boss. You are wanting to study voice lessons from
this person, so you have to cultivate a relationship. No good relationship
has a chance if you come at it like that... Just my opinion...
If you can talk to her, you may get a ton more accomplished.
Good luck!
Amy Billman
-----Original Message-----
From: musictlk [mailto:musictlk-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Kelsey
Nicolay
Sent: Tuesday, May 13, 2014 1:27 PM
To: musictlk at nfbnet.org
Subject: [musictlk] voice teacher search
Hello,
I am in the process of searching for a new voice teacher (I had
to stop lessons due to personal reasons), but I might start up
again in the fall. I've drafted an email to a prospective
teacher. Could you guys review it and let me know how I can make
it better? I know there's one word I'm not sure how to spell and
you'll probably see it. I want to come across as professional in
my communications with this person.
Hi Kathy,
I think I may have contacted you before about voice lessons. I
am not looking to start lessons at this time, but I'm just trying
to get an idea of available teachers and teaching styles. I have
a few questions for you to help me in this matter. First, how
much do you charge for lessons and do you offer any discounts?
Second, where is your studio located? Are you willing to travel
to another location for the lesson? I am in a community choir
from September to December and from February to May and we
practice at the Medina Prespreterian Church at 7:00. If there is
a room available, would you be willing to do the lesson there
before rehearsal? Third, do you offer trial lessons for new
students? Fourth, what should I expect to happen in the first
lesson? Fifth, what kinds of music do your students typically
sing? I'm interested in either musical theater or pop, is this a
possibility? Sixth, would you be comfortable teaching a student
who is blind? I read Braille music and would need hands-on
demonstrations of everything you demonstrate. I have studied
before though. Seventh, about how many voice students do you
currently have? Do you offer any form of a studio class which
allows students to perform for one another? Do you hold recitals?
If so, how often and when and where? Finally, do you help
students with their choir music if needed? Again, I'm not looking
to start at this time, rather just exploring my options. Thank
you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanks in advance,
Kelsey Nicolay
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