[stylist] Need feedback. Do you find yourself absorbed in this?

[LoriStay at aol.com]

 In a sense, it's the Cinderella story, though Pessi seems intent on making 
herself Cinderella rather than others imposing it on her.   Chavy makes an 
interesting Fairy Godmother.
Lori
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> On 30/10/2009, Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
> > Here's a sample chapter from my novel, "The Letter."  I need to know if 
> the
> > reader finds themselves becoming absorbed in it.  Can you identify a 
> hook in
> > it?  Thanks!  Judith
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