[stylist] Help! I'm being tormented by my essay!

[James Canaday M.A. N6YR]

yes,
I believe h e r e i n is correct
jc

Jim Canaday M.A.
Lawrence, KS

At 08:47 AM 5/11/2009, you wrote:
>The other one I wondered about was here-in.  Isn't it just herein?
>Barbara
>
>If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care:  of 
>whom you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.
>
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>Sent: Sunday, May 10, 2009 11:48 PM
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>>Angela,
>>
>>I'm with everyone else.  They look good and read really well.  "everyday" is
>>a single word, not hyphenated, but that's the best nitpick I can come up
>>with for you.  /smile/
>>
>>The concepts you discussed and how you apply them to blindness are really
>>fascinating.  I like the way you did it.
>>
>>I'm playing the violin for your end-of-term cold.  /smile/
>>
>>Tami Smith-Kinney
>>
>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
>>Behalf Of Angela fowler
>>Sent: Saturday, May 09, 2009 11:03 AM
>>To: 'Writer's Division Mailing List'
>>Subject: [stylist] Help! I'm being tormented by my essay!
>>
>>Hey guys,
>>    Could someone give me some pointers on these two paragraphs? They are
>>driving me crazy!
>>Thanks
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>         A far better response to the death of God, according to Nietzsche,
>>is for those of us who can to seize the moment and become gods ourselves. "I
>>assess the power of a will by how much resistance, pain, torture it endures
>>and knows how to turn to its advantage;" (382) Here-in lies the will to
>>power, going not with culture for cultures sake, but having the strength to
>>go against it. It is following our own instincts, chasing our own dreams,
>>even though society might deem them unpermissible. Blind people living in a
>>sighted world are constantly flying in the face of cultural expectations
>>when we attempt to do every-day things which are thought to require vision.
>>Nietzsche would laud us.
>>
>>         Going against the cultural grain is anything but easy, but
>>Nietzsche contends that the tougher it is, the more we grow as a result.
>>"Actually, every major growth is accompanied by a tremendous crumbling and
>>passing away:" (112) As we take on new challenges and become new versions of
>>ourselves, we will lose some aspects of our old lives. The losses will be
>>painful; these things were a part of us and we will miss them and grieve for
>>them in a way. This pain and grieving, according to Nietzsche, is
>>liberating. In the end we will be freed from the shackles of old beliefs,
>>old scruples, and old habits which had held us back for years. The personal
>>growth we will experience will make the pain and loss well worth it.
>>
>>
>>Thank you
>>
>>Angela Fowler
>>
>>fowlers at syix.com
>>
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