[stylist] Joy Ride-a quck look at my road trip
KajunCutie926 at aol.com
KajunCutie926 at aol.com
Tue Jun 29 01:54:58 UTC 2010
Thank you Lori...my granddaughter told me when I read it to her that I
only had to look at her once ... not quite but I'll let her think it for
awhile
In a message dated 6/28/2010 8:49:54 P.M. Central Daylight Time,
loristay at aol.com writes:
Nicely done, Myrna.
Lori
On Jun 28, 2010, at 5:11:08 PM, KajunCutie926 at aol.com wrote:
From: KajunCutie926 at aol.com
Subject: [stylist] Joy Ride-a quck look at my road trip
Date: June 28, 2010 5:11:08 PM EDT
To: stylist at nfbnet.org
I think this is my first poet here so I do hope I'm doing it correctly...
I'm still operating on fumes alone I think....and yep I didn't do it right
the first time.. so here goes again...
Since you all gave me the idea to put this to paper last night I decided
to just jot down some quick thoughts... it's meant for fun mostly and will
likely be one of those things that I keep for my enjoyment and memory
only... I do not write much else but poetry so this is a stretch and a
very rough
and rusty one at that..
Myrna
Joy Ride
It began on a Monday. "Of course, it would be a Monday," I mumbled as I
crawled into the backseat of a very comfortable car just after midnight,
knowing that 'comfortable' was really relative to the length of the ride.
After about an hour of the expected twelve hour trip I understood the
truth of
this knowledge and actually considered kicking myself a good swift one in
the posterior for even considering the journey... but realized immediately
that not only was there not enough room for the maneuver, I likely would
not have been able to move either knee to accomplish it anyway. They were
already suffering from 'bent knee' syndrome.
My grandchildren, ages thirteen and eight, shared my cocoon of torture but
were snoozing blissfully which was a good thing I suppose. I found myself
looking forward to our first scheduled pit stop with the enthusiasm I once
thought was only warranted for those very special occasions... and quickly
moved this moment to the top of that special list.
I looked over at the snoozers and prayed their nap would be lengthy and
attempted to find my own little cranny in the cocoon. I popped on my
earphones hoping my chosen audio book would help to temper my discomfort
and allow
time to pass more quickly. In a matter of minutes I again thought of that
posterior kick upon realizing that I had picked the most boring book in my
collection. Another truth of life revealed... boredom does not lend itself
to instant snooze as you might believe. Instead I found myself drumming
my fingers on a knee that was already in pain. Another truth... drumming
fingers does not equal therapeutic massage.
Oh, the joys of travel!
Pit stop!!! Three hours down and nine more to go! Horrors! Would the
snoozers be awakened? Well, of course, they would be! Good thing, I had to
admit. A wet cocoon would not be on my wish list of good things.
On our way again... and the snoozers do go back to snoozing. I lifted my
eyes skyward and mouthed a heartfelt 'thank you' to any divine entity
responsible. Telling myself I must get some sleep because daylight will
come
and the snoozers will awaken, I settled back to enjoy my boring choice of
reading material and smiled at my silent grumpiness. I was actually quite
proud of myself. Only nine hours to go. Oh joy....
Another pit stop!! Again I murmured a 'thank you' to anyone who might be
listening but for a different reason and heard my son-in-law chuckle,
asking if I had enjoyed my nap. Whoa... I really had napped! Daylight had
arrived and the snoozers had awakened.... and now only six hours to go!
The journey continued and another truth was revealed. I never once chided
my daughter or son-in-law for their apparent bending of speed limit rules.
The thought did cross my mind but my knee threatened to make it possible
for that posterior attention I contemplated earlier to become a reality.
Enough motivation to zip my lip and leave the driving to the 'experts'. I
nearly choked on that thought but my knee spoke up again and...yes, I
listened.
I really was looking forward to this trip and I told myself that as the
miles crawled by in endless monotony. I was going to be visiting family
living in the foothills of the Ozarks while the experts and snoozers were
going
on to enjoy a theme park and have their first fun vacation in a couple of
years. So it was all good... except, of course, for the road trip and two
very talkative knees. After several more pit stops and even a brief doze
or two we arrived! After a short visit filled with many hugs and much
laughter, my fellow travelers continued on to their final pit stop and I
settled
in for a few days of quiet and relaxation. I think I even heard a sigh of
relief escape from knees in dire need of space and a long soak in a tub.
The next few days were spent simply enjoying... I love my bayou home but I
must admit that the mountains draw me with their own charm. The scent of
air filled with its unique blend of nature's best and worst, the feel of a
mountain morning, cool breeze on skin, the music of a feathered concerto,
welcoming in off-key renditions of familiar songs, the echo of life that
comes from the earth and sky, and the peace that settles upon me at
sunset...all have made my visits here special memories. No doubt I would
add a few
more and I did.
Time does not stand still, however, and the day came when we must journey
home. It was mid-morning and after tearful goodbyes and more of those
family hugs, I again crawled into that comfortable car, the cocoon of
torture....twelve hours and counting I thought. Yes, the joys of
travel.... The
knees only groaned!
I soon learned that these twelve hours would be spent a bit differently
than those spent on the first round. The snoozers would not be snoozing
and
the pit stops would likely be more frequent. I also learned a few more of
life's truths and some gave me much pleasure in the discovery. I learned
that I still possessed the ability to give children that 'look'. It is
tempered a bit with grandmothers' gray but the effect is still the same. I
learned that patience is indeed a virtue. I did already know this but a
refresher course is never a bad thing, is it? I also learned that though
knees
can forgive, they do not forget and likely I will be reminded of my road
trip for some time to come. I do not fear the swift kick though because
even
they realize the attempt would be futile really. Finally, I learned that
growing older means accepting life as it comes, both good and bad, but
always embracing the living and breathing of every moment. Again,
something I
knew but the reminder is always nice.
Oh, the joys of travel... and the joy of coming home!
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