[stylist] censorship

[LoriStay at aol.com]

good suggestion.   i wonder if they would accept it?   Too late now, 
though.   We've already got a new verse.   Had to rewrite three of her rewrites to 
eliminate product names!   Luckily, "Prada shoes" can easily become "high 
heeled shoes."   The author of the verse gave me a compliment (at least I 
hope it was a compliment), saying, "That's why you're the editor."
Lori

In a message dated 5/10/09 10:19:07 PM, jbron at optonline.net writes:


> On the other hand, a group of older adults shouldn't need a teacher on 
> their
> back to make sure they don't do something improper.  Perhaps she confused
> the word "top" as a synonym for "best".  Perhaps you could substitute the
> word top with Pres.
> 




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