[stylist] Ending on a cliff hanger

[Justin Williams]

that's about how al series's need to end.  Good job. 

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From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of helene ryles
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Thanks for your advice Angela.
I think I'll do that then.

Helene.

On 28/08/2009, Angela fowler <fowlers at syix.com> wrote:
> Oh man, those cliff-hangers! They have a definite appeal. I'd leave it as
it
> is.
> 	When I read those cliff-hangers, I can't wait to get my hands on the
> second book, and if I can't, I just won't be satisfied. I'm not sure what
> the psychology is, although it should probably be apparent to me (its been
a
> long week at school) but you develop a kind of relationship with your
> readers that you don't if you have the entire story in one book.
>
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>
> I devided 'A Deafblind girl' into two seperate novels. As it stands the
book
> ends on a cliff hanger.
> Nadia's mother is at large although she is wanted by the police.
> In part 2 of the book she eventually gets caught. (part 2 is going to be a
> seperate book).
>
> I'm wondering if I should leave things as they are or bring the capture
> forward?
> What do you think?
>
> Helene
>
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