[stylist] List of characters in DBG

[Judith Bron]

Having two names that sound so much alike they can be confused with each 
other is a problem.  Try changing the name of one to a name that is totally 
different than other names in the book.  Judith
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From: "Barbara Hammel" <poetlori8 at msn.com>
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> What I'm confused about is one time Ariel was Ariella so I thought that 
> was two different people.  I think you first refer to her as Ariella and 
> then when she's mentioned in the last chapter you called her Ariel.
> Barbara
>
> If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care:  of whom 
> you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.
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>> List of characters:
>> Main characters:
>> Liza Bronze
>> Nadia Bronze
>>
>> Other characters:
>> The Slyrake family:
>> Beria Slyrake: Liza's aunt. Also head of police.
>> Arielle Parvesh (maiden name Slyrake): Liza's other aunt.
>> Synder Slyrake: Liza's father.
>> Mona Slyrake: Liza's mother.
>> Monika Slyrake: Liza's sister.
>> Madrella Murat (maiden name Slyrake): Liza's half sister.
>> Nadia's mother.
>> Zaina, Zahira, and Zakia: Nadia's triplet sisters. Zakia is the one who 
>> dies.
>> Mia: Nadia's eldest sister who dies soon after birth.
>> Liza also has 3 other sisters who dies soona after birth in mysterious
>> cercumstances. Although Liza suspects Madrella we don't get to find
>> out until the last chapter who killed them.
>>
>> Parvesh Clan:
>> Katrina Parvesh: Liza's body guard.
>> Vinny Parvesh: Arielle's ex husband
>> Pyre Parvesh: Arielle's eldest son
>> Pluto Parvesh: Ariell's middle son
>> sunniva Parvesh: Arielle's daughter.
>>
>> Dragons:
>> Talmon Bronze: Liza's dragon.
>> Julius Darth: Beria's dragon master. The one with a taste for human legs.
>> Kan Darth: Female dragon with artistic tendancies.
>> Van Bronze: A Vegan dragon.
>> Excellus Darth: The leader of Darthrilia.
>>
>> Other characters:
>> Mr Murat: Nadia's father and Madrella's second husband.
>> Fiona the fader: Witch who saves Nadia.
>> Shania Krum: Liza's Nanny.
>> Wendy Krum: school friend of Parvesh children.
>> P.C. Rickshaw: One of Liza's colleagues who is also hard of hearing.
>>
>> I hope this list of characters helps. I can't really go into any more
>> detail about the relivance of any of these characters without giving
>> the plot away. You will just have to find out when they crop up.
>>
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