[stylist] More changes to "Trials of an honorary dragon".

[LoriStay at aol.com]

This occurred to me today:   When I see the word duman, I automatically 
think, oh, a typographical error.   Maybe you could call them something else?   
Maybe a word that means gray, or even something made up like grisling (g r 
i s l i n g).   Making them gold instead of gray would be okay, but I'm not 
sure it's necessary. (One woman's opinion)
Lori

In a message dated 10/5/09 3:21:54 PM, dreamavdb at googlemail.com writes:


> I'm now thinking of making Liza and Nadia gold (tan) in colour rather
> then grey and dropping the deamon bit (for this novel at least).
> That way all Nazdonians will be gold in colour. The witches will be
> the same colour as all other non magical nazdonians. There will still
> be witches.
> 
> I thought of this change since someone complained about the
> characters being grey and not quite human might further negative
> steryotypes due to what people already think of the disabled. I hadn't
> really thought of it that way.
> 
> 
> Anyway, what do other readers think?
> 
> Helene
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