[stylist] who checks the details?

[Shelley J. Alongi]

Hey guys just chiming in on this a little late. When rereading my railroad 
story with Glen I noticed that in some places he had a beard and in some 
places he didn't. Now I have to decide whether he does or doesn't. Funny how 
things just slip by us that's why we have editors.
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updated November 1, 2009
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
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Sent: Thursday, March 18, 2010 8:26 AM
Subject: Re: [stylist] who checks the details?


I was just reading a mystery in which the writer messed up and subbed the 
detective's name for the person who had done the crime. I understand how it 
could happen, which is why a proofreader is a necessity. Editors in 
publishing houses can miss things too, though.
One of my friends sent me a story she wrote in which some people during the 
depression played Scrabble. The time period seemed wrong to me, so I got out 
my scrabble board, and sure enough, it was patented far later than her story 
took place. She gave me a hard time about it, saying, "Who would notice 
this? It doesn't matter." I told her it did, so she switched the game to 
Monopoly. I don't have a Monopoly board, but I think we checked it on the 
Net and that game was okay. She had also introduced Barbie dolls way too 
early. If I noticed it, probably a publishing house editor might also. But 
if not, her readers surely would.
Lori

On Mar 18, 2010, at 10:43:18 AM, "Donna Hill" <penatwork at epix.net> wrote:

From:   "Donna Hill" <penatwork at epix.net>
Subject:    Re: [stylist] who checks the details?
Date:   March 18, 2010 10:43:18 AM EDT
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Hi Barbara,
Aren't they done by volunteers? I'm sure a blind friend of mine told me
she was scanning in books for Bookshare and got a break on her annual
membership for it.
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Barbara Hammel wrote:
> I downloaded a book from bookshare the other day and as I was reading, I 
> found some glaring inconsistencies in facts in the book. Once before I 
> read a book that changed someone's hair color once. Who checks those kinds 
> of things? Do they still read the books thoroughly before sending them to 
> press? I'm just curious because that looks bad for the author when someone 
> lets things slip that you miss.
> Barbara
>
> A Congress that will always do its work in the dark must have something to 
> hide. The people have spoken, yet they do not listen.
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