[stylist] Being firm but respectfull

[LoriStay at aol.com]

In a message dated 10/31/08 1:44:14 AM, rjs059 at peoplepc.com writes:


> A tinge of anger slid across Jacqueline's face, now Kay was the one feeling
> intimidated.
> 

This is a comma splice.   Make it two sentences.
And respectful has one l.
I've no idea if Jacqueline is being disrespectful.   Doesn't seem like it.
Lori


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