[stylist] chapter one

[Judith Bron]

Isn't this a comma splice?  I made the change, but have this question.

Jennifer allowed her thoughts to return to that dark corridor and all 
inclusive feeling of love, a feeling she never had before.
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Monday, May 24, 2010 3:17 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] chapter one


I guess you missed it. I did quote it in the message. See below. It needs a 
comma, doesn't have one, though. You put a period instead, but shouldn't 
have.
Lori
On May 24, 2010, at 3:00:52 PM, "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:


Jennifer allowed her thoughts to return to that dark corridor and all
inclusive feeling of love. A feeling she never had before.
_________________________________
_______________________________________________
Writers Division web site:
http://www.nfb-writers-division.org <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>

stylist mailing list
stylist at nfbnet.org
http://www.nfbnet.org/mailman/listinfo/stylist_nfbnet.org
To unsubscribe, change your list options or get your account info for 
stylist:
http://www.nfbnet.org/mailman/options/stylist_nfbnet.org/jbron%40optonline.net