[stylist] synopsis

[Judith Bron]

Bridget, I revised it the other day down to one page.  I think it reads 
really well and doesn't give anything the reader doesn't need to evaluate 
the book.  Thanks!  Judith
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Bridgit Pollpeter" <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Tuesday, November 16, 2010 3:00 PM
Subject: [stylist] synopsis


> Judith,
>
> I just think you need to get to the point sooner.  You are providing a
> lot of really good and valuable info, but I think it is too much for a
> synopsis.  Just cut to the chase, give us the heart of the story.
>
> Bridgit
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