[MusicTlk] Announcing The Demo, my debut album

[Dan Bertrand]

Hello, there!

Hope you´re fine. Hip Hop is not my thing, but it definitely sounds very
good. Congrats!

On Wed, Dec 9, 2020 at 8:27 AM Rick USA via MusicTlk <musictlk at nfbnet.org>
wrote:

> Hi Lonnie:
>
> I listened to a little and it sounds good.
>
> I will likely listen to more since I find your attitude to be real enough
> and the production quality almost professional.
>
> My first impression is that it may be overproduced for this style of music
> but this may be unfair until I listen to more.
>
> Todays music is all over produced in my opinion.
>
> I want to hear the emotion in your voice, you are telling a story with
> this type of song.
>
> When you said the word “pack” in the first cut if you were a member of a
> “pack” or know a member of a “pack” I would want to hear either the pride,
> fear, anger  or other emotion when you voice that word as a part of the
> sentence.
>
> Keep your story out front and tell it like an actor playing a part in a
> movie.
>
> If you are mad sound mad, if afraid sound afraid etc…
>
> Perhaps less compression which may be flattening out your emotional
> dynamics – not sure though.
>
> Above all tell your story  and drive your listener to feel something not
> just listen to your music as background noise while they feed the pig.
>
> Tell  what you know and think of events in your life that drive your
> unconscious emotions when singing any phrase you want your audience to feel.
>
> My review is based on the fact that I am 72 years and a product of the 60s
> so am big on story telling and making the audience feel something enough to
> drive them to some type of action.
>
> technicals.
>
> I lost interest in music sometime during the 80s, it just didn’t make me
> feel anything any more.
>
> It was excellent but I just couldn’t get it up as it were listening to
> music which I felt put technical production over the story.
>
> The bands of that era made us feel something, Chuck Berry made us jump,
> Beach Boys want to surf and play with hot cars and hot girls, Motown made
> me want to have a girlfriend and wanted to be loved, the Stones just rocked
> me in all directions, The Who made me angry, Beatles, James Brown Little
> Walter Clapton Hendrix Dillon…
>
> They all fired emotions when I listened, and still listen to them.
>
> It was the era of Vietnam, Civil Rights and Workers Unions.
>
> There were allot of emotional stories and the musical artists led the way
> in communicating what they were experiencing as a part of their generation.
>
> Art and music have always been more about communications than impressing
> us with perfection but a combination of both and the art is at its best.
>
> I am likely off target for todays music audience but it is what it is (mf)
> my friend.
>
> Good luck and your work is very good already and with work will likely
> just keep getting better.
>
> Rick USA
>
>
>
>
>
> and liked the r&b, blues and blues/rock.
>
>
>
> *Sent: *Monday, December 7, 2020 11:11 PM
> *To: *musictlk at nfbnet.org
> *Cc: *Lonnie Music <lonnie.officialmusic at gmail.com>
> *Subject: *[MusicTlk] Announcing The Demo, my debut album
>
>
>
>   Hi all,
>
> I'd like to share my first album with you all, and would appreciate
>
> feedback, shares and likes. It is available on all platforms. Here are a
>
> couple of the mainstream links though. If looking for it on other
>
> platforms, search The Demo, Lonnie.
>
>
>
> Itunes/Apple Music:
>
> https://music.apple.com/us/album/the-demo/1539347810?uo=4&app=itunes
>
>
>
> Amazon:
>
> https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B08NHMTCJJ
>
>
>
> Thanks in advance for the support and feedback. Feel free to follow me on
>
> my socials, listed below.
>
> Lonnie
>
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