[stylist] Plot input.

[Judith Bron]

Allen, This makes no sense.  Even for a fantasy.  If a person has a bad 
heart making it medically necessary to have a heart transplant, they are not 
going to replace the heart with a defective heart.  If I were you I'd go 
back to the drawing board.
Judith Bron
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From: "Robert Newman" <newmanrl at cox.net>
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Sent: Monday, August 31, 2009 10:35 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] Plot input.


> In this day of transplants, this plot looks plausible. So I'd try it. (The
> real test comes in developing the right title for this scenario- like-
> "trading Hearts" or "I Beat for You" or "My Heart for Yours" or  ???; not
> trying to be strictly funny but a title is an eye and mind catcher. Any
> other suggestions for the title?
>
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> Robert Leslie Newman
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> -----Original Message-----
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> Behalf Of Alan
> Sent: Monday, August 31, 2009 4:48 AM
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> Subject: [stylist] Plot input.
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> I have an idea for a short story I want to write, but I want input on the
> strength of the overall idea.  Is it plausible, or am I asking the reader 
> to
> suspend disbelief too much?
>
> Here's the idea, a couple (I haven't determined married or just lovers) is
> struggling with communicating with and understanding each other.  In a
> strange twist of fate, one (or both) have a heart condition that allows 
> them
> to participate in an experimental surgery to literally swap hearts.  The
> procedure is a success, but as they go the recovery from the surgery, they
> disover that they now more deeply understand each other.  Granted, yes, I
> know, something of a fairy tale, but isn't that what some literature is
> meant to be?
>
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