[stylist] Help! I'm being tormented by my essay!

[Angela fowler]

They just didn't seem to mesh is all. Maybe I should have posted the whole
essay, or maybe I'm just paranoid. I've been revising them for a couple
weeks.  

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From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of LoriStay at aol.com
Sent: Sunday, May 10, 2009 4:48 PM
To: stylist at nfbnet.org
Subject: Re: [stylist] Help! I'm being tormented by my essay!

Except for some extra hyphens and the lack of an apostrophe, what's wrong
with them?
Lori

In a message dated 5/9/09 2:03:49 PM, fowlers at syix.com writes:


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>          A far better response to the death of God, according to 
> Nietzsche, is for those of us who can to seize the moment and become 
> gods ourselves.
> "I
> assess the power of a will by how much resistance, pain, torture it 
> endures and knows how to turn to its advantage;" (382) Here-in lies 
> the will to power, going not with culture for cultures sake, but 
> having the strength to go against it. It is following our own 
> instincts, chasing our own dreams, even though society might deem them 
> unpermissible. Blind people living in a sighted world are constantly 
> flying in the face of cultural expectations when we attempt to do 
> every-day things which are thought to require vision.
> Nietzsche would laud us.
> 
>          Going against the cultural grain is anything but easy, but 
> Nietzsche contends that the tougher it is, the more we grow as a result.
> "Actually, every major growth is accompanied by a tremendous crumbling 
> and passing away:" (112) As we take on new challenges and become new 
> versions of ourselves, we will lose some aspects of our old lives. The 
> losses will be painful; these things were a part of us and we will 
> miss them and grieve for them in a way. This pain and grieving, 
> according to Nietzsche, is liberating. In the end we will be freed 
> from the shackles of old beliefs, old scruples, and old habits which 
> had held us back for years. The personal growth we will experience 
> will make the pain and loss well worth it.
> 
> 
> Thank you
> 
> Angela Fowler
> 
> fowlers at syix.com
> 




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