[stylist] FLM Chapter 3 for your consideration

[Shelley J. Alongi]

Lori, Thanks for the suggestions on Glen's tearfulness. He did also have two 
ns in his name I fixed it thanks a bunch.
Shelley J. Alongi
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updated September 13, 2009
----- Original Message ----- 
From: <LoriStay at aol.com>
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Tuesday, September 22, 2009 9:18 AM
Subject: Re: [stylist] FLM Chapter 3 for your consideration


> As to the spelling of Glen--when I made the comment I thought I remembered
> seeing it before with two n's, but wasn't sure.   Doesn't hurt to check
> though.
> I am enjoying the story other than my doubts that he would cry so often.
> Sometimes if a man cries once, it has more effect than if he is tearful 
> all
> the time.
> Lori
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