[stylist] Too much dialog?

[Justin Williams]

Make sure that your sentences are more compound, and ensure that your
characters don't say things or repeat them  in circles.  Don't take a whole
paragraph to say one thing.  You don't know you are doing it until you read
and reread your writing over and over again, then have someone else do it.
Don't cut things too short so that you leave out important details, but
don't overdo the details either.  


-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of ben micek
Sent: Thursday, September 17, 2009 9:23 PM
To: stylist at nfbnet.org
Subject: [stylist] Too much dialog?

Is there such a thing as too much dialog ? If so how can this be fixed?
 		 	   		  
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