[stylist] Trials of an honorary Dragon chapter 30 (Last chapter) Please comment.

[helene ryles]

Lori:
I am going through the whole thing again in order to match things up.
After that I'll leave it and go on to writing the sequal.

I do apreciate critism, but I want a break now I've finished the whole
thing, so I can get on and write the sequal. Since I find this aspect
of writing very stressful.
When the sequal has been written I'll go back and revise what I've
written and aproach publishers to see if any of them are  interested.

Helene