[stylist] Angels Light Partial Draft 1

[James H. "Jim" Canaday M.A. N6YR]

Robert,
glad you got the comments, I liked her writing.  at first it was a 
little bit  a puzzle but some things got explained later and I know 
some successful writers write that way intentionally.
Think of it, she's not
written to the list with any --- thank you or comments of any kind.
well, Robert, she's in high school, and I'm sure you and I had some 
times in our high school years when we let things slip, too.  I hope 
the lack of response from her doesn't mean she's feeling embarrassed, 
overwhelmed, etc.
sure is cold here, and I know you're colder up there!
walked my dog this afternoon, wind chill of 3F.

and, tomorrow I see the lung specialist to try to get a handle on 
this stupid persistent cough of five weeks duration.
jc

Jim Canaday M.A.
Lawrence, KS

At 09:22 PM 12/14/2009, you wrote:
>Jim, thanks for  checking up; I should have emailed you back and let you
>know that I did. And without looking, I'm pretty sure it was the same day.
>
>I should call Katie and make sure she got it all. Think of it, she's not
>written to the list with any --- thank you or comments of any kind. And
>she's not emailed me back either.
>
>
>
>
>Robert Leslie Newman
>Email- newmanrl at cox.net
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>-----Original Message-----
>From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
>Behalf Of James H. "Jim" Canaday M.A. N6YR
>Sent: Monday, December 14, 2009 8:16 PM
>To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>Subject: Re: [stylist] Angels Light Partial Draft 1
>
>Robert,
>did you get my comments on this the other day sent to you directly, to pass
>on to katie?
>jc
>
>At 07:39 AM 11/28/2009, you wrote:
> >STYLIST members
> >
> >Did you all see this message by Katie? She is a high school student; a
> >member of the Division. It was sent in back on the 12th of October. The
> >attached story is quite good. I'm wondering what you all would give her
> >for feedback?
> >
> >
> >Robert Leslie Newman
> >Email- newmanrl at cox.net
> >THOUGHT PROVOKER Website-
> >Http://www.thoughtprovoker.info
> >
> >-----Original Message-----
> >From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
> >Behalf Of kec92 at ourlink.net
> >Sent: Monday, October 12, 2009 8:36 PM
> >To: stylist at nfbnet.org
> >Subject: [stylist] Angels Light Partial Draft 1
> >
> >
> >
> >         Hey,
> >
> >         Sorry you haven't heard from me in a while.  But I've been
> >working on Angels Light.  I wanted to run it by everyone to see what
> >you all think of it.  Since my first email a while ago,, I've been
> >revising and editting my story.  I'm sending it and attached file. Enjoy!
> >
> >         Katie Colton  BODY { font-family:Arial, Helvetica,
> >sans-serif;font-size:12px; }
> >
> >
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