[stylist] A deafblind girl (chapter 1)

LoriStay at aol.com LoriStay at aol.com
Mon Sep 7 19:14:38 UTC 2009


i hope you will send the rest, Helene.   I like your beginning.
By the way, talking about words that sound alike, here are two:   fir and 
fur
fir (f i r ) refers to the tree
fur (f u r) refers to the animal coat.
Lori
In a message dated 9/5/09 4:09:11 PM, qobells at roadrunner.com writes:


> Hi Helene, You can send me the chapters offlist or to the group whichever
> you prefer and if anyone wants to chime in that's what we're here for. A
> long fir coat is fine if the weather calls for it or if you have a strange
> character. The woman sounds pretty strange. A fir collar is fine you could
> just say a jacket with a fir collar.
> S
> 




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