[stylist] Change of Narrator for chapter 30?

[Barbara Hammel]

I'm not so sure that you need to go to all that trouble.  Just put a little 
closure to it.  I think it was Lori who suggested you just have Liza hold 
Nadia's hand for comfort.  Don't leave the people all on their own.  When 
they're all left standing apart in their physical beings and their thoughts, 
you leave us frustrated because instead of leaving us at the edge of that 
cliff, we have begun to fall off it.  You've propelled us over because you 
didn't put out that restraining hand to stop us.  You want us to wait at the 
edge for what comes next not jump into the abyss where there isn't even a 
next book yet.
Barbara

Snow is God's way of reminding us that beauty can be found even in the 
coldest hearts.

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From: "helene ryles" <dreamavdb at googlemail.com>
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Subject: [stylist] Change of Narrator for chapter 30?

> I'm thinking of rewriting chapter 30 from Fiona's perspective as she
> would know more then Liza or Nadia. What do other readers think about
> this idea?
>
> Helene
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