[stylist] Too much dialog?

[Barbara Hammel]

But what if, in the dialogue, you do put some discriptions of what the 
characters are doing or looking at?
Barbara

If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care:  of whom 
you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.

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From: <LoriStay at aol.com>
Sent: Friday, September 18, 2009 7:54 AM
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Subject: Re: [stylist] Too much dialog?

> I've been told my stuff has too much at times.   A play also has a 
> setting,
> which is implied description, and actions, which are implied non dialog
> text.
> Lori
> In a message dated 9/17/09 9:49:30 PM, poetlori8 at msn.com writes:
>
>
>> I am not sure there issuch a thing as too much dialog. Isn't that
>> essentially what a play is?
>>
>
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