[stylist] Nonfiction novel
Bridgit Pollpeter
bpollpeter at hotmail.com
Thu Oct 21 19:51:28 UTC 2010
David,
If you are writing about yourself it is an autobiography. A biography
is when you write about another person.
I think we all have a unique perspective to bring and it does not matter
if you are published or not or how much you have written. We all know
what we like and what we don't like, the technical stuff comes with
practice.
Any writer, any good writer, takes all suggestions and criticisms and
learns. No matter what a writers intention is, if a majority of readers
are not picking up on things or make similar comments, a writer probably
needs to revise.
Don't hesitate to be honest and open here. We are all here to learn and
grow and support. A part of that support is providing our honest
opinion.
It would be nice to read a portion of your autobio. Good luck with it.
Bridgit
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 13:53:01 -0500
From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
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Bill,
Creative nonfiction and historical fiction are two different things. HF
relies on factual, historical info, but usually the main characters are
fictional or a writer creates fictional situations around a historical
figure.
CNF is nonfiction (usually memoir or essay) but really any type of NF
can incorporate the creative side of NF. Priscilla, who is on the list,
is a beautiful CNF writer, but other notable CNF writers are Annie
Dillard, Joan Didion, David Sedaris.
At times there is a fine line between creative nonfiction and historical
fiction, but CNF maintains the story is all true whereas HF maintains it
is a fictionalized account of a time in history.
CNF takes true stories and experiences and uses scene development,
dialogue, lyrical language or other fictional techniques to create a
story.
Sorry guys, I'm just really bored at the moment! *smile*
Bridgit
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 04:29:40 -0400
From: "Bill Outman" <woutman at earthlink.net>
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That's more or less what I'm planning. Yes it's fictional in that it
takes place around 2020 for the launch of the European major leagues. It
is historically rooted however in that will discusses some actual
history and develops from the French commissioner's having taken an
interest in baseball while here in North America in the '70's and '80's
before developing otherr business interests after going back to his
native land.
It works out that this commissioner is about my age, I'll be 46 in
December and I have him born a few weeks after me. This allows me to
partially build him through reflections on my own thoughts, feelings and
attitudes as they are with some conjecture on how they might have been
in different circumstances.
So creative non-fiction/historical novel is probably the correct genre
categorization.
Bill Outman
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Bill,
Your baseball book sounds interesting. Will it be fiction then? I
gather since you want to create a Braille descendent that it will be
fiction, but have you considered incorporating non-fiction with
fictional elements and make it creative non-fiction? Just a thought,
and you could still use fictional characters. Nonetheless, it sounds
interesting.
Good luck.
Robert,
I think it is perfect to develop a curriculum, of sorts, for Chapters
and groups to use as a guide for discussions. Even Federation veterans
can use assistance when attempting to lead a planned discussion. It is
always nice to have a source to reference.
It also helps provide a written understanding of our philosophy which
helps to set a standard across the board. It's kind of like trying
teach math with all different kinds of perspectives. I'm all for
creativity and thinking outside the box, but some things require a
uniformity so we don't break into different factions. Hmm... much like
the Church.
Bridgit
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:36:05 -0700
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Joe,
Thanks, there are so many to choose from and I'll go read up on this
one. The one's that I have read up on seem to have added costs in all
their
packages. I understand that there are differences in book style, grade
of
paper...
Making this choice will be almost as difficult as the writing of my
biography.
David
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> Try iUniverse. They're good if you keep them in line about what it is
> you're willing to spend.
>
> Joe
>
> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
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> Hello Everyone,
>
> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
> novel I'd like to
> make the right choice.
>
> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
> advantages of distribution.
> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>
> Thanks,
>
> David Wermuth
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:45:07 -0700
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Thanks Brad,
This also gives me more information and they have other products I have
been
looking for.David
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>I only know of my cartoonist friend who used the below. But they seem
>very
>fast, and do a nice job.
>
> http://www.lulu.com/
>
> Brad
>
> At 01:51 PM 10/20/2010, you wrote:
>>Hello Everyone,
>>
>>I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>>many to
>>choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction novel I'd
like
>>to make the right choice.
>>
>>Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>>advantages of distribution. and or company's that don't shy away from
>>first time author's.
>>
>>Thanks,
>>
>>David Wermuth
>>dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:54:49 -0700
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Donna,
Thanks for the resources. I will read, "Getting Your Book Published For
Dummies"
I appreciate all the advice in this "mind numbing process", this is
truly a
challenge in itself.
David
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> Hi David,
> Congratulations for getting this far in the process! There are many
> things
> to think about with self-publishing, and unless you already have done
so,
> I would advise reading "Getting Your Book Published for Dummies" which
is
> available as digital download and cassette from NLS or some other book
> about how the publishing industry works.
>
> I think that I Universe still makes you sign an exclusive contract,
> whereas Amazon, for instance, doesn't. I'm in the midst of
researching
> this for my novel and it is a mind-numbing process. The other thing
you
> need to keep in mind is that the writer, regardless of whether it's
> self-published or picked up by a publisher, is nowadays responsible
for
> more and more of the promotions. I recently bought an accessible
e-book
> called "Purple Snowflake Marketing" by Dave and Lillian Brummit, which
is
> a great resource.
>
> BTW, what's a nonfiction novel?
>
> Donna Hill
>
> Read Donna's articles on
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>
> On 10/20/2010 2:51 PM, davidw wrote:
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>> many
>> to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction novel
I'd
>> like to make the right choice.
>>
>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>> advantages of distribution. and or company's that don't shy away from
>> first time author's.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> David Wermuth
>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>
>>
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 02:15:48 -0700
From: "davidw" <dwermuth1 at earthlink.net>
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Joe and Donna,
I agree with you Joe, book marketing would be a topic most of us would
like
to learn more about.
David
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> Donna,
>
> Thanks for the book mention. I'm going to definitely check it out.
From
> what I've been gathering, even authors who get picked up by major
> publishers
> wind up doing and paying for their own marketing in the current
economy,
> which makes me want to do a cost comparison. I hope folks with more
> information on book marketing will chime in, as this would be an
important
> point of discussion for self-publishing.
>
> Joe
>
> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
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> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam Ewing
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Donna Hill
> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 4:14 PM
> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
> Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
>
> Hi David,
> Congratulations for getting this far in the process! There are many
> things to think about with self-publishing, and unless you already
have
> done so, I would advise reading "Getting Your Book Published for
> Dummies" which is available as digital download and cassette
> from NLS or
> some other book about how the publishing industry works.
>
> I think that I Universe still makes you sign an exclusive contract,
> whereas Amazon, for instance, doesn't. I'm in the midst of
researching
> this for my novel and it is a mind-numbing process. The other thing
you
> need to keep in mind is that the writer, regardless of whether it's
> self-published or picked up by a publisher, is nowadays responsible
for
> more and more of the promotions. I recently bought an accessible
e-book
> called "Purple Snowflake Marketing" by Dave and Lillian Brummit, which
> is a great resource.
>
> BTW, what's a nonfiction novel?
>
> Donna Hill
>
> Read Donna's articles on
> Suite 101:
> www.suite101.com/profile.cfm/donna_hill
> Ezine Articles:
> http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=D._W._Hill
> American Chronicle:
> www.americanchronicle.com/authors/view/3885
>
> Connect with Donna on
> Twitter:
> www.twitter.com/dewhill
> LinkedIn:
> www.linkedin.com/in/dwh99
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>
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>
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> Donna is Head of Media Relations for the nonprofit
> Performing Arts Division of the National Federation of the Blind:
> www.padnfb.org
>
>
> On 10/20/2010 2:51 PM, davidw wrote:
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>> novel I'd like to make the right choice.
>>
>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>> advantages of distribution.
>> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> David Wermuth
>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>
>>
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 04:28:30 -0500
From: "Robert Leslie Newman" <newmanrl at cox.net>
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Subject: [stylist] monthly Telephone Meeting Reminder- October 24th
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Dear Division Members and guests (If you are not a member, please do
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us, we will all benefit)
RE: This month's telephone gathering! Sunday October 24th and it will be
super great! (Below, Read about our guest, Patricia , review the
questions
that we sent her, think up new info you need and check the times and
numbers
to do your call-in.)
--The guest speaker for the October conference call for the Writers'
Division will be Patricia Foster. Her online biograph reads:
"Patricia Foster is the author of two books of nonfiction and the editor
of
three anthologies of nonfiction prose. Just beneath My Skin (University
of
Georgia Press, 2004), her latest book, is a collection of essays that
explores autobiography as a means of creative self-examination. Kirkus
Review (starred) called it "perceptive, thoughtful - and
thought-provoking -
with abundant moments of insight," whereas the American Library
Association
noted that "although writers can feel alone and alienated, Foster seems
to
have found a place of redemption, where she is at home living beyond the
ordinary, which, in turn, infuses her writing with its notable
lyricism."
Four essays in this collection were named Notable Essays by Robert Atwan
(Best American Essays) while "A Second Look" won the Mary Roberts
Rinehart
Award for nonfiction.
Patricia Foster began her book publishing career with the anthology
Minding
the Body: Women Writers on Body and Soul (Anchor/Doubleday, 1994), a
book
translated into German, Dutch and Portuguese, chosen as a QPB Paperback
selection, and performed as a play by the Tampa Bay Performing Arts
Center.
Sister to Sister (Anchor/Doubleday, 1996), The Healing Circle co-edited
with
Mary Swander (Dutton, 1998), and a memoir, All the Lost Girls
(University of
Alabama, 2000), winner of the PEN/Jerard Fund Award for Women's
Nonfiction,
all continued her interest in narrative nonfiction.
In addition to personal essays, Patricia Foster is a writer of fiction
and a
graduate of the Iowa Writers' Workshop. She has published both fiction
and
nonfiction in such literary quarterlies as the Gettysburg Review,
Virginia
Quarterly Review, Iowa Review, Shenandoah, Prairie Schooner and Fourth
Genre. She won a Lake Effect Fiction Award, a Florida Arts Council
Award, a
Yaddo residency, four Alabama Arts & Humanities Awards, and a Dean's
Scholar
Award (University of Iowa). In 2003, she was an exchange professor at
Paul
Valery University in Montpellier, France.
In addition to her MFA in fiction, Patricia has an MFA in art (UCLA) and
a
Ph.D. in women's literature and creative writing (Florida State
University)."
--Priscilla McKinley sent your questions on writing and publishing to
Patricia, who will address those questions, as well as other questions,
meeting. And I have pasted those questions in below:
Suggestions - Interest for Discussion
For Guest Speaker
1. I would love to learn about writing autobiographical essays. I find
that
writing about myself is the hardest thing to do, and would love tips on
how
to do it.
Jewel
2. How about having the instructor give "common mistakes" writers make.
That could be like a list of 3, or maybe 5. I'm thinking about mistakes
writers make who fall into the beginner, or maybe unpublished, category.
Bob
3.
First--punctuation around quotation marks. I do a lot of technical
writing
for work, so grammar is not that much of a problem. It's just that you
don't use quote marks much in technical writing; so I never got the hang
of
the grammar.
Research--tips on doing research for stories would be helpful.
Shawn
4. I think it is always important to stress possessing knowledge of
style
and structure. Even though writers often rely on editors, we still need
to
have some level of knowledge when it comes to this stuff. I don't
pretend
to be an expert when it comes to grammar and all that, but you would not
believe how awful some peoples grammar is when I am editing for the
newsletter. And these are intelligent people. Also, I think it is
beneficial to have some forum where our work can be work shopped.
Whether
it is a classroom, online or community peer group, it is important to
have
that feedback and criticism. Maybe, too, pointing out the benefits to
studying your craft. Whether it is a traditional method like I have
chosen
or self-study or joining a community type class, studying writing can
only
make us better writers.
Bridget
5. I'd want to ask questions about marketing: Where do you research
magazine publications, and what do you look for?
What journals take articles about writing?
What websites do people use?
Are they the same ones we use?
What about market directories--should we even be looking at them any
more?
Should you publish first in your own region or State?
What books on writing do you recommend?
Thanks for the opportunity.
Nan
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 07:17:09 -0500
From: "Robert Leslie Newman" <newmanrl at cox.net>
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Subject: [stylist] self publishing and marketing
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A very good topic --- think someone here could find an expert to talk to
us
about it? (Let's ask Patricia, during our Sunday evening telephone
gathering. (Info here, written out would also be good.)
-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of davidw
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2010 4:16 AM
To: jsorozco at gmail.com; Writer's Division Mailing List
Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
Joe and Donna,
I agree with you Joe, book marketing would be a topic most of us would
like
to learn more about.
David
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Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 2:14 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
> Donna,
>
> Thanks for the book mention. I'm going to definitely check it out.
From
> what I've been gathering, even authors who get picked up by major
> publishers
> wind up doing and paying for their own marketing in the current
economy,
> which makes me want to do a cost comparison. I hope folks with more
> information on book marketing will chime in, as this would be an
important
> point of discussion for self-publishing.
>
> Joe
>
> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
sleeves,
> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam Ewing
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Donna Hill
> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 4:14 PM
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>
> Hi David,
> Congratulations for getting this far in the process! There are many
> things to think about with self-publishing, and unless you already
have
> done so, I would advise reading "Getting Your Book Published for
> Dummies" which is available as digital download and cassette
> from NLS or
> some other book about how the publishing industry works.
>
> I think that I Universe still makes you sign an exclusive contract,
> whereas Amazon, for instance, doesn't. I'm in the midst of
researching
> this for my novel and it is a mind-numbing process. The other thing
you
> need to keep in mind is that the writer, regardless of whether it's
> self-published or picked up by a publisher, is nowadays responsible
for
> more and more of the promotions. I recently bought an accessible
e-book
> called "Purple Snowflake Marketing" by Dave and Lillian Brummit, which
> is a great resource.
>
> BTW, what's a nonfiction novel?
>
> Donna Hill
>
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> On 10/20/2010 2:51 PM, davidw wrote:
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>> novel I'd like to make the right choice.
>>
>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>> advantages of distribution.
>> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> David Wermuth
>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>
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Message: 8
Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 12:49:44 -0400
From: Donna Hill <penatwork at epix.net>
To: stylist at nfbnet.org
Subject: [stylist] Excellent article by our Lori Stayer
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Hi Friends,
Not sure if anyone posted this, and I didn't notice it before we left on
vacation. Lori Stayer wrote an article about blind beader Laurie Porter
(Wisconsin) for NFB's Krafters Division's Featured Member section. Among
other things, it's yet another plug for the many uses of Braille.
Check it out at:
http://www.krafterskorner.org/
Nice job, Lori!
Donna Hill
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Message: 2
Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 15:19:16 -0400
From: Marieanna Pape <mpape16 at cox.net>
To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
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Hi, I am in the same situation with my first novel. I have read several
articles about authorhouse.com and iuniverse.com
If I decide to self-publish, I will go with one of them. They have
helpful
websites which stae their editors will work with the author. When I read
the articles, the cost was between $500 and $700 whch the authors say
they
earned back and much more.
I hope that has been helpful.
Marieanna PapeAt 11:51 AM 10/20/2010 -0700, you wrote:
>Hello Everyone,
>
>I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so many
to
>choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction novel I'd
like
>to make the right choice.
>
>Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>advantages of distribution.
>and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>
>Thanks,
>
>David Wermuth
>dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>
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Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 12:26:07 -0700
From: "davidw" <dwermuth1 at earthlink.net>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Subject: Re: [stylist] Nonfiction novel
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Bridgit,
I have written my story from birth until present about myself.
I was sitting at my computer around two years ago and started writing
about
an event in my life. It started out about ten pages and it just
continued
into twenty. I stopped writing for a month or so and went back to it
later.
I then added on to it and broke it into two chapters.
I then wrote a chapter following these chapters. Before I knew it I
wrote
out a table of contents and started from birth filling in chapters along
the
way.
I have at times stopped for months and started up again.
This has been a two year process and now I am at present day. I have
reached the point in my life that fits a good ending for the book, time
to
end it.
I have included every aspect of my life all truth and although parts are
sad
I have added humor, emotion, spirituality, and basically the road in
life I
have taken to this point.
I have close to three hundred pages by word count and hope to be able to
include a few photos.
I want to start with paper back printing at first and if $'s allow me to
print hard copies as well.
I have yet to research e-commerce for people to read it by downloading,
one step at a time.
I have allowed a few people in my circle of friends and one Author to
read
it and if I listen to them they say it is a fantastic read. Two people
have
told me they stayed up half the night just to finish it as they couldn't
put
it down.
I will also give credit in my book to this list for all the advice and
support I have received here.
I don't always know an Authors words nor do I have the experience to
give
advice on some of your topics but I am learning and with luck and hard
work
I'll be able to contribute more in the future.
Thank You everyone,
David Wermuth
----- Original Message -----
From: "Bridgit Pollpeter" <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2010 11:43 AM
Subject: [stylist] Nonfiction novel
> David,
>
> Who are you writing about?
>
> By fictional elements, I mean scene development and use of dialogue
and
> even some more experimental stuff like including dreams or conjecture,
> etc.
>
> Most novels are what, 200 pages? Maybe 100 to 150 is more novella?
> Regardless, novel-length is just longer than a few pages. Perhaps
book
> length is the better way to put it.
>
> Bridgit
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> Message: 1
> Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:26:18 -0700
> From: "davidw" <dwermuth1 at earthlink.net>
> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
> Subject: Re: [stylist] Non-fiction novels
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> Bridgit,
>
> Thanks I am certainly learning from all the posts I have been reading.
>
> I should have called it my non fiction biography.
>
> It is truly non fiction with no fictional elements.
>
> Novel length? I'm not sure what page or word count would constitute
the
>
> change from book to novel?
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Bridgit Pollpeter" <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
> To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 8:48 PM
> Subject: [stylist] Non-fiction novels
>
>
>>A nonfiction novel is just a nonfiction work that is novel length, but
>
>>often it is more creative nonfiction (memoir, personal essay, etc)
>>incorporating fictional elements or techniques as opposed to a
>>biography or academic nonfiction.
>>
>> Bridgit
>>
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>> 1. Self Publishing (davidw)
>> 2. Re: Self Publishing (Joe Orozco)
>> 3. Re: Self Publishing (BDM)
>> 4. Shameless Plug (Joe Orozco)
>> 5. Re: Shameless Plug (Judith Bron)
>> 6. Re: Shameless Plug (Joe Orozco)
>> 7. Re: Shameless Plug (Donna Hill)
>> 8. Re: Shameless Plug (Judith Bron)
>> 9. Re: Self Publishing (Donna Hill)
>> 10. Re: Shameless Plug (Anita Adkins)
>> 11. Re: Shameless Plug (BDM)
>> 12. synopsis (Bridgit Pollpeter)
>> 13. Re: Self Publishing (Joe Orozco)
>> 14. Changes plot synopsis (Bridgit Pollpeter)
>>
>>
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>> Message: 1
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 11:51:12 -0700
>> From: "davidw" <dwermuth1 at earthlink.net>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] Self Publishing
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>>
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>> novel I'd like to
>> make the right choice.
>>
>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>> advantages of distribution.
>> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> David Wermuth
>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 2
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 14:55:51 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
>> Message-ID: <43C9B12D4E5F4797BEB081DAEDEEC4FD at Rufus>
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>>
>> Try iUniverse. They're good if you keep them in line about what it
is
>
>> you're willing to spend.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org]
>> On Behalf Of davidw
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 2:51 PM
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: [stylist] Self Publishing
>>
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>> novel I'd like to
>> make the right choice.
>>
>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>> advantages of distribution.
>> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> David Wermuth
>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>
>>
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>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 14:39:33 -0500
>> From: BDM <lists at braddunsemusic.com>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
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>> I only know of my cartoonist friend who used the below. But they seem
>> very fast, and do a nice job.
>>
>> http://www.lulu.com/
>>
>> Brad
>>
>> At 01:51 PM 10/20/2010, you wrote:
>>>Hello Everyone,
>>>
>>>I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>>>many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>>>novel I'd like to make the right choice.
>>>
>>>Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>>>advantages of distribution. and or company's that don't shy away from
>>>first time author's.
>>>
>>>Thanks,
>>>
>>>David Wermuth
>>>dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>>
>>>
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>> Message: 4
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 15:41:23 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] Shameless Plug
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>>
>> Hey all,
>>
>> Some of you know I do some freelance writing on the side. I finally
>> put the novel project on hold to wrap up the website, and while I
>> still have some tweaks to make, I think it's now good enough to make
>> something formal of this little business venture. Anyway, check it
>> out. Feel free to provide feedback, and if you or anyone you know
>> could use my service, let me know. I'll cut you a deal if you let me
>> know you're from the Stylist.
>>
>> www.alphacommstrategies.com/
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 5
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 15:55:59 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>> Message-ID: <77A90D036E9F4C389EBCB48AF79A2A19 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=original
>>
>> Joe, I just went there and it looks terriffic! One suggestion that
>> struck me. Don't mention your costs on the site. You would be
better
>
>> off saying,
>> "For a consultation and to discuss cost please..." Here you can put
>> your
>> contact link and/or phone number.
>> I like your non-profit group. Our vets deserve everything we can do
> for
>>
>> them. Good going! Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 3:41 PM
>> Subject: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>
>>
>>> Hey all,
>>>
>>> Some of you know I do some freelance writing on the side. I finally
>>> put the
>>> novel project on hold to wrap up the website, and while I still have
>> some
>>> tweaks to make, I think it's now good enough to make something
formal
>> of
>>> this little business venture. Anyway, check it out. Feel free to
>> provide
>>> feedback, and if you or anyone you know could use my service, let me
>> know.
>>> I'll cut you a deal if you let me know you're from the Stylist.
>>>
>>> www.alphacommstrategies.com/
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
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>>
>>
>>
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>>
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>>
>> Message: 6
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:00:11 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>> Message-ID: <872D8D972BE6444EA4CA73E5F944A29F at Rufus>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Oh, Judith. Just when I'd decided to keep it you go and make me
>> second-guess myself! LOL I think I ultimately left it because I want
>> people to have a starting sense of how much they can expect to invest
>> for the service they request. I'll officially launch it later this
>> week, just thought I'd give fellow writers a chance to critique, but
>> we'll see if including a Fee Schedule kicks me in the butt!
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Judith Bron [mailto:jbron at optonline.net]
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 3:56 PM
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com; Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>
>> Joe, I just went there and it looks terriffic! One suggestion that
>> struck me. Don't mention your costs on the site. You would be
better
>> off saying,
>> "For a consultation and to discuss cost please..." Here you
>> can put your
>> contact link and/or phone number.
>> I like your non-profit group. Our vets deserve everything we
>> can do for
>> them. Good going! Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 3:41 PM
>> Subject: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>
>>
>>> Hey all,
>>>
>>> Some of you know I do some freelance writing on the side. I
>> finally put
>>> the
>>> novel project on hold to wrap up the website, and while I
>> still have some
>>> tweaks to make, I think it's now good enough to make
>> something formal of
>>> this little business venture. Anyway, check it out. Feel
>> free to provide
>>> feedback, and if you or anyone you know could use my service,
>> let me know.
>>> I'll cut you a deal if you let me know you're from the Stylist.
>>>
>>> www.alphacommstrategies.com/
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up
>> their sleeves,
>>> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> Writers Division web site: http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>
>>>
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>>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 7
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:06:03 -0400
>> From: Donna Hill <penatwork at epix.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>> Message-ID: <4CBF4BAB.30901 at epix.net>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Hi Joe,
>> Good going! Unlike Judith, I wouldn't recommend removing your prices.
>> Many people, myself included, get furious when prices aren't easy to
>> find. Making prospective customers contact you for prices may be a
>> strategy for developing a mailing list, but it comes with a cost that
>> is
>>
>> hard to measure.
>> Best,
>> Donna
>>
>> Read Donna's articles on
>> Suite 101:
>> www.suite101.com/profile.cfm/donna_hill
>> Ezine Articles:
>> http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=D._W._Hill
>> American Chronicle: www.americanchronicle.com/authors/view/3885
>>
>> Connect with Donna on
>> Twitter:
>> www.twitter.com/dewhill
>> LinkedIn:
>> www.linkedin.com/in/dwh99
>> FaceBook:
>> www.facebook.com/donna.w.hill.
>>
>> Hear clips from "The Last Straw" at:
>> cdbaby.com/cd/donnahill
>> Apple I-Tunes
>>
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>> 37
>> 4
>>
>> Check out the "Sound in Sight" CD project
>> Donna is Head of Media Relations for the nonprofit
>> Performing Arts Division of the National Federation of the Blind:
>> www.padnfb.org
>>
>>
>> On 10/20/2010 3:41 PM, Joe Orozco wrote:
>>> Hey all,
>>>
>>> Some of you know I do some freelance writing on the side. I finally
>>> put the novel project on hold to wrap up the website, and while I
>>> still have some tweaks to make, I think it's now good enough to make
>>> something formal of this little business venture. Anyway, check it
>>> out. Feel free to provide feedback, and if you or anyone you know
>>> could use my service, let me know. I'll cut you a deal if you let me
>>> know you're from the Stylist.
>>>
>>> www.alphacommstrategies.com/
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> Writers Division web site:
>>>
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>>> r
>>> g/>
>>>
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>> Message: 8
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:10:28 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>> Message-ID: <DD0DC0811A7B4D3999166E421CF0102C at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=original
>>
>> It can work both ways. I just shy away from sites where cost is the
>> first thing that hits me in the face. Go to similar sites and see
>> what they do.
>> I'm not an expert, just a free lance author, PR consultant and
> novelist.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 4:00 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>
>>
>>> Oh, Judith. Just when I'd decided to keep it you go and make me
>>> second-guess myself! LOL I think I ultimately left it because I
want
>
>>> people to have a starting sense of how much they can expect to
invest
>
>>> for the service they request. I'll officially launch it later this
>>> week, just thought I'd give fellow writers a chance to critique, but
>>> we'll see if including a Fee Schedule kicks me in the butt!
>>>
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Judith Bron [mailto:jbron at optonline.net]
>>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 3:56 PM
>>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com; Writer's Division Mailing List
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>>
>>> Joe, I just went there and it looks terriffic! One suggestion that
>>> struck me. Don't mention your costs on the site. You would be
>>> better off saying, "For a consultation and to discuss cost
please..."
>
>>> Here you can put your
>>> contact link and/or phone number.
>>> I like your non-profit group. Our vets deserve everything we
>>> can do for
>>> them. Good going! Judith
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 3:41 PM
>>> Subject: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>>
>>>
>>>> Hey all,
>>>>
>>>> Some of you know I do some freelance writing on the side. I
>>> finally put
>>>> the
>>>> novel project on hold to wrap up the website, and while I
>>> still have some
>>>> tweaks to make, I think it's now good enough to make
>>> something formal of
>>>> this little business venture. Anyway, check it out. Feel
>>> free to provide
>>>> feedback, and if you or anyone you know could use my service,
>>> let me know.
>>>> I'll cut you a deal if you let me know you're from the Stylist.
>>>>
>>>> www.alphacommstrategies.com/
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Joe
>>>>
>>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up
>>> their sleeves,
>>>> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam
Ewing
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>> Writers Division web site: http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>
>>>>
>>>> stylist mailing list
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>>>>
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>>> 0optonline.net
>>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
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>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>
>>>
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>>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 9
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:13:38 -0400
>> From: Donna Hill <penatwork at epix.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
>> Message-ID: <4CBF4D72.3020200 at epix.net>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Hi David,
>> Congratulations for getting this far in the process! There are many
>> things to think about with self-publishing, and unless you already
> have
>> done so, I would advise reading "Getting Your Book Published for
>> Dummies" which is available as digital download and cassette from NLS
> or
>>
>> some other book about how the publishing industry works.
>>
>> I think that I Universe still makes you sign an exclusive contract,
>> whereas Amazon, for instance, doesn't. I'm in the midst of
> researching
>> this for my novel and it is a mind-numbing process. The other thing
> you
>> need to keep in mind is that the writer, regardless of whether it's
>> self-published or picked up by a publisher, is nowadays responsible
> for
>> more and more of the promotions. I recently bought an accessible
> e-book
>> called "Purple Snowflake Marketing" by Dave and Lillian Brummit,
which
>> is a great resource.
>>
>> BTW, what's a nonfiction novel?
>>
>> Donna Hill
>>
>> Read Donna's articles on
>> Suite 101:
>> www.suite101.com/profile.cfm/donna_hill
>> Ezine Articles:
>> http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=D._W._Hill
>> American Chronicle:
>> www.americanchronicle.com/authors/view/3885
>>
>> Connect with Donna on
>> Twitter:
>> www.twitter.com/dewhill
>> LinkedIn:
>> www.linkedin.com/in/dwh99
>> FaceBook:
>> www.facebook.com/donna.w.hill.
>>
>> Hear clips from "The Last Straw" at:
>> cdbaby.com/cd/donnahill
>> Apple I-Tunes
>>
>
phobos.apple.com/WebObjects/MZStore.woa/wa/viewAlbum?playListId=25924437
>> 4
>>
>> Check out the "Sound in Sight" CD project
>> Donna is Head of Media Relations for the nonprofit
>> Performing Arts Division of the National Federation of the Blind:
>> www.padnfb.org
>>
>>
>> On 10/20/2010 2:51 PM, davidw wrote:
>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>
>>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>>> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>>> novel I'd like to make the right choice.
>>>
>>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>>> advantages of distribution.
>>> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> David Wermuth
>>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
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>>> http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>
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>> Message: 10
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:14:16 -0400
>> From: "Anita Adkins" <aadkins7 at verizon.net>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>> Message-ID: <22E4D643F2904CF491F32F6385205EF1 at AnitaAdkinsPC>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=response
>>
>> Great website. I agree to leave the cost. I personally thought of
>> using
>> you for resume and cover letter writing in the future possibly, and I
>> would
>> want to know about what the cost would be rather than just plunging
> in,
>> and
>> so I feel leaving the prices is a beneficial part of the website for
>> customers.
>>
>> Out of curiosity, do you need any volunteers to work for you? I do
>> enjoy
>> writing, and I would be happy to help in some way if I can do
> something
>> you
>> need and if time permits. Thanks. Anita
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Donna Hill" <penatwork at epix.net>
>> To: <jsorozco at gmail.com>; "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 4:06 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>
>>
>>> Hi Joe,
>>> Good going! Unlike Judith, I wouldn't recommend removing your
prices.
>> Many
>>> people, myself included, get furious when prices aren't easy to
find.
>>> Making prospective customers contact you for prices may be a
strategy
>> for
>>> developing a mailing list, but it comes with a cost that is hard to
>>> measure.
>>> Best,
>>> Donna
>>>
>>> Read Donna's articles on
>>> Suite 101:
>>> www.suite101.com/profile.cfm/donna_hill
>>> Ezine Articles:
>>> http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=D._W._Hill
>>> American Chronicle:
>>> www.americanchronicle.com/authors/view/3885
>>>
>>> Connect with Donna on
>>> Twitter:
>>> www.twitter.com/dewhill
>>> LinkedIn:
>>> www.linkedin.com/in/dwh99
>>> FaceBook:
>>> www.facebook.com/donna.w.hill.
>>>
>>> Hear clips from "The Last Straw" at:
>>> cdbaby.com/cd/donnahill
>>> Apple I-Tunes
>>>
>>
>
phobos.apple.com/WebObjects/MZStore.woa/wa/viewAlbum?playListId=25924437
>> 4
>>>
>>> Check out the "Sound in Sight" CD project
>>> Donna is Head of Media Relations for the nonprofit
>>> Performing Arts Division of the National Federation of the Blind:
>>> www.padnfb.org
>>>
>>>
>>> On 10/20/2010 3:41 PM, Joe Orozco wrote:
>>>> Hey all,
>>>>
>>>> Some of you know I do some freelance writing on the side. I
finally
>> put
>>>> the
>>>> novel project on hold to wrap up the website, and while I still
have
>> some
>>>> tweaks to make, I think it's now good enough to make something
> formal
>> of
>>>> this little business venture. Anyway, check it out. Feel free to
>>>> provide
>>>> feedback, and if you or anyone you know could use my service, let
me
>>>> know.
>>>> I'll cut you a deal if you let me know you're from the Stylist.
>>>>
>>>> www.alphacommstrategies.com/
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Joe
>>>>
>>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>>>> sleeves,
>>>> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam
Ewing
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>> Writers Division web site:
>>>>
>>
>
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>>>
>>>>
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>>
>> Message: 11
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 15:42:36 -0500
>> From: BDM <lists at braddunsemusic.com>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com,Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>> Message-ID:
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>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"; format=flowed
>>
>> Joe,
>>
>> Firstly, kudos to a very nice clean web site. It comes off very
>> confident and professional which makes the reader feel similar in a
>> decision to use your service. As for the pricing, posted or call for
>> it, I doubt you can please all on that. However, I will say if you
>> look at it, the buying public is so use to hearing "For only 3
>> payments of $19.99" or the other myriad ways pricing is touted from
>> the gas station pricing boards to how much the puppies are listed for
>> at the bulletin board of the local laundramat. If it were me I'd
>> err, if this would be erring at all, to post them in the area you
>> have set aside for pricing. I'd not put it on the main page for the
>> first thing to hit someone unless you are running a monthly promo or
>> something. I personally am the type who "needs" not "wants" but needs
>> to know the price of something before I'll even give it ears. If my
>> wife reads a house that's for sale, she'll start with how many
>> bedrooms, baths, the mature trees and etc. and I'll interrupt and ask
>> for the price, because if it it is out of my range or too expensive,
>> there is no point in wasting time reading any further. I will
>> literally find myself asking her "What was that now, how many
>> bedrooms and etc." after she's confessed the price, because I just
>> block it out by default. I just went through similar for a recording
>> studio I am considering, the first thing I went to find is the
>> prices, because if they are too high, they could tell me they are the
>> absolute best in town and the rest of the PR mantra, I'll not be
>> using them if they are out of my range, so why spend time reading
>> from link to link to link.
>>
>> That said I wish you well on your venture.
>>
>> Brad
>>
>> At 03:00 PM 10/20/2010, you wrote:
>>>Oh, Judith. Just when I'd decided to keep it you go and make me
>>>second-guess myself! LOL I think I ultimately left it because I want
>> people
>>>to have a starting sense of how much they can expect to invest for
the
>>>service they request. I'll officially launch it later this week,
just
>>>thought I'd give fellow writers a chance to critique, but we'll see
if
>>>including a Fee Schedule kicks me in the butt!
>>>
>>>Joe
>>>
>>>"Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves,
>>>some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>>-----Original Message-----
>>>From: Judith Bron [mailto:jbron at optonline.net]
>>>Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 3:56 PM
>>>To: jsorozco at gmail.com; Writer's Division Mailing List
>>>Subject: Re: [stylist] Shameless Plug
>>>
>>>Joe, I just went there and it looks terriffic! One suggestion
>>>that struck
>>>me. Don't mention your costs on the site. You would be better
>>>off saying,
>>>"For a consultation and to discuss cost please..." Here you
>>>can put your
>>>contact link and/or phone number.
>>>I like your non-profit group. Our vets deserve everything we
>>>can do for
>>>them. Good going! Judith
>>>----- Original Message -----
>>>From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>>>To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
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>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:07:54 -0500
>> From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
>> To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <BLU0-SMTP19735FBC639615800B96C90C45C0 at phx.gbl>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> Your first para is good, but I lose interest after it. What you keep
>> creating is more of a book outline, but we do not need each detail
for
> a
>> synopsis.
>>
>> Like Joe mentioned, focus more on the themes and not specific
details.
>> We want to be intrigued by this, not handed a Cliffnotes version of
> the
>> book. In other words, tease us! *smile*
>>
>> I would keep this current first para because we learn that the main
>> character has a near death experience, which is very interesting, but
>> then we only need another couple of paras (if even that) to sum up
the
>> concept of the book.
>>
>> Bridgit
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
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>> 1. Re: synopsis (Joe Orozco)
>> 2. Re: synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 3. Re: synopsis (Barbara Hammel)
>> 4. Re: synopsis (Danielle Montour)
>> 5. synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 6. Re: synopsis (Joe Orozco)
>> 7. Re: synopsis (Danielle Montour)
>> 8. Re: synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 9. Re: Synopsis (Watson, Katherine M)
>> 10. Changes: a plot synopsis (Watson, Katherine M)
>> 11. Re: Changes: a plot synopsis (Danielle Montour)
>> 12. How to Write a Synopsis (Joe Orozco)
>> 13. Re: Changes: a plot synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 14. Re: How to Write a Synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 15. Re: How to Write a Synopsis (Donna Hill)
>>
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>> Message: 1
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:04:51 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <EC7B391371074A3D991A588BB5EC0806 at Rufus>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> You previously mentioned being an established freelance writer. This
> is
>> what I found with regard to you and your novel while performing a
> quick
>> Internet search:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "She is currently working on her first novel in a young adult series
>> about observant Jewish young adults that she wants to market in the
>> mainstream world. One may think that this is a topic for a niche
>> audience, but Judith doesn't agree. "Today, anti-Semitism is rearing
> its
>> ugly head again. But what do people hate?" She hopes to answer
> questions
>> about observant Judaism, their unique lifestyle and give her readers
a
>> page turning reading experience that contains mystery, intrigue, good
>> guys, bad guys, issues surrounding life, and yes, death. This book
> will
>> give her readers a riveting novel that the young adult, or perhaps
> adult
>> reader, Won't be able to put down!"
>>
>> ***
>>
>> That, I think, is intriguing.
>>
>> Now, with that in mind, look over your synopsis and tell us if the
>> synopsis you've prepared lives up to this claim?
>>
>> 1. It's very dry. You may as well write a bulleted list of
incidents.
>> First this happened, and then that happened. Then the character
> reacted
>> like this...
>>
>> 2. Find a balance between what is intriguing and too much enthusiasm.
>> You
>> wrote:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
> the
>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party."
>>
>> ***
>>
>> Are you writing to an editor, or are you writing to a teenager?
>> Remember the novel audience is significantly different from your
>> synopsis audience.
>>
>> 3. The themes laid out in the Internet search result is fascinating.
>> Flush out those themes in your synopsis. What you are turning in
> should
>> not be a shopping list, unless the publisher is requesting a
>> chapter-by-chapter outline. The synopsis, according to what I
>> understand you need to submit, should be a panoramic view of the
> themes,
>> trials and brief character sketches the reader might encounter. If I
>> may offer a bit of advice, try to aim for the tone of a movie
trailer.
>> Think of the words the narrators use to convince you to watch the
>> upcoming movie!
>>
>> It's looking good, but I recommend a bit more surgery.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
> all."--Sam
>> Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
>> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Judith Bron
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:41 PM
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state.
>> Because of
>> her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional relationship.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis altogether.
> Lori
>> On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron"
>> <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
>>
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this is more along the
lines
>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells the
> book?
>> Thanks, Judith Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York,
>> begins our
>> novel with a
>> near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
>> foster mother,
>> Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her after the
> accident.
>> Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only objects left by
>> Jennifer's
>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer,
>> her parents
>> and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their daughter.
>>
>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school
>> football team.
>> Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>> reveals that
>> she can't begin an emotional relationship until she understands
>> more about
>> her own identity.
>>
>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
>> identity as a
>> Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey
>> to find out
>> just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>> being orphaned
>> when she was two.
>>
>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to
>> bring her out
>> of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since entering
> her
>> present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by
>> the poverty
>> shrouding her once affluent family.
>>
>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
>> ravaged her
>> body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an
>> Almighty she has
>> believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty has taken
> a
>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time
>> in her life
>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
>> to overcome
>> her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has
>> only been a
>> part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>> Eventually
>> her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in an
observant
>> Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>> something about
>> her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on
>> living as an
>> observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting her placed with
a
>> family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work out, and Rabbi
> Levy,
>> Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove,
>> and the lives
>> of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna, New York
>> become entwined forever. The small book and letter left by her
>> parents has
>> become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her darkened
>> bedrooms Jennifer
>> clings to these possessions left by her parents and talks to them.
She
>> eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language that both the
>> small book and
>> letter are written in. She is able to learn from the letter
>> that her Hebrew
>> name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
> shyly
>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>> Channah. The
>> principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
>> small packet
>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these things
> and
>> tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>
>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him
>> later that day
>> to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his
>> safety deposit box
>> at the bank.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
> never
>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi
>> who, since her
>> mother's illness and death has become a class leader, experiences
more
>> turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her family.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>> Criminals get
>> hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street. They
>> take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
>> the criminals
>> proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying on one of the
>> beds, tries
>> to block out the sounds and odors of her abductors' drinking party
and
>> spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When her
>> abductors fall
>> into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes binding her
>> arms off, slides
>> off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping to
>> the door.
>>
>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
tightly
>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel
>> brings her
>> into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>> police, but
>> Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their custody.
>>
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter
>> becomes known to
>> Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her newly
revealed
>> identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the same
>> person she
>> has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in their
>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of
>> who and what
>> they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt. Painful
>> questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>> Message: 2
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:20:18 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <0D09DA54256B406E99980896779B5052 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=original
>>
>> Joe, I don't even remember which article or write up that excerpt was
>> taken
>> from. I don't think it's a bad memory, just a selective one. I'll
> take
>>
>> this version back to the drawing board. Thanks, Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 1:04 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>>> Judith,
>>>
>>> You previously mentioned being an established freelance writer.
This
>>> is what I found with regard to you and your novel while performing a
>>> quick Internet search:
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> "She is currently working on her first novel in a young adult series
>>> about observant Jewish young adults that she wants to market in the
>>> mainstream world. One may think that this is a topic for a niche
>>> audience, but Judith doesn't agree. "Today, anti-Semitism is rearing
>>> its ugly head again. But what do people hate?" She hopes to answer
>>> questions about observant Judaism, their unique lifestyle and give
> her
>>
>>> readers a page turning reading experience that contains
>>> mystery, intrigue, good guys, bad guys, issues surrounding life, and
>> yes,
>>> death. This book will give her readers a riveting novel that the
> young
>>> adult, or perhaps adult reader, Won't be able to put down!"
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> That, I think, is intriguing.
>>>
>>> Now, with that in mind, look over your synopsis and tell us if the
>>> synopsis
>>> you've prepared lives up to this claim?
>>>
>>> 1. It's very dry. You may as well write a bulleted list of
> incidents.
>>
>>> First this happened, and then that happened. Then the character
>>> reacted like this...
>>>
>>> 2. Find a balance between what is intriguing and too much
enthusiasm.
>>
>>> You
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> "They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
>>> the criminals proceed to have a drinking party."
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> Are you writing to an editor, or are you writing to a teenager?
>>> Remember the novel audience is significantly different from your
>>> synopsis audience.
>>>
>>> 3. The themes laid out in the Internet search result is fascinating.
>>> Flush
>>> out those themes in your synopsis. What you are turning in should
> not
>> be
>>> a
>>> shopping list, unless the publisher is requesting a
> chapter-by-chapter
>>> outline. The synopsis, according to what I understand you need to
>> submit,
>>> should be a panoramic view of the themes, trials and brief character
>>> sketches the reader might encounter. If I may offer a bit of
advice,
>> try
>>> to
>>> aim for the tone of a movie trailer. Think of the words the
> narrators
>> use
>>> to convince you to watch the upcoming movie!
>>>
>>> It's looking good, but I recommend a bit more surgery.
>>>
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org]
>>> On Behalf Of Judith Bron
>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:41 PM
>>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>>
>>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state.
Because
>>> of her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional
>>> relationship.
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
>>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>>
>>>
>>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis altogether.
>>> Lori On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron"
>>> <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
>>>
>>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>>> <stylist at nfbnet.org> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this
> is
>>
>>> more along the lines everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you
>>> think it sells the book? Thanks, Judith
>>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York, begins our
>>> novel with a
>>> near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
>>> foster mother,
>>> Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her after the
>> accident.
>>> Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only objects left by
>>> Jennifer's
>>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer,
>>> her parents
>>> and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their daughter.
>>>
>>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>>> team. Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>>> reveals that
>>> she can't begin an emotional relationship until she understands
>>> more about
>>> her own identity.
>>>
>>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
>>> identity as a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on
her
>>> journey to find out
>>> just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>>> being orphaned
>>> when she was two.
>>>
>>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
>>> her out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
>>> entering her present school the year before. Pessi's life is
>>> complicated by the poverty
>>> shrouding her once affluent family.
>>>
>>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
> ravaged
>>
>>> her body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an
>>> Almighty she has
>>> believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty has
taken
>> a
>>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time
>>> in her life
>>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
>>> to overcome
>>> her devastating loss.
>>>
>>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
>>> been a part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic
> classmates.
>>> Eventually
>>> her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in an
> observant
>>> Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>>> something about
>>> her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on
>>> living as an
>>> observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting her placed with
> a
>>> family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work out, and Rabbi
>> Levy,
>>> Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>>
>>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
the
>>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>>> Jenna, New York
>>> become entwined forever. The small book and letter left by her
>>> parents has
>>> become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her darkened
>>> bedrooms Jennifer
>>> clings to these possessions left by her parents and talks to them.
> She
>>> eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language that both the
>>> small book and
>>> letter are written in. She is able to learn from the letter
>>> that her Hebrew
>>> name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>>
>>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
>>> shyly tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>>> Channah. The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer
pulls
>>> the small packet
>>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these things
>> and
>>> tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>>
>>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later
that
>>> day to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his
>>> safety deposit box
>>> at the bank.
>>>
>>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>>> never accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi
> who,
>>
>>> since her mother's illness and death has become a class leader,
>>> experiences more turmoil over the change that is about to take place
>>> in her family.
>>>
>>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
> Criminals
>>
>>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>>> street. They
>>> take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
>>> the criminals
>>> proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying on one of the
>>> beds, tries
>>> to block out the sounds and odors of her abductors' drinking party
> and
>>> spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When her
>>> abductors fall
>>> into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes binding her
>>> arms off, slides
>>> off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping to
>>> the door.
>>>
>>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
> tightly
>>
>>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel
brings
>>> her into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>>> police, but
>>> Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their custody.
>>>
>>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
> newly
>>
>>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
>>> same person she
>>> has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>>
>>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
identity
>>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
their
>>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
> and
>>
>>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>>> Painful questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
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>>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>
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>> Message: 3
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:50:51 -0500
>> From: "Barbara Hammel" <poetlori8 at msn.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <SNT139-ds7B69B7A04A828024CBC73EB5B0 at phx.gbl>
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>>
>> This is the idea I was thinking of though for ordering things. Has
>> Jennifer
>> even bonded with her foster family? If not, you could just say
>> something
>> about her feeling out of place in the world and leave Randy out and
>> Sheila
>> out.
>> This attempt was much better than the first.
>> Barbara
>>
>> ...
>> Yesterday is
>> A path well-trod,
>> A familiar lane
>> Through sacred sod,
>> A road we travel
>> Too often, I fear,
>> For there are the good times
>> When things are hard here,
>> ...
>>
>> --------------------------------------------------
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 11:04 AM
>> To: <jsorozco at gmail.com>; "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this is more along the
>>> lines
>>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells the
>> book?
>>> Thanks, Judith
>>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York, begins our
novel
>> with
>>> a near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
foster
>>> mother, Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her after
the
>>> accident. Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only
objects
>> left
>>> by Jennifer's long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about
>>> Jennifer, her parents and the mystery surrounding the letter left to
>> their
>>> daughter.
>>>
>>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>>> team.
>>> Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer reveals
>> that
>>> she can't begin an emotional relationship until she understands more
>> about
>>> her own identity.
>>>
>>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
>>> identity as
>>> a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey to
>> find
>>> out just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
> being
>>
>>> orphaned when she was two.
>>>
>>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
>> her
>>> out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
>> entering
>>> her present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by
>> the
>>> poverty shrouding her once affluent family.
>>>
>>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
> ravaged
>>
>>> her
>>> body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty
> she
>> has
>>> believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty has
> taken
>> a
>>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time in
her
>> life
>>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries to
>>> overcome her devastating loss.
>>>
>>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
>>> been a
>>> part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
>> an
>>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent
>>> on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
getting
>> her
>>> placed with a family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work
>> out,
>>> and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their
>> home.
>>>
>>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
the
>>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna,
>>> New York become entwined forever. The small book and letter left by
>> her
>>> parents has become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her
darkened
>>> bedrooms Jennifer clings to these possessions left by her parents
and
>>> talks to them. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language
>> that
>>> both the small book and letter are written in. She is able to learn
>> from
>>> the letter that her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>>
>>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
>> shyly
>>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>> Channah.
>>> The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
> small
>>
>>> packet out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>>> things and tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>>
>>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later
> that
>>
>>> day
>>> to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his safety
>> deposit
>>> box at the bank.
>>>
>>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>>> never
>>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi who,
>> since
>>> her mother's illness and death has become a class leader,
experiences
>> more
>>> turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her family.
>>>
>>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>>> Criminals
>>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street.
>>> They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
> the
>>
>>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying on one
> of
>> the
>>> beds, tries to block out the sounds and odors of her abductors'
>> drinking
>>> party and spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When
> her
>>
>>> abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes
> binding
>> her
>>> arms off, slides off the bed and, braced on her now free hands
begins
>>> hopping to the door.
>>>
>>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
> tightly
>>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel
brings
>> her
>>> into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
> police,
>> but
>>> Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their custody.
>>>
>>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>>> known
>>> to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her newly
>> revealed
>>> identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the same
>> person
>>> she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>>
>>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
identity
>>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
> their
>>
>>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
>> and
>>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>> Painful
>>> questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>>
>>>
>>>
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>> Message: 4
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 15:29:58 -0400
>> From: Danielle Montour <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com,Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <4cbdf1d0.4bfde50a.4d6e.fffff01b at mx.google.com>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Hi,
>> I like the synopsis a lot better now, however, the view keeps
>> switching between Pessy and Jennifer, and then some other
>> characters, and the transition between them is a little rough.
>> Maybe Making it flow a little better might help.
>>
>> Danni
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:04:51 -0400
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> You previously mentioned being an established freelance writer.
>> This is
>> what I found with regard to you and your novel while performing a
>> quick
>> Internet search:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "She is currently working on her first novel in a young adult
>> series about
>> observant Jewish young adults that she wants to market in the
>> mainstream
>> world. One may think that this is a topic for a niche audience,
>> but Judith
>> doesn't agree. "Today, anti-Semitism is rearing its ugly head
>> again. But
>> what do people hate?" She hopes to answer questions about
>> observant Judaism,
>> their unique lifestyle and give her readers a page turning
>> reading
>> experience that contains
>> mystery, intrigue, good guys, bad guys, issues surrounding life,
>> and yes,
>> death. This book will give her readers a riveting novel that the
>> young
>> adult, or perhaps adult reader, Won't be able to put down!"
>>
>> ***
>>
>> That, I think, is intriguing.
>>
>> Now, with that in mind, look over your synopsis and tell us if
>> the synopsis
>> you've prepared lives up to this claim?
>>
>> 1. It's very dry. You may as well write a bulleted list of
>> incidents.
>> First this happened, and then that happened. Then the character
>> reacted
>> like this...
>>
>> 2. Find a balance between what is intriguing and too much
>> enthusiasm. You
>> wrote:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal
>> and the
>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party."
>>
>> ***
>>
>> Are you writing to an editor, or are you writing to a teenager?
>> Remember
>> the novel audience is significantly different from your synopsis
>> audience.
>>
>> 3. The themes laid out in the Internet search result is
>> fascinating. Flush
>> out those themes in your synopsis. What you are turning in
>> should not be a
>> shopping list, unless the publisher is requesting a
>> chapter-by-chapter
>> outline. The synopsis, according to what I understand you need
>> to submit,
>> should be a panoramic view of the themes, trials and brief
>> character
>> sketches the reader might encounter. If I may offer a bit of
>> advice, try to
>> aim for the tone of a movie trailer. Think of the words the
>> narrators use
>> to convince you to watch the upcoming movie!
>>
>> It's looking good, but I recommend a bit more surgery.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves,
>> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam
>> Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org]
> On
>> Behalf Of Judith Bron
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:41 PM
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state. Because
> of
>> her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional
>> relationship.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis
>> altogether.
>> Lori
>> On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> wrote:
>>
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this
is
>> more along the
>> lines
>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells
>> the book?
>> Thanks, Judith
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York, begins our novel
>> with a near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
>> foster mother, Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her
> after
>> the
>> accident.
>> Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only objects left
>> by
>> Jennifer's
>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer, her
>> parents and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their
daughter.
>>
>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>> team. Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>> reveals that she can't begin an emotional relationship until she
>> understands more about her own identity.
>>
>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
> identity
>> as a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey
> to
>> find out just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>> being orphaned when she was two.
>>
>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer
>> and a
>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
> her
>> out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
>> entering her
>> present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by the
>> poverty shrouding her once affluent family.
>>
>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
ravaged
>> her body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an
Almighty
>> she has believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty
> has
>>
>> taken a
>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time in her
>> life she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
> to
>> overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
> been
>> a part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
> an
>> observant
>> Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer something
>> about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on
>> living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting
her
>> placed
>> with a
>> family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work out, and
>> Rabbi Levy,
>> Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and the
>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna, New York become entwined forever. The small book and letter
> left
>> by her parents has become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her
>> darkened bedrooms Jennifer clings to these possessions left by her
>> parents and talks to
>> them. She
>> eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language that both the small
> book
>> and letter are written in. She is able to learn from the letter that
>> her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high
>> school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name.
>> She shyly
>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
> Channah.
>> The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
small
>> packet out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>> things and
>> tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>
>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later
that
>> day to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his safety
>> deposit box at the bank.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she
>> will never
>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi who,
> since
>> her mother's illness and death has become a class leader, experiences
>> more
>> turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her
>> family.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
Criminals
>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted
> animal
>> and the criminals proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying
> on
>> one of the beds, tries to block out the sounds and odors of her
>> abductors' drinking
>> party and
>> spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When her
abductors
>> fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes binding her arms
>> off, slides off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins
> hopping
>> to the door.
>>
>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
>> tightly
>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel brings
>> her into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>> police, but Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their
> custody.
>>
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
> newly
>> revealed
>> identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the same
> person
>> she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
>> identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
>> their
>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
> and
>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>> Painful
>> questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>> Message: 5
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:02:01 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <60CC3B4167884551BB4B4C55A061BA03 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1
>>
>> Does this work? Judith
>>
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car, looks
> around
>> the strange place she ended up in. In front of her is a corridor
that
>> seems to be lit with flickering candles. Suddenly her long deceased
>> mother is talking to her. Jennifer, whose life is dismal due to the
>> constant anti Semitic derisions by her classmates, wants to stay with
>> her mother. But her mother tells her that its not yet her time to
> stay.
>> She has to learn, "To live. To love. To hope. To know who you are,
>> and what you are!" Jennifer tries to change her mother's mind, but
>> minutes later slams back into her body, aware of the pain.
>>
>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with her
> injured
>> foster daughter. While heading to her car she remembers the strange
>> messenger a few months earlier who delivered the only possessions
left
>> by Jennifer's parents, a little book with an inserted paper written
in
>> foreign writing. The messenger handed Sheila the items and left.
> After
>> closing the door Sheila ran to her window to watch him drive away,
but
>> no car appeared on the street or driveway. She couldn't see a man
>> walking away from the house. Now she thought about Jennifer's
> survival
>> of what should have been a deadly accident. She wondered about the
>> items in her possession that the messenger told her to give to
> Jennifer
>> on her seventeenth birthday. The story begins with all this mystery
>> surrounding an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>
>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg is
> talking
>> to her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive personality, Pessi
>> disagrees with her mother about getting involved with the girls at
>> school. Pessi insists that it's her life and if she wants to be
alone
>> so be it. She stomps out of the house like a belligerent child
> leaving
>> her mother on the sofa in the dining room of their poverty stricken
>> home.
>>
>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school. Her
>> classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the protective shell
>> Pessi has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life is a bout to change
>> forever.
>>
>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room to
help
>> her only to discover a cold motionless body lying on the mattress.
>> Totally bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's remains begging her
to
>> say something.
>>
>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty she has
>> believed in her entire life. For the first time in her life she has
> her
>> solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries to overcome her
>> devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish identity.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
> an
>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
>> getting her placed with a family in Jenna. This family doesn't work
>> out, and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into
> their
>> home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and the
>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
> Jenna
>> become entwined forever.
>>
>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a fixture in
>> Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew
> language
>> that both the small book and letter are written in. She is able to
>> learn from the letter her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>> Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
> tells
>> the principal her Hebrew name. The principal asks her how she knows
>> this and Jennifer pulls the small packet out of her backpack. The
>> principal pales when she sees these things.
>>
>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet in a
>> safe place.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>> never accept this.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
> Criminals
>> get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna street.
>> They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
the
>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party. When her abductors fall
>> into a drunken slumber Jennifer works off the ropes binding her arms,
>> slides off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping
to
>> the door.
>>
>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall where
>> another hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the police.
>>
>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's true
>> identity are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time dealing with
> her
>> newly revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is
not
>> the same person she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
their
>> lives. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who and
> what
>> they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
Painfula
>> questions experienced by teenagers everywhere.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 6
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:15:24 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <5DC2A634551B4807ACD3A794DC14C921 at Rufus>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> It's coming along really well. I would start off by informing the
>> reader that that there are two characters so they know not to get
>> side-tracked by the mention of two girls. Maybe you could relocate
> the
>> last paragraph to the top of the synopsis. Rephrase it of course so
>> that it reads more smoothly.
>>
>> Also, this sentence is positioned rather randomly:
>>
>> *Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>> never accept this.*
>>
>> I think I get the back and forth you're trying to achieve, but it's a
>> little dizzying. I would focus on one girl, then the other, and then
>> tie it up neatly with ominous tones of, "what will happen to these
> girls
>> who must struggle to find their identity..." If I weren't in a rush,
>> I'd give you a better sample, but I think you get what I mean.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
> all."--Sam
>> Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
>> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Judith Bron
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 5:02 PM
>> To: Stylist
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> Does this work? Judith
>>
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car,
>> looks around the strange place she ended up in. In front of
>> her is a corridor that seems to be lit with flickering candles.
>> Suddenly her long deceased mother is talking to her.
>> Jennifer, whose life is dismal due to the constant anti Semitic
>> derisions by her classmates, wants to stay with her mother.
>> But her mother tells her that its not yet her time to stay.
>> She has to learn, "To live. To love. To hope. To know who
>> you are, and what you are!" Jennifer tries to change her
>> mother's mind, but minutes later slams back into her body,
>> aware of the pain.
>>
>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with
>> her injured foster daughter. While heading to her car she
>> remembers the strange messenger a few months earlier who
>> delivered the only possessions left by Jennifer's parents, a
>> little book with an inserted paper written in foreign writing.
>> The messenger handed Sheila the items and left. After closing
>> the door Sheila ran to her window to watch him drive away, but
>> no car appeared on the street or driveway. She couldn't see a
>> man walking away from the house. Now she thought about
>> Jennifer's survival of what should have been a deadly accident.
>> She wondered about the items in her possession that the
>> messenger told her to give to Jennifer on her seventeenth
>> birthday. The story begins with all this mystery surrounding
>> an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>
>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg
>> is talking to her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive
>> personality, Pessi disagrees with her mother about getting
>> involved with the girls at school. Pessi insists that it's her
>> life and if she wants to be alone so be it. She stomps out of
>> the house like a belligerent child leaving her mother on the
>> sofa in the dining room of their poverty stricken home.
>>
>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school.
>> Her classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the
>> protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life
>> is a bout to change forever.
>>
>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room
>> to help her only to discover a cold motionless body lying on
>> the mattress. Totally bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's
>> remains begging her to say something.
>>
>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty
>> she has believed in her entire life. For the first time in her
>> life she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she
>> tries to overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish
>> identity. Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting
>> her registered in an observant Jewish summer camp hoping that
>> the camp can teach Jennifer something about her roots and
>> identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on living as an
>> observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting her
>> placed with a family in Jenna. This family doesn't work out,
>> and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into
>> their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove,
>> and the lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish
>> Girls' school in Jenna become entwined forever.
>>
>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a
>> fixture in Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn
>> the Hebrew language that both the small book and letter are
>> written in. She is able to learn from the letter her Hebrew
>> name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high
>> school principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew
>> name. She tells the principal her Hebrew name. The principal
>> asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the small packet
>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these things.
>>
>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet
>> in a safe place.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she
>> will never accept this.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>> Criminals get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from
>> a Jenna street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like
>> a hunted animal and the criminals proceed to have a drinking
>> party. When her abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer
>> works off the ropes binding her arms, slides off the bed and,
>> braced on her now free hands begins hopping to the door.
>>
>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall
>> where another hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the
> police.
>>
>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's
>> true identity are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time
>> dealing with her newly revealed identity. She can't deal with
>> the fact that she is not the same person she has lived with for
>> the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
>> identity throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic
>> changes in their lives. Both characters have to come to an
>> understanding of who and what they are in a world filled with
>> danger, fear and self doubt. Painfula questions experienced by
>> teenagers everywhere.
>>
>>
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>> Message: 7
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 18:50:08 -0400
>> From: Danielle Montour <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <4cbe20b9.a26fe50a.587a.30d4 at mx.google.com>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Nice! That's really good! I like it.
>>
>> Danni
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net
>> To: Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:02:01 -0400
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> Does this work? Judith
>>
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car, looks
>> around the strange place she ended up in. In front of her is a
>> corridor that seems to be lit with flickering candles. Suddenly
>> her long deceased mother is talking to her. Jennifer, whose life
>> is dismal due to the constant anti Semitic derisions by her
>> classmates, wants to stay with her mother. But her mother tells
>> her that its not yet her time to stay. She has to learn, "To
>> live. To love. To hope. To know who you are, and what you
>> are!" Jennifer tries to change her mother's mind, but minutes
>> later slams back into her body, aware of the pain.
>>
>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with her
>> injured foster daughter. While heading to her car she remembers
>> the strange messenger a few months earlier who delivered the only
>> possessions left by Jennifer's parents, a little book with an
>> inserted paper written in foreign writing. The messenger handed
>> Sheila the items and left. After closing the door Sheila ran to
>> her window to watch him drive away, but no car appeared on the
>> street or driveway. She couldn't see a man walking away from the
>> house. Now she thought about Jennifer's survival of what should
>> have been a deadly accident. She wondered about the items in her
>> possession that the messenger told her to give to Jennifer on her
>> seventeenth birthday. The story begins with all this mystery
>> surrounding an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>
>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg is
>> talking to her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive
>> personality, Pessi disagrees with her mother about getting
>> involved with the girls at school. Pessi insists that it's her
>> life and if she wants to be alone so be it. She stomps out of
>> the house like a belligerent child leaving her mother on the sofa
>> in the dining room of their poverty stricken home.
>>
>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school.
>> Her classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the
>> protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life is
>> a bout to change forever.
>>
>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room to
>> help her only to discover a cold motionless body lying on the
>> mattress. Totally bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's
>> remains begging her to say something.
>>
>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty she
>> has believed in her entire life. For the first time in her life
>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
>> to overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish identity.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered
>> in an observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach
>> Jennifer something about her roots and identity. Jennifer
>> returns from camp intent on living as an observant Jewess. Again
>> Sheila is helpful in getting her placed with a family in Jenna.
>> This family doesn't work out, and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father,
>> agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
>> the lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls'
>> school in Jenna become entwined forever.
>>
>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a
>> fixture in Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn
>> the Hebrew language that both the small book and letter are
>> written in. She is able to learn from the letter her Hebrew name
>> is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high
>> school principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew
>> name. She tells the principal her Hebrew name. The principal
>> asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the small packet
>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>> things.
>>
>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet
>> in a safe place.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she
>> will never accept this.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>> Criminals get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from a
>> Jenna street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a
>> hunted animal and the criminals proceed to have a drinking party.
>> When her abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer works off
>> the ropes binding her arms, slides off the bed and, braced on her
>> now free hands begins hopping to the door.
>>
>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall where
>> another hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the
>> police.
>>
>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's true
>> identity are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time dealing
>> with her newly revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact
>> that she is not the same person she has lived with for the past
>> 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
>> identity throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic
>> changes in their lives. Both characters have to come to an
>> understanding of who and what they are in a world filled with
>> danger, fear and self doubt. Painfula questions experienced by
>> teenagers everywhere.
>>
>>
>> _______________________________________________
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>> http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/
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>> Message: 8
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 22:46:47 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <949B2C8F3C0D4EDE9BFEDBC5FB65E005 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=response
>>
>> Thanks Danni, Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Danielle Montour" <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 6:50 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>>> Nice! That's really good! I like it.
>>>
>>> Danni
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net
>>> To: Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org
>>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:02:01 -0400
>>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>>>
>>> Does this work? Judith
>>>
>>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car, looks
>>> around
>>> the strange place she ended up in. In front of her is a corridor
> that
>>
>>> seems to be lit with flickering candles. Suddenly her long deceased
>>> mother is talking to her. Jennifer, whose life is dismal due to the
>>> constant anti Semitic derisions by her classmates, wants to stay
with
>> her
>>> mother. But her mother tells her that its not yet her time to stay.
>> She
>>> has to learn, "To live. To love. To hope. To know who you are,
and
>> what
>>> you are!" Jennifer tries to change her mother's mind, but minutes
>> later
>>> slams back into her body, aware of the pain.
>>>
>>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with her
>>> injured
>>> foster daughter. While heading to her car she remembers the strange
>>> messenger a few months earlier who delivered the only possessions
> left
>> by
>>> Jennifer's parents, a little book with an inserted paper written in
>>> foreign writing. The messenger handed Sheila the items and left.
>> After
>>> closing the door Sheila ran to her window to watch him drive away,
> but
>> no
>>> car appeared on the street or driveway. She couldn't see a man
>> walking
>>> away from the house. Now she thought about Jennifer's survival of
>> what
>>> should have been a deadly accident. She wondered about the items in
>> her
>>> possession that the messenger told her to give to Jennifer on her
>>> seventeenth birthday. The story begins with all this mystery
>> surrounding
>>> an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>>
>>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg is
>>> talking to
>>> her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive personality, Pessi
>>> disagrees with her mother about getting involved with the girls at
>> school.
>>> Pessi insists that it's her life and if she wants to be alone so be
>> it.
>>> She stomps out of the house like a belligerent child leaving her
>> mother on
>>> the sofa in the dining room of their poverty stricken home.
>>>
>>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school. Her
>>> classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the protective shell
>> Pessi
>>> has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life is a bout to change forever.
>>>
>>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room to
> help
>>
>>> her
>>> only to discover a cold motionless body lying on the mattress.
>> Totally
>>> bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's remains begging her to say
>>> something.
>>>
>>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty she has
>>> believed in her entire life. For the first time in her life she has
>> her
>>> solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries to overcome her
>>> devastating loss.
>>>
>>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish identity.
>>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
>> an
>>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent
>>> on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
getting
>> her
>>> placed with a family in Jenna. This family doesn't work out, and
>> Rabbi
>>> Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>>
>>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
the
>>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna
>>> become entwined forever.
>>>
>>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a fixture
in
>>> Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew
>> language
>>> that both the small book and letter are written in. She is able to
>> learn
>>> from the letter her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>>
>>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
>> tells
>>> the principal her Hebrew name. The principal asks her how she knows
>> this
>>> and Jennifer pulls the small packet out of her backpack. The
>> principal
>>> pales when she sees these things.
>>>
>>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet in a
>>> safe
>>> place.
>>>
>>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>>> never
>>> accept this.
>>>
>>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>>> Criminals
>>> get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
street.
>>> They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
> the
>>
>>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party. When her abductors fall
>> into
>>> a drunken slumber Jennifer works off the ropes binding her arms,
>> slides
>>> off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping to the
>> door.
>>>
>>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall where
>>> another
>>> hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the police.
>>>
>>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's true
>>> identity
>>> are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time dealing with her
newly
>>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
>> same
>>> person she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>>
>>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
identity
>>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
> their
>>
>>> lives. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who and
>> what
>>> they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
> Painfula
>>
>>> questions experienced by teenagers everywhere.
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> Writers Division web site: http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/
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>> Message: 9
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 22:45:36 -0500
>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu>
>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Synopsis
>> Message-ID:
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>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Judith,
>> This is better, although some sentences still sound awkward.
(I.E.
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
newly
>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
> same
>> person she has lived with for the past 17 years. Could be:
Eventually,
>> Jennifer is freed and finds out about the contents of the letter.
>> Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her newly revealed identity.
She
>> struggles with the fact that she is not the same person she thought
> she
>> was for the past 17 years.)
>> Think about your main conflict. (This was the "hook" you used in
>> your query letter to that publisher.) Base everything in your
synopsis
>> off that main theme. I don't think you will need to mention the
> readers
>> or the novel itself in the synopsis. Just start with the main
> conflict,
>> stating it, along with the resolution, in a few sentences at the
>> beginning of your synopsis, then go from there. I hope you find this
>> helpful. --Katie
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 27
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 12:40:50 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <C9B70F9E06084868A7C2DB20A46E8CE5 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=original
>>
>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state.
Because
>> of
>> her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional relationship.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis altogether.
> Lori
>> On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> wrote:
>>
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this is more along the
lines
>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells the
> book?
>> Thanks, Judith Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York,
>> begins our novel with a near death experience and questions about her
>> identity. Her foster mother, Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to
> be
>> with her after the accident. Sheila's flashback to the day she
> received
>> the only objects left by
>> Jennifer's
>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer, her
>> parents and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their
daughter.
>>
>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>> team. Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>> reveals that she can't begin an emotional relationship until she
>> understands more about her own identity.
>>
>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
> identity
>> as a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey
> to
>> find out just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>> being orphaned when she was two.
>>
>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
> her
>> out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
> entering
>> her present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by
the
>> poverty shrouding her once affluent family.
>>
>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
ravaged
>> her body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty
>> she has believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty
> has
>> taken a mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time
> in
>> her life she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she
> tries
>> to overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
> been
>> a part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
> an
>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
>> getting her placed with a family in Jenna, New York. This family
> doesn't
>> work out, and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer
into
>> their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and the
>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna, New York become entwined forever. The small book and letter
> left
>> by her parents has become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her
>> darkened bedrooms Jennifer clings to these possessions left by her
>> parents and talks to them. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew
>> language that both the small book and letter are written in. She is
> able
>> to learn from the letter that her Hebrew name is Breindle and her
> mother
>> Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
> shyly
>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
> Channah.
>> The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
small
>> packet out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>> things and tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>
>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later that
>> day to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his safety
>> deposit box at the bank.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
> never
>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi who,
since
>> her mother's illness and death has become a class leader, experiences
>> more turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her
> family.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
Criminals
>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted
animal
>> and the criminals proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying
on
>> one of the beds, tries to block out the sounds and odors of her
>> abductors' drinking party and spends the time reviewing school work
in
>> her mind. When her abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer
> works
>> the ropes binding her arms off, slides off the bed and, braced on her
>> now free hands begins hopping to the door.
>>
>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
tightly
>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel brings
>> her into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>> police, but Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their
> custody.
>>
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
newly
>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
> same
>> person she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in their
>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
and
>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>> Painful questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 10
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:13:27 -0500
>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu>
>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>> Message-ID:
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>>
>> Hello everyone,
>> Since we are on the subject of synopses, I thought I'd throw mine
>> out there for critique. It is for my young adult, fantasy novel,
> titled
>> "Changes." Enjoy, and let me know what you think. Does this make you
>> want to read the book? --Katie
>>
>>
>> Changes Plot Synopsis
>>
>> Main Conflict:
>> Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a blind
>> person, but she has trouble accepting herself as a werewolf. She
> avoids
>> phasing unless it is the time of the full moon-or unless absolutely
>> necessary. While attending college in present-day Denver, Colorado,
>> circumstances force Casey to accept her duel nature.
>>
>> Synopsis:
>> On a warm Thursday in September, Casey's human best friend,
>> Justine, invites Casey to go to a club with her and her boyfriend,
> Tony,
>> that night. Casey agrees to go. She meets Tony at a restaurant
>> beforehand. She is horrified when she discovers that Tony isn't
human.
>> He doesn't eat anything at dinner, and his scent is too sweet. Casey
>> struggles to keep her inner wolf in check, so she doesn't change into
> a
>> wolf in the middle of the crowded restaurant.
>> Later, at the club, Casey is attacked by werewolf Rob. She is
>> rescued by werewolf Nate and his Alpha, Seb. Casey is attracted to
> Nate;
>> this is the first time she meets others of her own kind.
>> The next day, (Friday) Justine discovers Casey is a werewolf when
>> Casey phases in front of her accidentally.
>> Justine breaks down emotionally, but when Tony calls her, her
mood
>> shifts to one of a giddy romantic. Casey warns Justine, but it
doesn't
>> change Justine's feelings for Tony.
>> The following day, (Saturday) Casey and Justine go downtown, and
>> come across Nate and Seb. Nate tells Casey he is a werewolf, and he
>> knows that she is, too. She is glad to have found another like her.
> Nate
>> also tells Casey that his twin, Marissa, was with him when he phased
>> once. He fears that he may have bitten her, and that Marissa may be a
>> werewolf. They go to Marissa's dorm and discover she is still human.
>> Nate accidently phases in front of Marissa. Marissa faints, and Casey
>> hopes Marissa will just wake up and think it was a bad dream.
>> The day after that, (Sunday) Casey goes to get ice cream. She
> finds
>> Marissa working at the ice cream shop. Marissa has figured out that
> Nate
>> is a werewolf, and tries to talk to Casey about it; Casey is
reluctant
>> to share, although she likes Marissa.
>>
>> The next night, (Monday) Casey saves her roommate, Georgina, from
> a
>> vampire.
>> Later that night, Casey discovers that Tony's scent is similar to
>> that of the vampire, and he reveals to her and Justine that he is a
>> hybrid-half human, half vampire. Justine's love for him is unchanged.
>> The next day, (Tuesday) Nate and Casey go on a "date". Georgina
>> tells Casey that she is moving out immediately because she knows
about
>> Casey's duel nature. Casey accidentally phases in front of Georgina,
>> almost killing her.
>> Nate takes Casey to Ouzel Falls-where she was changed into a
>> werewolf. Casey remembers that it was Seb who bit her.
>> The day afterward, (Wednesday) Casey finds Marissa. In need of a
>> new roommate, Casey asks Marissa if she will move in with her.
Marissa
>> agrees, because she knows Nate will be hanging around Casey. She gets
> in
>> a car accident while moving her things to Casey's apartment. Nate
> gives
>> Marissa his blood, saving her life, but the blood changes Marissa
into
> a
>> werewolf.
>> A few days later, Casey kills Seb in a fight and becomes Alpha.
> She
>> discovers that she can feel Nate and Marissa's emotions, and she has
> an
>> influence over whether the twins change forms.
>> Two weeks pass, and Casey is consumed by her duties as Alpha.
>> Justine confronts Casey, saying that she has seen reports of a
>> guy-Seb--who looked to have died from wild dogs. His body was found
> in
>> a dumpster, and Justine suspects Casey. Casey is made aware of how
>> different she is from humans because of her instincts, and wonders if
>> werewolves have an immortal soul. Marissa and Nate come up with no
>> concrete evidence proving that they have souls. Casey is concerned
> about
>> where she will spend eternity, and whether she can still be friends
> with
>> Justine, even though they are members of different species.
>> A few nights later, (Thursday) Casey gets a call from Justine's
>> cell phone, but it isn't Justine-it is Georgina. Georgina informs
> Casey
>> that she has captured Justine, and Casey figures out that Georgina is
>> now a vampire. Casey and the twins are able to save Justine before
>> Georgina drinks her blood, but Georgina has bitten her. Georgina also
>> bites Casey, but Tony arrives and is able to suck both of their blood
>> clean.
>> The next day, (Friday) the same vampire tries to attack Marissa
> and
>> she is able to transmit her memories to Casey, since Casey is her
> Alpha.
>> When Casey arrives, she finds another werewolf, Jenae, waiting with
>> Marissa. Tony and Justine arrive. Tony thanks Casey for saving
> Justine
>> and invites her and Nate to go out with them that night. Casey
> accepts,
>> although she is suspicious of Tony's true motives. Later that night,
> he
>> gets Casey alone with him, and tries to kill her. Casey sends her
>> memories of the attack to Nate and Marissa, and Nate arrives just in
>> time. He kills Tony. Later that night, Nate reveals to Casey that he
>> plans to go home and work at a hospital to earn money for medical
>> school.
>> The following morning, (Saturday) Justine thanks Casey for saving
>> her from Tony and admits that Casey was right about him. Later that
>> morning, Nate takes Casey Geo-Caching in the woods and admits his
love
>> to her. This makes Marissa angry because she feels like Nate is
> leading
>> Casey on. Casey goes out for coffee with Jenae to find out more
>> information about her, since Jenae wants to join Casey's pack.
>> Meanwhile, Marissa attacks Nate, forcing him to leave before
> originally
>> planned.
>> Justine suggests that the girls go out for burgers, and while
they
>> are at the restaurant, Rob shows up. He points a gun at Casey, but
> Jenae
>> jumps in the way, taking the silver bullet instead. Casey accepts
> Jenae
>> into her pack as she dies.
>> Casey spends the next month in a daze. She meets Savannah, a
human
>> who likes to party. Depressed and inebriated most of the time, Casey
>> tries to cope with Jenae's death and Nate's absence.
>> Casey has an epiphany; she realizes that she only half-knows
>> herself, and decides to spend some time in her wolf form.
>> While in the woods running as a wolf, Casey meets an actual wolf
>> who almost instantly guesses what she is. He explains the
> differences-in
>> his mind-that exist between humans and wolves. Casey decides she
likes
>> being human better, because she feels the human world gives her goals
> to
>> achieve and a more purposeful life. That night, the vampire attacks
> Nate
>> while he is at work. Nate survives, escapes and sends his memories to
>> Casey.
>> The next day, Nate returns. Later that day, Savannah calls,
>> informing Casey that a vampire is looking for her. The vampire
> captures
>> Savannah, and Casey and her pack run to Savannah's rescue.
>> When they arrive, they find Savannah staring into space. Everyone
>> except for Casey falls into a similar state. Casey is unaffected
> because
>> she is blind and cannot see the illusions created by the vampire.
> When
>> Casey attacks the vampire, his movement frees the others from his
>> visions. Casey's pack destroys the vampire.
>> The twins tell Casey they saw the souls of the people the vampire
>> killed, including those of werewolves. Convinced she isn't damned for
>> eternity, Casey realizes she has accepted herself as a werewolf.
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 11
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 00:25:58 -0400
>> From: Danielle Montour <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>> Message-ID: <4cbe6f6f.8e4ee50a.33fd.0675 at mx.google.com>
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>>
>> Hi,
>> Well, this synopsis seems more like a list of events than a
>> flowing transitional piece between each character's life. I
>> would like to read the book, and understand what you are saying,
>> however, I'd deliver it different, for example, even
>> "Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a blind
>> person, but she has trouble accepting herself as a werewolf."
>> might be a good starting sentence to your main synopsis.
>>
>> HTH
>>
>> Danni
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu
>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:13:27 -0500
>> Subject: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>>
>> Hello everyone,
>> Since we are on the subject of synopses, I thought I'd throw
>> mine out there for critique. It is for my young adult, fantasy
>> novel, titled "Changes." Enjoy, and let me know what you think.
>> Does this make you want to read the book?
>> --Katie
>>
>>
>> Changes Plot Synopsis
>>
>> Main Conflict:
>> Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a
>> blind person, but she has trouble accepting herself as a
>> werewolf. She avoids phasing unless it is the time of the full
>> moon-or unless absolutely necessary. While attending college in
>> present-day Denver, Colorado, circumstances force Casey to accept
>> her duel nature.
>>
>> Synopsis:
>> On a warm Thursday in September, Casey's human best friend,
>> Justine, invites Casey to go to a club with her and her
>> boyfriend, Tony, that night. Casey agrees to go. She meets Tony
>> at a restaurant beforehand. She is horrified when she discovers
>> that Tony isn't human. He doesn't eat anything at dinner, and
>> his scent is too sweet. Casey struggles to keep her inner wolf
>> in check, so she doesn't change into a wolf in the middle of the
>> crowded restaurant.
>> Later, at the club, Casey is attacked by werewolf Rob. She
>> is rescued by werewolf Nate and his Alpha, Seb. Casey is
>> attracted to Nate; this is the first time she meets others of her
>> own kind.
>> The next day, (Friday) Justine discovers Casey is a werewolf
>> when Casey phases in front of her accidentally.
>> Justine breaks down emotionally, but when Tony calls her,
>> her mood shifts to one of a giddy romantic. Casey warns Justine,
>> but it doesn't change Justine's feelings for Tony.
>> The following day, (Saturday) Casey and Justine go downtown,
>> and come across Nate and Seb. Nate tells Casey he is a werewolf,
>> and he knows that she is, too. She is glad to have found another
>> like her. Nate also tells Casey that his twin, Marissa, was with
>> him when he phased once. He fears that he may have bitten her,
>> and that Marissa may be a werewolf. They go to Marissa's dorm
>> and discover she is still human. Nate accidently phases in front
>> of Marissa. Marissa faints, and Casey hopes Marissa will just
>> wake up and think it was a bad dream.
>> The day after that, (Sunday) Casey goes to get ice cream.
>> She finds Marissa working at the ice cream shop. Marissa has
>> figured out that Nate is a werewolf, and tries to talk to Casey
>> about it; Casey is reluctant to share, although she likes
>> Marissa.
>>
>> The next night, (Monday) Casey saves her roommate, Georgina,
>> from a vampire.
>> Later that night, Casey discovers that Tony's scent is
>> similar to that of the vampire, and he reveals to her and Justine
>> that he is a hybrid-half human, half vampire. Justine's love for
>> him is unchanged.
>> The next day, (Tuesday) Nate and Casey go on a "date".
>> Georgina tells Casey that she is moving out immediately because
>> she knows about Casey's duel nature. Casey accidentally phases
>> in front of Georgina, almost killing her.
>> Nate takes Casey to Ouzel Falls-where she was changed into a
>> werewolf. Casey remembers that it was Seb who bit her.
>> The day afterward, (Wednesday) Casey finds Marissa. In need
>> of a new roommate, Casey asks Marissa if she will move in with
>> her. Marissa agrees, because she knows Nate will be hanging
>> around Casey. She gets in a car accident while moving her things
>> to Casey's apartment. Nate gives Marissa his blood, saving her
>> life, but the blood changes Marissa into a werewolf.
>> A few days later, Casey kills Seb in a fight and becomes
>> Alpha. She discovers that she can feel Nate and Marissa's
>> emotions, and she has an influence over whether the twins change
>> forms.
>> Two weeks pass, and Casey is consumed by her duties as
>> Alpha.
>> Justine confronts Casey, saying that she has seen reports of
>> a guy-Seb--who looked to have died from wild dogs. His body was
>> found in a dumpster, and Justine suspects Casey. Casey is made
>> aware of how different she is from humans because of her
>> instincts, and wonders if werewolves have an immortal soul.
>> Marissa and Nate come up with no concrete evidence proving that
>> they have souls. Casey is concerned about where she will spend
>> eternity, and whether she can still be friends with Justine, even
>> though they are members of different species.
>> A few nights later, (Thursday) Casey gets a call from
>> Justine's cell phone, but it isn't Justine-it is Georgina.
>> Georgina informs Casey that she has captured Justine, and Casey
>> figures out that Georgina is now a vampire. Casey and the twins
>> are able to save Justine before Georgina drinks her blood, but
>> Georgina has bitten her. Georgina also bites Casey, but Tony
>> arrives and is able to suck both of their blood clean.
>> The next day, (Friday) the same vampire tries to attack
>> Marissa and she is able to transmit her memories to Casey, since
>> Casey is her Alpha. When Casey arrives, she finds another
>> werewolf, Jenae, waiting with Marissa. Tony and Justine arrive.
>> Tony thanks Casey for saving Justine and invites her and Nate to
>> go out with them that night. Casey accepts, although she is
>> suspicious of Tony's true motives. Later that night, he gets
>> Casey alone with him, and tries to kill her. Casey sends her
>> memories of the attack to Nate and Marissa, and Nate arrives just
>> in time. He kills Tony. Later that night, Nate reveals to Casey
>> that he plans to go home and work at a hospital to earn money for
>> medical school.
>> The following morning, (Saturday) Justine thanks Casey for
>> saving her from Tony and admits that Casey was right about him.
>> Later that morning, Nate takes Casey Geo-Caching in the woods and
>> admits his love to her. This makes Marissa angry because she
>> feels like Nate is leading Casey on. Casey goes out for coffee
>> with Jenae to find out more information about her, since Jenae
>> wants to join Casey's pack. Meanwhile, Marissa attacks Nate,
>> forcing him to leave before originally planned.
>> Justine suggests that the girls go out for burgers, and
>> while they are at the restaurant, Rob shows up. He points a gun
>> at Casey, but Jenae jumps in the way, taking the silver bullet
>> instead. Casey accepts Jenae into her pack as she dies.
>> Casey spends the next month in a daze. She meets Savannah,
>> a human who likes to party. Depressed and inebriated most of the
>> time, Casey tries to cope with Jenae's death and Nate's absence.
>> Casey has an epiphany; she realizes that she only half-knows
>> herself, and decides to spend some time in her wolf form.
>> While in the woods running as a wolf, Casey meets an actual
>> wolf who almost instantly guesses what she is. He explains the
>> differences-in his mind-that exist between humans and wolves.
>> Casey decides she likes being human better, because she feels the
>> human world gives her goals to achieve and a more purposeful
>> life. That night, the vampire attacks Nate while he is at work.
>> Nate survives, escapes and sends his memories to Casey.
>> The next day, Nate returns. Later that day, Savannah calls,
>> informing Casey that a vampire is looking for her. The vampire
>> captures Savannah, and Casey and her pack run to Savannah's
>> rescue.
>> When they arrive, they find Savannah staring into space.
>> Everyone except for Casey falls into a similar state. Casey is
>> unaffected because she is blind and cannot see the illusions
>> created by the vampire. When Casey attacks the vampire, his
>> movement frees the others from his visions. Casey's pack
>> destroys the vampire.
>> The twins tell Casey they saw the souls of the people the
>> vampire killed, including those of werewolves. Convinced she
>> isn't damned for eternity, Casey realizes she has accepted
>> herself as a werewolf.
>>
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>> Message: 12
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 08:49:41 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
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>> How to Write a Synopsis
>>
>> by Marg Gilks
>>
>> Writers will spend years writing, lovingly polishing and then
> marketing
>> a novel, and yet they shrug off the synopsis with a comment like "I
> hate
>> writing synopses."
>>
>> I hate writing synopses, too. I used to hate them because the ones I
>> wrote sucked all the life from the novel, reducing it to bare-bones
>> sentences that did nothing to capture the depth of the novel itself.
> Now
>> I hate writing synopses because they are much more difficult to write
>> than the novel ever was. It's not easy distilling 100,000-odd words
> into
>> a few pages. But it's important.
>>
>> The synopsis is the most important part of your submission package
> and,
>> as such, it has to be developed and sweated over and polished with
the
>> same attention you devoted to the novel itself. Along with the cover
>> letter, the synopsis is what sells the editor on the manuscript. If
> they
>> don't see anything they like in the synopsis, they won't even glance
> at
>> your chapter samples.
>>
>> The synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb for
>> your novel (the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the
>> publisher's art and advertising departments, if the novel is
> purchased),
>> and write it as though you're trying to entice a casual bookstore
>> browser to buy the novel and read it. Which isn't too far from
>> actuality.
>>
>> "Okay," you say, "you've sold me. This is something I have to do, and
> do
>> well. But how?"
>>
>>
>> One Step at a Time
>> Rather than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it
> down.
>> Do it step by step.
>>
>> The first step, of course, is realizing that you're going to have to
>> write a synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The
>> best time to realize this is just before you sit down with your
>> manuscript for the final reading preparatory to declaring the thing
>> completed.
>>
>> Sit down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As
you
>> finish reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph
> summary
>> of what happened where, and to which character, in that chapter.
>>
>> Notice any themes running through your chapters as you're reading?
>> Symbolism you didn't realize you'd woven through the story while you
>> were slogging away at the computer for all those months? (The
>> subconscious mind is a wonderful thing.) Take note of themes, too.
You
>> may just discover your one-line story summary that agents and editors
>> like so much, if you didn't know what it was before. Or even if you
>> thought you knew what it was, before (surprise, says the Muse, you
> were
>> wrong).
>>
>> What you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel
>> outline, what I call my author's outline. This is pretty dry reading,
>> and since chapter-by-chapter outlines seem to have fallen out of
favor
>> with editors and agents, this will likely remain one of your most
>> valuable writing tools, and that's about it. Don't throw this away
> when
>> you've done your synopsis, either. You may know the story intimately
>> now, but you do forget details over time. You may decide to revise
the
>> novel in the future, and this outline will help you. I've used mine
to
>> make sure I'm not duplicating character names from one project to the
>> next. (The subconscious mind can also booby-trap you.) Reading an
>> outline is much easier than leafing through or rereading an entire
>> novel.
>>
>> Anyway. There is an immediate use for that outline. What you are
> doing,
>> basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
> manageable
>> packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most important plot
> points
>> in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
>>
>> Notice I said the most important points. We're talking about only
> those
>> events and motivations that moved the story forward in a major way.
>> We're talking about only the most important characters, the ones your
>> reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right now, we
>> are striving for bare-bones.
>>
>> "Yup," you say, "that's bare-bones, all right, and just as boring as
>> ever."
>>
>> Yes, it is. It's also probably still too long, but don't worry about
>> that right now.
>>
>>
>> Let's See Some Enthusiasm!
>> Now I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that
>> synopsis:
>>
>>
>> Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the novel, one that
> will
>> pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her want to buy
> the
>> book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a feel for
>> how it's done.
>>
>>
>> You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing it to your
> friend.
>> You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and shot him and
>> that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic, that sounds
>> like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things like,
> "The
>> good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the evil Dr.
> Death,
>> the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after Dr. Death, falls,
>> somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him with the Good
Guy
>> Death-ray to save the world."
>>
>> That's how your synopsis is going to sound, when you're done:
>> enthusiastic. Enticing. A description that makes the reader want to
> pick
>> up the manuscript and find out how this happens! How can you make
your
>> synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main character and his or
> her
>> crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or quote briefly from the novel
>> itself. Don't neglect to reveal the character's emotions and
>> motivations, those points that explain why a character does
something,
>> but keep it brief. If the setting is exotic, inject a taste of it
into
>> the synopsis with a brief paragraph. This includes any background
>> information that is absolutely necessary for the reader to understand
>> the story. Build excitement as you near the conclusion of the story
>> summary by using shorter sentences and paragraphs. The synopsis is a
>> sample of your writing; it is a taste of what reading the actual
novel
>> will be like, so give it your all.
>>
>> Don't forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of
the
>> story that you discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your
>> cover letter. Editors and agents like having this distillation; not
> only
>> will it pique their interest, but it's something they can use when
>> presenting the novel to the buying board. It's also something you can
>> use, the next time someone politely asks you, "What's your novel
> about?"
>>
>> "Wow," you say at last, "this is pretty good! It reads almost as good
> as
>> the novel!"
>>
>>
>> Shalts and Shalt Nots
>> But wait, there's more. Now we get to the "thou shall and shalt
nots."
>>
>> First, acceptable length. One guideline is to allow one synopsis page
>> for every twenty-five pages of manuscript, but even that could be
> longer
>> than most editors and agents want to see. Most editors and agents,
> busy
>> people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to ten pages. The
>> busier ones like five pages at most. I personally consider two pages
>> ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight page. If
>> you've written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't worry if it's
> ten
>> or more pages long
>> -- but it had better be gripping.
>>
>> Edit, edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the
>> synopsis must remain interesting and supply the necessary
information.
>> Yes, this is the hardest part. Don't know what to cut? Lose the
>> adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and "flavor" of the
story.
>>
>> You have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the
> first
>> three chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four. Don't
> leave
>> out the ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to request the
> full
>> manuscript in order to find out what happens. What they will do is
>> decide you're an amateur.
>>
>> No matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is
always
>> written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to
>> Jerry went to the bullfight.)
>>
>> Format: there seems to be disagreement as to whether you should
> single-
>> or double-space your synopsis. To be on the safe side, double-space;
>> it's easier to read. In terms of layout, format your synopsis much as
>> you did your novel, or a short story.
>>
>> The first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it in
>> CAPITAL letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by
>> referring to a character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans" the
>> first time, "Jerry" the next, and "the doctor" another time). It's
> also
>> advisable to identify which character(s) is the point of view
> character
>> by typing "(POV)" after the first instance of the character's name.
>>
>> Yes, writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this
> way:
>> not only are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're honing
> your
>> writing skills at the same time.
>>
>>
>> Copyright C 2001 Marg Gilks
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 13
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 09:02:03 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
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>> I agree that it sounds like a list of events. What drove me nuts was
>> the
>> constant reference to days (Monday, Tuesday etc.). It is a list of
>> events.
>> Try to make it more creative.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Danielle Montour" <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 12:25 AM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>>
>>
>>> Hi,
>>> Well, this synopsis seems more like a list of events than a flowing
>>> transitional piece between each character's life. I would like to
>> read
>>> the book, and understand what you are saying, however, I'd deliver
it
>>> different, for example, even "Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is
>> okay
>>> with herself as a blind person, but she has trouble accepting
herself
>> as a
>>> werewolf." might be a good starting sentence to your main synopsis.
>>>
>>> HTH
>>>
>>> Danni
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu
>>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:13:27 -0500
>>> Subject: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>>>
>>> Hello everyone,
>>> Since we are on the subject of synopses, I thought I'd throw
mine
>>> out
>>> there for critique. It is for my young adult, fantasy novel, titled
>>> "Changes." Enjoy, and let me know what you think. Does this make
you
>> want
>>> to read the book?
>>> --Katie
>>>
>>>
>>> Changes Plot Synopsis
>>>
>>> Main Conflict:
>>> Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a blind
>>> person,
>>> but she has trouble accepting herself as a werewolf. She avoids
>> phasing
>>> unless it is the time of the full moon-or unless absolutely
> necessary.
>>
>>> While attending college in present-day Denver, Colorado,
> circumstances
>>
>>> force Casey to accept her duel nature.
>>>
>>> Synopsis:
>>> On a warm Thursday in September, Casey's human best friend,
>>> Justine,
>>> invites Casey to go to a club with her and her boyfriend, Tony, that
>>> night. Casey agrees to go. She meets Tony at a restaurant
>> beforehand.
>>> She is horrified when she discovers that Tony isn't human. He
> doesn't
>> eat
>>> anything at dinner, and his scent is too sweet. Casey struggles to
>> keep
>>> her inner wolf in check, so she doesn't change into a wolf in the
>> middle
>>> of the crowded restaurant.
>>> Later, at the club, Casey is attacked by werewolf Rob. She is
>> rescued
>>> by werewolf Nate and his Alpha, Seb. Casey is attracted to Nate;
> this
>> is
>>> the first time she meets others of her own kind.
>>> The next day, (Friday) Justine discovers Casey is a werewolf
when
>>> Casey phases in front of her accidentally.
>>> Justine breaks down emotionally, but when Tony calls her, her
> mood
>>
>>> shifts to one of a giddy romantic. Casey warns Justine, but it
>> doesn't
>>> change Justine's feelings for Tony.
>>> The following day, (Saturday) Casey and Justine go downtown, and
>> come
>>> across Nate and Seb. Nate tells Casey he is a werewolf, and he
knows
>> that
>>> she is, too. She is glad to have found another like her. Nate also
>> tells
>>> Casey that his twin, Marissa, was with him when he phased once. He
>> fears
>>> that he may have bitten her, and that Marissa may be a werewolf.
> They
>> go
>>> to Marissa's dorm and discover she is still human. Nate accidently
>> phases
>>> in front of Marissa. Marissa faints, and Casey hopes Marissa will
>> just
>>> wake up and think it was a bad dream.
>>> The day after that, (Sunday) Casey goes to get ice cream. She
>> finds
>>> Marissa working at the ice cream shop. Marissa has figured out that
>> Nate
>>> is a werewolf, and tries to talk to Casey about it; Casey is
> reluctant
>> to
>>> share, although she likes Marissa.
>>>
>>> The next night, (Monday) Casey saves her roommate, Georgina,
from
>>> a
>>> vampire.
>>> Later that night, Casey discovers that Tony's scent is similar
to
>> that
>>> of the vampire, and he reveals to her and Justine that he is a
>> hybrid-half
>>> human, half vampire. Justine's love for him is unchanged.
>>> The next day, (Tuesday) Nate and Casey go on a "date". Georgina
>> tells
>>> Casey that she is moving out immediately because she knows about
>> Casey's
>>> duel nature. Casey accidentally phases in front of Georgina, almost
>>> killing her.
>>> Nate takes Casey to Ouzel Falls-where she was changed into a
>> werewolf.
>>> Casey remembers that it was Seb who bit her.
>>> The day afterward, (Wednesday) Casey finds Marissa. In need of
a
>> new
>>> roommate, Casey asks Marissa if she will move in with her. Marissa
>>> agrees, because she knows Nate will be hanging around Casey. She
> gets
>> in
>>> a car accident while moving her things to Casey's apartment. Nate
>> gives
>>> Marissa his blood, saving her life, but the blood changes Marissa
> into
>> a
>>> werewolf.
>>> A few days later, Casey kills Seb in a fight and becomes Alpha.
>> She
>>> discovers that she can feel Nate and Marissa's emotions, and she has
>> an
>>> influence over whether the twins change forms.
>>> Two weeks pass, and Casey is consumed by her duties as Alpha.
>>> Justine confronts Casey, saying that she has seen reports of a
>>> guy-Seb--who looked to have died from wild dogs. His body was
found
>> in a
>>> dumpster, and Justine suspects Casey. Casey is made aware of how
>>> different she is from humans because of her instincts, and wonders
if
>>> werewolves have an immortal soul. Marissa and Nate come up with no
>>> concrete evidence proving that they have souls. Casey is concerned
>> about
>>> where she will spend eternity, and whether she can still be friends
>> with
>>> Justine, even though they are members of different species.
>>> A few nights later, (Thursday) Casey gets a call from Justine's
>> cell
>>> phone, but it isn't Justine-it is Georgina. Georgina informs Casey
>> that
>>> she has captured Justine, and Casey figures out that Georgina is now
> a
>>
>>> vampire. Casey and the twins are able to save Justine before
> Georgina
>>
>>> drinks her blood, but Georgina has bitten her. Georgina also bites
>> Casey,
>>> but Tony arrives and is able to suck both of their blood clean.
>>> The next day, (Friday) the same vampire tries to attack Marissa
>> and
>>> she is able to transmit her memories to Casey, since Casey is her
>> Alpha.
>>> When Casey arrives, she finds another werewolf, Jenae, waiting with
>>> Marissa. Tony and Justine arrive. Tony thanks Casey for saving
>> Justine
>>> and invites her and Nate to go out with them that night. Casey
>> accepts,
>>> although she is suspicious of Tony's true motives. Later that
night,
>> he
>>> gets Casey alone with him, and tries to kill her. Casey sends her
>>> memories of the attack to Nate and Marissa, and Nate arrives just in
>> time.
>>> He kills Tony. Later that night, Nate reveals to Casey that he
plans
>> to
>>> go home and work at a hospital to earn money for medical school.
>>> The following morning, (Saturday) Justine thanks Casey for
saving
>> her
>>> from Tony and admits that Casey was right about him. Later that
>> morning,
>>> Nate takes Casey Geo-Caching in the woods and admits his love to
her.
>>> This makes Marissa angry because she feels like Nate is leading
Casey
>> on.
>>> Casey goes out for coffee with Jenae to find out more information
>> about
>>> her, since Jenae wants to join Casey's pack. Meanwhile, Marissa
>> attacks
>>> Nate, forcing him to leave before originally planned.
>>> Justine suggests that the girls go out for burgers, and while
> they
>> are
>>> at the restaurant, Rob shows up. He points a gun at Casey, but
Jenae
>>> jumps in the way, taking the silver bullet instead. Casey accepts
>> Jenae
>>> into her pack as she dies.
>>> Casey spends the next month in a daze. She meets Savannah, a
>> human
>>> who likes to party. Depressed and inebriated most of the time,
Casey
>>> tries to cope with Jenae's death and Nate's absence.
>>> Casey has an epiphany; she realizes that she only half-knows
>> herself,
>>> and decides to spend some time in her wolf form.
>>> While in the woods running as a wolf, Casey meets an actual wolf
>> who
>>> almost instantly guesses what she is. He explains the
differences-in
>> his
>>> mind-that exist between humans and wolves. Casey decides she likes
>> being
>>> human better, because she feels the human world gives her goals to
>> achieve
>>> and a more purposeful life. That night, the vampire attacks Nate
>> while he
>>> is at work. Nate survives, escapes and sends his memories to Casey.
>>> The next day, Nate returns. Later that day, Savannah calls,
>> informing
>>> Casey that a vampire is looking for her. The vampire captures
>> Savannah,
>>> and Casey and her pack run to Savannah's rescue.
>>> When they arrive, they find Savannah staring into space.
> Everyone
>>
>>> except for Casey falls into a similar state. Casey is unaffected
>> because
>>> she is blind and cannot see the illusions created by the vampire.
>> When
>>> Casey attacks the vampire, his movement frees the others from his
>> visions.
>>> Casey's pack destroys the vampire.
>>> The twins tell Casey they saw the souls of the people the
vampire
>>> killed, including those of werewolves. Convinced she isn't damned
> for
>>
>>> eternity, Casey realizes she has accepted herself as a werewolf.
>>>
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>> Message: 14
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 09:23:27 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
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>>
>> Joe, This is fabulous! I'm going back to try to do what she's
>> suggesting.
>> Later, Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 8:49 AM
>> Subject: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
>>
>>
>>> How to Write a Synopsis
>>>
>>> by Marg Gilks
>>>
>>> Writers will spend years writing, lovingly polishing and then
>>> marketing a novel, and yet they shrug off the synopsis with a
comment
>>> like "I hate writing synopses."
>>>
>>> I hate writing synopses, too. I used to hate them because the ones I
>>> wrote sucked all the life from the novel, reducing it to bare-bones
>>> sentences that did nothing to capture the depth of the novel itself.
>>> Now I hate writing synopses because they are much more difficult to
>>> write than the novel ever was. It's not easy distilling 100,000-odd
>>> words into a few pages. But it's important.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is the most important part of your submission package
>>> and, as such, it has to be developed and sweated over and polished
>>> with the same attention you devoted to the novel itself. Along with
>>> the cover letter, the synopsis is what sells the editor on the
>>> manuscript. If they don't see anything they like in the synopsis,
> they
>>
>>> won't even glance at your chapter samples.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb
for
>>> your novel (the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the
>>> publisher's art and advertising departments, if the novel is
>>> purchased), and write it as though you're trying to entice a casual
>>> bookstore browser to buy the novel and read it. Which isn't too far
>>> from actuality.
>>>
>>> "Okay," you say, "you've sold me. This is something I have to do,
and
>>> do well. But how?"
>>>
>>>
>>> One Step at a Time
>>> Rather than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it
>>> down.
>>> Do
>>> it step by step.
>>>
>>> The first step, of course, is realizing that you're going to have to
>>> write
>>> a
>>> synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The best
> time
>> to
>>> realize this is just before you sit down with your manuscript for
the
>>> final
>>> reading preparatory to declaring the thing completed.
>>>
>>> Sit down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As
> you
>>
>>> finish reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph
>>> summary of what happened where, and to which character, in that
>>> chapter.
>>>
>>> Notice any themes running through your chapters as you're reading?
>>> Symbolism
>>> you didn't realize you'd woven through the story while you were
>> slogging
>>> away at the computer for all those months? (The subconscious mind is
> a
>>> wonderful thing.) Take note of themes, too. You may just discover
> your
>>> one-line story summary that agents and editors like so much, if you
>> didn't
>>> know what it was before. Or even if you thought you knew what it
was,
>>> before
>>> (surprise, says the Muse, you were wrong).
>>>
>>> What you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel
>>> outline,
>>> what I call my author's outline. This is pretty dry reading, and
> since
>>> chapter-by-chapter outlines seem to have fallen out of favor with
>> editors
>>> and agents, this will likely remain one of your most valuable
writing
>>> tools,
>>> and that's about it. Don't throw this away when you've done your
>> synopsis,
>>> either. You may know the story intimately now, but you do forget
>> details
>>> over time. You may decide to revise the novel in the future, and
this
>>> outline will help you. I've used mine to make sure I'm not
> duplicating
>>> character names from one project to the next. (The subconscious mind
>> can
>>> also booby-trap you.) Reading an outline is much easier than leafing
>>> through
>>> or rereading an entire novel.
>>>
>>> Anyway. There is an immediate use for that outline. What you are
>>> doing, basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
>>> manageable packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most
> important
>>
>>> plot points in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
>>>
>>> Notice I said the most important points. We're talking about only
>>> those events and motivations that moved the story forward in a major
>>> way. We're talking about only the most important characters, the
ones
>>> your reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right
>>> now, we are striving for bare-bones.
>>>
>>> "Yup," you say, "that's bare-bones, all right, and just as boring as
>>> ever."
>>>
>>> Yes, it is. It's also probably still too long, but don't worry about
>>> that right now.
>>>
>>>
>>> Let's See Some Enthusiasm!
>>> Now I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that
>>> synopsis:
>>>
>>>
>>> Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the novel, one that
>>> will pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her want
to
>>> buy the book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a
>>> feel for how it's done.
>>>
>>>
>>> You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing it to your
>>> friend. You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and shot
>>> him and that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic,
that
>>> sounds like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things
>>> like, "The good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the
>>> evil Dr. Death, the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after
> Dr.
>>
>>> Death, falls, somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him
>>> with the Good Guy Death-ray to save the world."
>>>
>>> That's how your synopsis is going to sound, when you're done:
>>> enthusiastic.
>>> Enticing. A description that makes the reader want to pick up the
>>> manuscript
>>> and find out how this happens!
>>> How can you make your synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main
>>> character and his or her crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or
> quote
>>> briefly from the novel itself. Don't neglect to reveal the
> character's
>>> emotions and motivations, those points that explain why a character
>> does
>>> something, but keep it brief. If the setting is exotic, inject a
> taste
>> of
>>> it
>>> into the synopsis with a brief paragraph. This includes any
> background
>>> information that is absolutely necessary for the reader to
understand
>> the
>>> story. Build excitement as you near the conclusion of the story
>> summary by
>>> using shorter sentences and paragraphs. The synopsis is a sample of
>> your
>>> writing; it is a taste of what reading the actual novel will be
like,
>> so
>>> give it your all.
>>>
>>> Don't forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of
> the
>>> story
>>> that you discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your cover
>>> letter.
>>> Editors and agents like having this distillation; not only will it
>> pique
>>> their interest, but it's something they can use when presenting the
>> novel
>>> to
>>> the buying board. It's also something you can use, the next time
>> someone
>>> politely asks you, "What's your novel about?"
>>>
>>> "Wow," you say at last, "this is pretty good! It reads almost as
good
>>> as
>>> the
>>> novel!"
>>>
>>>
>>> Shalts and Shalt Nots
>>> But wait, there's more. Now we get to the "thou shall and shalt
> nots."
>>>
>>> First, acceptable length. One guideline is to allow one synopsis
page
>>> for every twenty-five pages of manuscript, but even that could be
>>> longer than most editors and agents want to see. Most editors and
>>> agents, busy people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to
> ten
>>
>>> pages. The busier ones like five pages at most. I personally
consider
>>> two pages ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight
>>> page. If you've written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't
worry
>>> if it's ten or more pages long
>>> -- but it had better be gripping.
>>>
>>> Edit, edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the
>>> synopsis must remain interesting and supply the necessary
> information.
>>
>>> Yes, this is the hardest part. Don't know what to cut? Lose the
>>> adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and "flavor" of the
> story.
>>>
>>> You have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the
>>> first three chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four.
>>> Don't leave out the ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to
>>> request the full manuscript in order to find out what happens. What
>>> they will do is decide you're an amateur.
>>>
>>> No matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is
> always
>>
>>> written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to
>>> Jerry went to the bullfight.)
>>>
>>> Format: there seems to be disagreement as to whether you should
>>> single- or double-space your synopsis. To be on the safe side,
>>> double-space; it's easier to read. In terms of layout, format your
>>> synopsis much as you did your novel, or a short story.
>>>
>>> The first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it
in
>>> CAPITAL letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by
>>> referring to a character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans"
the
>>> first time, "Jerry" the next, and "the doctor" another time). It's
>>> also advisable to identify which character(s) is the point of view
>>> character by typing "(POV)" after the first instance of the
>>> character's name.
>>>
>>> Yes, writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this
>>> way:
>>> not
>>> only are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're honing your
>>> writing
>>> skills at the same time.
>>>
>>>
>>> Copyright C 2001 Marg Gilks
>>>
>>>
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>> Message: 15
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 11:21:12 -0400
>> From: Donna Hill <penatwork at epix.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
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>> Hi Joe,
>> Thanks so much for finding and posting this. It's excellent. I
haven't
>> yet re located the section in Sarah Parsons Zackheim's "Getting Your
>> Book Published for Dummies" about query letters and synopses for
>> fiction, but, if memory serves, this article is in agreement with her
>> perspective.
>>
>> My gut reaction in creating my own synopsis, which isn't done yet, is
>> that I'd like to keep it between 500 and 800 words. That would be in
>> line with the author's preference for 2 pages. I think my reasoning
>> stems from my indoctrination as a writer for Suite 101; they tout
>> research claiming that readers respond best to pieces that are
between
>> 400 and 800 words.
>>
>> Donna Hill
>>
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>> On 10/20/2010 8:49 AM, Joe Orozco wrote:
>>> How to Write a Synopsis
>>>
>>> by Marg Gilks
>>>
>>> Writers will spend years writing, lovingly polishing and then
>>> marketing a novel, and yet they shrug off the synopsis with a
comment
>>> like "I hate writing synopses."
>>>
>>> I hate writing synopses, too. I used to hate them because the ones I
>>> wrote sucked all the life from the novel, reducing it to bare-bones
>>> sentences that did nothing to capture the depth of the novel itself.
>>> Now I hate writing synopses because they are much more difficult to
>>> write than the novel ever was. It's not easy distilling 100,000-odd
>>> words into a few pages. But it's important.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is the most important part of your submission package
>>> and, as such, it has to be developed and sweated over and polished
>>> with the same attention you devoted to the novel itself. Along with
>>> the cover letter, the synopsis is what sells the editor on the
>>> manuscript. If they don't see anything they like in the synopsis,
> they
>>
>>> won't even glance at your chapter samples.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb
for
>>> your novel (the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the
>>> publisher's art and advertising departments, if the novel is
>>> purchased), and write it as though you're trying to entice a casual
>>> bookstore browser to buy the novel and read it. Which isn't too far
>>> from actuality.
>>>
>>> "Okay," you say, "you've sold me. This is something I have to do,
and
>>> do well. But how?"
>>>
>>>
>>> One Step at a Time
>>> Rather than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it
>>> down. Do it step by step.
>>>
>>> The first step, of course, is realizing that you're going to have to
>>> write a synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The
>>> best time to realize this is just before you sit down with your
>>> manuscript for the final reading preparatory to declaring the thing
>>> completed.
>>>
>>> Sit down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As
> you
>>
>>> finish reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph
>>> summary of what happened where, and to which character, in that
>>> chapter.
>>>
>>> Notice any themes running through your chapters as you're reading?
>>> Symbolism you didn't realize you'd woven through the story while you
>>> were slogging away at the computer for all those months? (The
>>> subconscious mind is a wonderful thing.) Take note of themes, too.
> You
>>
>>> may just discover your one-line story summary that agents and
editors
>>> like so much, if you didn't know what it was before. Or even if you
>>> thought you knew what it was, before (surprise, says the Muse, you
>>> were wrong).
>>>
>>> What you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel
>>> outline, what I call my author's outline. This is pretty dry
reading,
>>> and since chapter-by-chapter outlines seem to have fallen out of
> favor
>>
>>> with editors and agents, this will likely remain one of your most
>>> valuable writing tools, and that's about it. Don't throw this away
>>> when you've done your synopsis, either. You may know the story
>>> intimately now, but you do forget details over time. You may decide
> to
>>
>>> revise the novel in the future, and this outline will help you. I've
>>> used mine to make sure I'm not duplicating character names from one
>>> project to the next. (The subconscious mind can also booby-trap
you.)
>>> Reading an outline is much easier than leafing through or rereading
> an
>>
>>> entire novel.
>>>
>>> Anyway. There is an immediate use for that outline. What you are
>>> doing, basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
>>> manageable packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most
> important
>>
>>> plot points in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
>>>
>>> Notice I said the most important points. We're talking about only
>>> those events and motivations that moved the story forward in a major
>>> way. We're talking about only the most important characters, the
ones
>>> your reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right
>>> now, we are striving for bare-bones.
>>>
>>> "Yup," you say, "that's bare-bones, all right, and just as boring as
>>> ever."
>>>
>>> Yes, it is. It's also probably still too long, but don't worry about
>>> that right now.
>>>
>>>
>>> Let's See Some Enthusiasm!
>>> Now I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that
>>> synopsis:
>>>
>>>
>>> Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the novel, one that
>>> will pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her want
to
>>> buy the book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a
>>> feel for how it's done.
>>>
>>>
>>> You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing it to your
>>> friend. You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and shot
>>> him and that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic,
that
>>> sounds like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things
>>> like, "The good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the
>>> evil Dr. Death, the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after
> Dr.
>>
>>> Death, falls, somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him
>>> with the Good Guy Death-ray to save the world."
>>>
>>> That's how your synopsis is going to sound, when you're done:
>>> enthusiastic. Enticing. A description that makes the reader want to
>>> pick up the manuscript and find out how this happens! How can you
> make
>>
>>> your synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main character and
his
>>> or her crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or quote briefly from
the
>>> novel itself. Don't neglect to reveal the character's emotions and
>>> motivations, those points that explain why a character does
> something,
>>
>>> but keep it brief. If the setting is exotic, inject a taste of it
> into
>>
>>> the synopsis with a brief paragraph. This includes any background
>>> information that is absolutely necessary for the reader to
understand
>>> the story. Build excitement as you near the conclusion of the story
>>> summary by using shorter sentences and paragraphs. The synopsis is a
>>> sample of your writing; it is a taste of what reading the actual
> novel
>>
>>> will be like, so give it your all.
>>>
>>> Don't forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of
> the
>>
>>> story that you discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your
>>> cover letter. Editors and agents like having this distillation; not
>>> only will it pique their interest, but it's something they can use
>>> when presenting the novel to the buying board. It's also something
> you
>>
>>> can use, the next time someone politely asks you, "What's your novel
>>> about?"
>>>
>>> "Wow," you say at last, "this is pretty good! It reads almost as
good
>>> as the novel!"
>>>
>>>
>>> Shalts and Shalt Nots
>>> But wait, there's more. Now we get to the "thou shall and shalt
> nots."
>>>
>>> First, acceptable length. One guideline is to allow one synopsis
page
>>> for every twenty-five pages of manuscript, but even that could be
>>> longer than most editors and agents want to see. Most editors and
>>> agents, busy people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to
> ten
>>
>>> pages. The busier ones like five pages at most. I personally
consider
>>> two pages ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight
>>> page. If you've written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't
worry
>>> if it's ten or more pages long
>>> -- but it had better be gripping.
>>>
>>> Edit, edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the
>>> synopsis must remain interesting and supply the necessary
> information.
>>
>>> Yes, this is the hardest part. Don't know what to cut? Lose the
>>> adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and "flavor" of the
> story.
>>>
>>> You have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the
>>> first three chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four.
>>> Don't leave out the ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to
>>> request the full manuscript in order to find out what happens. What
>>> they will do is decide you're an amateur.
>>>
>>> No matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is
> always
>>
>>> written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to
>>> Jerry went to the bullfight.)
>>>
>>> Format: there seems to be disagreement as to whether you should
>>> single- or double-space your synopsis. To be on the safe side,
>>> double-space; it's easier to read. In terms of layout, format your
>>> synopsis much as you did your novel, or a short story.
>>>
>>> The first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it
in
>>> CAPITAL letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by
>>> referring to a character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans"
the
>>> first time, "Jerry" the next, and "the doctor" another time). It's
>>> also advisable to identify which character(s) is the point of view
>>> character by typing "(POV)" after the first instance of the
>>> character's name.
>>>
>>> Yes, writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this
>>> way: not only are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're
>>> honing your writing skills at the same time.
>>>
>>>
>>> Copyright C 2001 Marg Gilks
>>>
>>>
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>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:14:35 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
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>> Donna,
>>
>> Thanks for the book mention. I'm going to definitely check it out.
>> From
>> what I've been gathering, even authors who get picked up by major
>> publishers
>> wind up doing and paying for their own marketing in the current
> economy,
>> which makes me want to do a cost comparison. I hope folks with more
>> information on book marketing will chime in, as this would be an
>> important
>> point of discussion for self-publishing.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves,
>> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
>> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Donna Hill
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 4:14 PM
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Self Publishing
>>
>> Hi David,
>> Congratulations for getting this far in the process! There are many
>> things to think about with self-publishing, and unless you already
> have
>> done so, I would advise reading "Getting Your Book Published for
>> Dummies" which is available as digital download and cassette
>> from NLS or
>> some other book about how the publishing industry works.
>>
>> I think that I Universe still makes you sign an exclusive contract,
>> whereas Amazon, for instance, doesn't. I'm in the midst of
> researching
>> this for my novel and it is a mind-numbing process. The other thing
> you
>> need to keep in mind is that the writer, regardless of whether it's
>> self-published or picked up by a publisher, is nowadays responsible
> for
>> more and more of the promotions. I recently bought an accessible
> e-book
>> called "Purple Snowflake Marketing" by Dave and Lillian Brummit,
which
>> is a great resource.
>>
>> BTW, what's a nonfiction novel?
>>
>> Donna Hill
>>
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>>
>> On 10/20/2010 2:51 PM, davidw wrote:
>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>
>>> I have been researching self publishing company's and there are so
>>> many to choose from. Being a first time author of my non-fiction
>>> novel I'd like to make the right choice.
>>>
>>> Can someone recommend a company for printing paperback's with the
>>> advantages of distribution.
>>> and or company's that don't shy away from first time author's.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> David Wermuth
>>> dwermuth1 at earthlink.net
>>>
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>> Message: 14
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:14:41 -0500
>> From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
>> To: <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] Changes plot synopsis
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>> Katie,
>>
>> Ah, ala Twilight? Vampires and werewolfs are very big right now!
>> *smile*
>>
>> I love fantasy and this is interesting, but it is more of a chapter
>> outline than a plot synopsis. Try this, if you had to sum the book
up
>> in one sentence, how would it read? Write this before expanding a
bit
>> to give your synopsis. One sentence will help flesh out the central
>> point.
>>
>> Good job and I look forward to reading more.
>>
>> Bridgit
>>
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>> 1. Re: synopsis (Joe Orozco)
>> 2. Re: synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 3. Re: synopsis (Barbara Hammel)
>> 4. Re: synopsis (Danielle Montour)
>> 5. synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 6. Re: synopsis (Joe Orozco)
>> 7. Re: synopsis (Danielle Montour)
>> 8. Re: synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 9. Re: Synopsis (Watson, Katherine M)
>> 10. Changes: a plot synopsis (Watson, Katherine M)
>> 11. Re: Changes: a plot synopsis (Danielle Montour)
>> 12. How to Write a Synopsis (Joe Orozco)
>> 13. Re: Changes: a plot synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 14. Re: How to Write a Synopsis (Judith Bron)
>> 15. Re: How to Write a Synopsis (Donna Hill)
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>> Message: 1
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:04:51 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
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>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> You previously mentioned being an established freelance writer. This
> is
>> what I found with regard to you and your novel while performing a
> quick
>> Internet search:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "She is currently working on her first novel in a young adult series
>> about observant Jewish young adults that she wants to market in the
>> mainstream world. One may think that this is a topic for a niche
>> audience, but Judith doesn't agree. "Today, anti-Semitism is rearing
> its
>> ugly head again. But what do people hate?" She hopes to answer
> questions
>> about observant Judaism, their unique lifestyle and give her readers
a
>> page turning reading experience that contains mystery, intrigue, good
>> guys, bad guys, issues surrounding life, and yes, death. This book
> will
>> give her readers a riveting novel that the young adult, or perhaps
> adult
>> reader, Won't be able to put down!"
>>
>> ***
>>
>> That, I think, is intriguing.
>>
>> Now, with that in mind, look over your synopsis and tell us if the
>> synopsis you've prepared lives up to this claim?
>>
>> 1. It's very dry. You may as well write a bulleted list of
incidents.
>> First this happened, and then that happened. Then the character
> reacted
>> like this...
>>
>> 2. Find a balance between what is intriguing and too much enthusiasm.
>> You
>> wrote:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
> the
>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party."
>>
>> ***
>>
>> Are you writing to an editor, or are you writing to a teenager?
>> Remember the novel audience is significantly different from your
>> synopsis audience.
>>
>> 3. The themes laid out in the Internet search result is fascinating.
>> Flush out those themes in your synopsis. What you are turning in
> should
>> not be a shopping list, unless the publisher is requesting a
>> chapter-by-chapter outline. The synopsis, according to what I
>> understand you need to submit, should be a panoramic view of the
> themes,
>> trials and brief character sketches the reader might encounter. If I
>> may offer a bit of advice, try to aim for the tone of a movie
trailer.
>> Think of the words the narrators use to convince you to watch the
>> upcoming movie!
>>
>> It's looking good, but I recommend a bit more surgery.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
> all."--Sam
>> Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
>> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Judith Bron
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:41 PM
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state.
>> Because of
>> her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional relationship.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis altogether.
> Lori
>> On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron"
>> <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
>>
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this is more along the
lines
>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells the
> book?
>> Thanks, Judith Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York,
>> begins our
>> novel with a
>> near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
>> foster mother,
>> Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her after the
> accident.
>> Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only objects left by
>> Jennifer's
>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer,
>> her parents
>> and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their daughter.
>>
>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school
>> football team.
>> Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>> reveals that
>> she can't begin an emotional relationship until she understands
>> more about
>> her own identity.
>>
>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
>> identity as a
>> Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey
>> to find out
>> just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>> being orphaned
>> when she was two.
>>
>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to
>> bring her out
>> of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since entering
> her
>> present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by
>> the poverty
>> shrouding her once affluent family.
>>
>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
>> ravaged her
>> body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an
>> Almighty she has
>> believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty has taken
> a
>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time
>> in her life
>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
>> to overcome
>> her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has
>> only been a
>> part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>> Eventually
>> her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in an
observant
>> Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>> something about
>> her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on
>> living as an
>> observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting her placed with
a
>> family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work out, and Rabbi
> Levy,
>> Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove,
>> and the lives
>> of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna, New York
>> become entwined forever. The small book and letter left by her
>> parents has
>> become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her darkened
>> bedrooms Jennifer
>> clings to these possessions left by her parents and talks to them.
She
>> eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language that both the
>> small book and
>> letter are written in. She is able to learn from the letter
>> that her Hebrew
>> name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
> shyly
>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>> Channah. The
>> principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
>> small packet
>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these things
> and
>> tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>
>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him
>> later that day
>> to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his
>> safety deposit box
>> at the bank.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
> never
>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi
>> who, since her
>> mother's illness and death has become a class leader, experiences
more
>> turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her family.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>> Criminals get
>> hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street. They
>> take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
>> the criminals
>> proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying on one of the
>> beds, tries
>> to block out the sounds and odors of her abductors' drinking party
and
>> spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When her
>> abductors fall
>> into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes binding her
>> arms off, slides
>> off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping to
>> the door.
>>
>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
tightly
>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel
>> brings her
>> into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>> police, but
>> Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their custody.
>>
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter
>> becomes known to
>> Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her newly
revealed
>> identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the same
>> person she
>> has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in their
>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of
>> who and what
>> they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt. Painful
>> questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>> Message: 2
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:20:18 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
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>>
>> Joe, I don't even remember which article or write up that excerpt was
>> taken
>> from. I don't think it's a bad memory, just a selective one. I'll
> take
>>
>> this version back to the drawing board. Thanks, Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 1:04 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>>> Judith,
>>>
>>> You previously mentioned being an established freelance writer.
This
>>> is what I found with regard to you and your novel while performing a
>>> quick Internet search:
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> "She is currently working on her first novel in a young adult series
>>> about observant Jewish young adults that she wants to market in the
>>> mainstream world. One may think that this is a topic for a niche
>>> audience, but Judith doesn't agree. "Today, anti-Semitism is rearing
>>> its ugly head again. But what do people hate?" She hopes to answer
>>> questions about observant Judaism, their unique lifestyle and give
> her
>>
>>> readers a page turning reading experience that contains
>>> mystery, intrigue, good guys, bad guys, issues surrounding life, and
>> yes,
>>> death. This book will give her readers a riveting novel that the
> young
>>> adult, or perhaps adult reader, Won't be able to put down!"
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> That, I think, is intriguing.
>>>
>>> Now, with that in mind, look over your synopsis and tell us if the
>>> synopsis
>>> you've prepared lives up to this claim?
>>>
>>> 1. It's very dry. You may as well write a bulleted list of
> incidents.
>>
>>> First this happened, and then that happened. Then the character
>>> reacted like this...
>>>
>>> 2. Find a balance between what is intriguing and too much
enthusiasm.
>>
>>> You
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> "They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
>>> the criminals proceed to have a drinking party."
>>>
>>> ***
>>>
>>> Are you writing to an editor, or are you writing to a teenager?
>>> Remember the novel audience is significantly different from your
>>> synopsis audience.
>>>
>>> 3. The themes laid out in the Internet search result is fascinating.
>>> Flush
>>> out those themes in your synopsis. What you are turning in should
> not
>> be
>>> a
>>> shopping list, unless the publisher is requesting a
> chapter-by-chapter
>>> outline. The synopsis, according to what I understand you need to
>> submit,
>>> should be a panoramic view of the themes, trials and brief character
>>> sketches the reader might encounter. If I may offer a bit of
advice,
>> try
>>> to
>>> aim for the tone of a movie trailer. Think of the words the
> narrators
>> use
>>> to convince you to watch the upcoming movie!
>>>
>>> It's looking good, but I recommend a bit more surgery.
>>>
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
>>> all."--Sam Ewing
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org]
>>> On Behalf Of Judith Bron
>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:41 PM
>>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>>
>>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state.
Because
>>> of her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional
>>> relationship.
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
>>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>>
>>>
>>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis altogether.
>>> Lori On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron"
>>> <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
>>>
>>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>>> <stylist at nfbnet.org> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this
> is
>>
>>> more along the lines everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you
>>> think it sells the book? Thanks, Judith
>>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York, begins our
>>> novel with a
>>> near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
>>> foster mother,
>>> Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her after the
>> accident.
>>> Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only objects left by
>>> Jennifer's
>>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer,
>>> her parents
>>> and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their daughter.
>>>
>>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>>> team. Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>>> reveals that
>>> she can't begin an emotional relationship until she understands
>>> more about
>>> her own identity.
>>>
>>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
>>> identity as a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on
her
>>> journey to find out
>>> just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>>> being orphaned
>>> when she was two.
>>>
>>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
>>> her out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
>>> entering her present school the year before. Pessi's life is
>>> complicated by the poverty
>>> shrouding her once affluent family.
>>>
>>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
> ravaged
>>
>>> her body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an
>>> Almighty she has
>>> believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty has
taken
>> a
>>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time
>>> in her life
>>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
>>> to overcome
>>> her devastating loss.
>>>
>>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
>>> been a part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic
> classmates.
>>> Eventually
>>> her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in an
> observant
>>> Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>>> something about
>>> her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on
>>> living as an
>>> observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting her placed with
> a
>>> family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work out, and Rabbi
>> Levy,
>>> Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>>
>>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
the
>>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>>> Jenna, New York
>>> become entwined forever. The small book and letter left by her
>>> parents has
>>> become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her darkened
>>> bedrooms Jennifer
>>> clings to these possessions left by her parents and talks to them.
> She
>>> eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language that both the
>>> small book and
>>> letter are written in. She is able to learn from the letter
>>> that her Hebrew
>>> name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>>
>>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
>>> shyly tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>>> Channah. The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer
pulls
>>> the small packet
>>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these things
>> and
>>> tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>>
>>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later
that
>>> day to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his
>>> safety deposit box
>>> at the bank.
>>>
>>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>>> never accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi
> who,
>>
>>> since her mother's illness and death has become a class leader,
>>> experiences more turmoil over the change that is about to take place
>>> in her family.
>>>
>>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
> Criminals
>>
>>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>>> street. They
>>> take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
>>> the criminals
>>> proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying on one of the
>>> beds, tries
>>> to block out the sounds and odors of her abductors' drinking party
> and
>>> spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When her
>>> abductors fall
>>> into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes binding her
>>> arms off, slides
>>> off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping to
>>> the door.
>>>
>>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
> tightly
>>
>>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel
brings
>>> her into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>>> police, but
>>> Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their custody.
>>>
>>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
> newly
>>
>>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
>>> same person she
>>> has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>>
>>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
identity
>>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
their
>>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
> and
>>
>>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>>> Painful questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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>>
>> Message: 3
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:50:51 -0500
>> From: "Barbara Hammel" <poetlori8 at msn.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <SNT139-ds7B69B7A04A828024CBC73EB5B0 at phx.gbl>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset="iso-8859-1";
>> reply-type=response
>>
>> This is the idea I was thinking of though for ordering things. Has
>> Jennifer
>> even bonded with her foster family? If not, you could just say
>> something
>> about her feeling out of place in the world and leave Randy out and
>> Sheila
>> out.
>> This attempt was much better than the first.
>> Barbara
>>
>> ...
>> Yesterday is
>> A path well-trod,
>> A familiar lane
>> Through sacred sod,
>> A road we travel
>> Too often, I fear,
>> For there are the good times
>> When things are hard here,
>> ...
>>
>> --------------------------------------------------
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 11:04 AM
>> To: <jsorozco at gmail.com>; "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this is more along the
>>> lines
>>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells the
>> book?
>>> Thanks, Judith
>>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York, begins our
novel
>> with
>>> a near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
foster
>>> mother, Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her after
the
>>> accident. Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only
objects
>> left
>>> by Jennifer's long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about
>>> Jennifer, her parents and the mystery surrounding the letter left to
>> their
>>> daughter.
>>>
>>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>>> team.
>>> Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer reveals
>> that
>>> she can't begin an emotional relationship until she understands more
>> about
>>> her own identity.
>>>
>>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
>>> identity as
>>> a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey to
>> find
>>> out just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
> being
>>
>>> orphaned when she was two.
>>>
>>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
>> her
>>> out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
>> entering
>>> her present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by
>> the
>>> poverty shrouding her once affluent family.
>>>
>>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
> ravaged
>>
>>> her
>>> body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty
> she
>> has
>>> believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty has
> taken
>> a
>>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time in
her
>> life
>>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries to
>>> overcome her devastating loss.
>>>
>>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
>>> been a
>>> part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
>> an
>>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent
>>> on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
getting
>> her
>>> placed with a family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work
>> out,
>>> and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their
>> home.
>>>
>>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
the
>>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna,
>>> New York become entwined forever. The small book and letter left by
>> her
>>> parents has become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her
darkened
>>> bedrooms Jennifer clings to these possessions left by her parents
and
>>> talks to them. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language
>> that
>>> both the small book and letter are written in. She is able to learn
>> from
>>> the letter that her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>>
>>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
>> shyly
>>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>> Channah.
>>> The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
> small
>>
>>> packet out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>>> things and tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>>
>>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later
> that
>>
>>> day
>>> to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his safety
>> deposit
>>> box at the bank.
>>>
>>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>>> never
>>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi who,
>> since
>>> her mother's illness and death has become a class leader,
experiences
>> more
>>> turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her family.
>>>
>>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>>> Criminals
>>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street.
>>> They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
> the
>>
>>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying on one
> of
>> the
>>> beds, tries to block out the sounds and odors of her abductors'
>> drinking
>>> party and spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When
> her
>>
>>> abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes
> binding
>> her
>>> arms off, slides off the bed and, braced on her now free hands
begins
>>> hopping to the door.
>>>
>>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
> tightly
>>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel
brings
>> her
>>> into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
> police,
>> but
>>> Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their custody.
>>>
>>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>>> known
>>> to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her newly
>> revealed
>>> identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the same
>> person
>>> she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>>
>>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
identity
>>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
> their
>>
>>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
>> and
>>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>> Painful
>>> questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 4
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 15:29:58 -0400
>> From: Danielle Montour <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com,Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <4cbdf1d0.4bfde50a.4d6e.fffff01b at mx.google.com>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Hi,
>> I like the synopsis a lot better now, however, the view keeps
>> switching between Pessy and Jennifer, and then some other
>> characters, and the transition between them is a little rough.
>> Maybe Making it flow a little better might help.
>>
>> Danni
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 13:04:51 -0400
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> You previously mentioned being an established freelance writer.
>> This is
>> what I found with regard to you and your novel while performing a
>> quick
>> Internet search:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "She is currently working on her first novel in a young adult
>> series about
>> observant Jewish young adults that she wants to market in the
>> mainstream
>> world. One may think that this is a topic for a niche audience,
>> but Judith
>> doesn't agree. "Today, anti-Semitism is rearing its ugly head
>> again. But
>> what do people hate?" She hopes to answer questions about
>> observant Judaism,
>> their unique lifestyle and give her readers a page turning
>> reading
>> experience that contains
>> mystery, intrigue, good guys, bad guys, issues surrounding life,
>> and yes,
>> death. This book will give her readers a riveting novel that the
>> young
>> adult, or perhaps adult reader, Won't be able to put down!"
>>
>> ***
>>
>> That, I think, is intriguing.
>>
>> Now, with that in mind, look over your synopsis and tell us if
>> the synopsis
>> you've prepared lives up to this claim?
>>
>> 1. It's very dry. You may as well write a bulleted list of
>> incidents.
>> First this happened, and then that happened. Then the character
>> reacted
>> like this...
>>
>> 2. Find a balance between what is intriguing and too much
>> enthusiasm. You
>> wrote:
>>
>> ***
>>
>> "They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal
>> and the
>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party."
>>
>> ***
>>
>> Are you writing to an editor, or are you writing to a teenager?
>> Remember
>> the novel audience is significantly different from your synopsis
>> audience.
>>
>> 3. The themes laid out in the Internet search result is
>> fascinating. Flush
>> out those themes in your synopsis. What you are turning in
>> should not be a
>> shopping list, unless the publisher is requesting a
>> chapter-by-chapter
>> outline. The synopsis, according to what I understand you need
>> to submit,
>> should be a panoramic view of the themes, trials and brief
>> character
>> sketches the reader might encounter. If I may offer a bit of
>> advice, try to
>> aim for the tone of a movie trailer. Think of the words the
>> narrators use
>> to convince you to watch the upcoming movie!
>>
>> It's looking good, but I recommend a bit more surgery.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves,
>> some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at all."--Sam
>> Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org]
> On
>> Behalf Of Judith Bron
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:41 PM
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state. Because
> of
>> her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional
>> relationship.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis
>> altogether.
>> Lori
>> On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> wrote:
>>
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this
is
>> more along the
>> lines
>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells
>> the book?
>> Thanks, Judith
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York, begins our novel
>> with a near death experience and questions about her identity. Her
>> foster mother, Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to be with her
> after
>> the
>> accident.
>> Sheila's flashback to the day she received the only objects left
>> by
>> Jennifer's
>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer, her
>> parents and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their
daughter.
>>
>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>> team. Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>> reveals that she can't begin an emotional relationship until she
>> understands more about her own identity.
>>
>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
> identity
>> as a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey
> to
>> find out just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>> being orphaned when she was two.
>>
>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer
>> and a
>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
> her
>> out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
>> entering her
>> present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by the
>> poverty shrouding her once affluent family.
>>
>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
ravaged
>> her body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an
Almighty
>> she has believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty
> has
>>
>> taken a
>> mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time in her
>> life she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
> to
>> overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
> been
>> a part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
> an
>> observant
>> Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer something
>> about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on
>> living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting
her
>> placed
>> with a
>> family in Jenna, New York. This family doesn't work out, and
>> Rabbi Levy,
>> Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and the
>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna, New York become entwined forever. The small book and letter
> left
>> by her parents has become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her
>> darkened bedrooms Jennifer clings to these possessions left by her
>> parents and talks to
>> them. She
>> eventually begins to learn the Hebrew language that both the small
> book
>> and letter are written in. She is able to learn from the letter that
>> her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high
>> school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name.
>> She shyly
>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
> Channah.
>> The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
small
>> packet out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>> things and
>> tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>
>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later
that
>> day to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his safety
>> deposit box at the bank.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she
>> will never
>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi who,
> since
>> her mother's illness and death has become a class leader, experiences
>> more
>> turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her
>> family.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
Criminals
>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted
> animal
>> and the criminals proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying
> on
>> one of the beds, tries to block out the sounds and odors of her
>> abductors' drinking
>> party and
>> spends the time reviewing school work in her mind. When her
abductors
>> fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer works the ropes binding her arms
>> off, slides off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins
> hopping
>> to the door.
>>
>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
>> tightly
>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel brings
>> her into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>> police, but Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their
> custody.
>>
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
> newly
>> revealed
>> identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the same
> person
>> she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
>> identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
>> their
>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
> and
>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>> Painful
>> questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>> Message: 5
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:02:01 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <60CC3B4167884551BB4B4C55A061BA03 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1
>>
>> Does this work? Judith
>>
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car, looks
> around
>> the strange place she ended up in. In front of her is a corridor
that
>> seems to be lit with flickering candles. Suddenly her long deceased
>> mother is talking to her. Jennifer, whose life is dismal due to the
>> constant anti Semitic derisions by her classmates, wants to stay with
>> her mother. But her mother tells her that its not yet her time to
> stay.
>> She has to learn, "To live. To love. To hope. To know who you are,
>> and what you are!" Jennifer tries to change her mother's mind, but
>> minutes later slams back into her body, aware of the pain.
>>
>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with her
> injured
>> foster daughter. While heading to her car she remembers the strange
>> messenger a few months earlier who delivered the only possessions
left
>> by Jennifer's parents, a little book with an inserted paper written
in
>> foreign writing. The messenger handed Sheila the items and left.
> After
>> closing the door Sheila ran to her window to watch him drive away,
but
>> no car appeared on the street or driveway. She couldn't see a man
>> walking away from the house. Now she thought about Jennifer's
> survival
>> of what should have been a deadly accident. She wondered about the
>> items in her possession that the messenger told her to give to
> Jennifer
>> on her seventeenth birthday. The story begins with all this mystery
>> surrounding an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>
>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg is
> talking
>> to her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive personality, Pessi
>> disagrees with her mother about getting involved with the girls at
>> school. Pessi insists that it's her life and if she wants to be
alone
>> so be it. She stomps out of the house like a belligerent child
> leaving
>> her mother on the sofa in the dining room of their poverty stricken
>> home.
>>
>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school. Her
>> classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the protective shell
>> Pessi has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life is a bout to change
>> forever.
>>
>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room to
help
>> her only to discover a cold motionless body lying on the mattress.
>> Totally bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's remains begging her
to
>> say something.
>>
>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty she has
>> believed in her entire life. For the first time in her life she has
> her
>> solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries to overcome her
>> devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish identity.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
> an
>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
>> getting her placed with a family in Jenna. This family doesn't work
>> out, and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into
> their
>> home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and the
>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
> Jenna
>> become entwined forever.
>>
>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a fixture in
>> Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew
> language
>> that both the small book and letter are written in. She is able to
>> learn from the letter her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
>> Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
> tells
>> the principal her Hebrew name. The principal asks her how she knows
>> this and Jennifer pulls the small packet out of her backpack. The
>> principal pales when she sees these things.
>>
>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet in a
>> safe place.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>> never accept this.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
> Criminals
>> get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna street.
>> They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
the
>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party. When her abductors fall
>> into a drunken slumber Jennifer works off the ropes binding her arms,
>> slides off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping
to
>> the door.
>>
>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall where
>> another hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the police.
>>
>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's true
>> identity are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time dealing with
> her
>> newly revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is
not
>> the same person she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
their
>> lives. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who and
> what
>> they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
Painfula
>> questions experienced by teenagers everywhere.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 6
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:15:24 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <5DC2A634551B4807ACD3A794DC14C921 at Rufus>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Judith,
>>
>> It's coming along really well. I would start off by informing the
>> reader that that there are two characters so they know not to get
>> side-tracked by the mention of two girls. Maybe you could relocate
> the
>> last paragraph to the top of the synopsis. Rephrase it of course so
>> that it reads more smoothly.
>>
>> Also, this sentence is positioned rather randomly:
>>
>> *Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>> never accept this.*
>>
>> I think I get the back and forth you're trying to achieve, but it's a
>> little dizzying. I would focus on one girl, then the other, and then
>> tie it up neatly with ominous tones of, "what will happen to these
> girls
>> who must struggle to find their identity..." If I weren't in a rush,
>> I'd give you a better sample, but I think you get what I mean.
>>
>> Joe
>>
>> "Hard work spotlights the character of people: some turn up their
>> sleeves, some turn up their noses, and some don't turn up at
> all."--Sam
>> Ewing
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
>> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Judith Bron
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 5:02 PM
>> To: Stylist
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> Does this work? Judith
>>
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car,
>> looks around the strange place she ended up in. In front of
>> her is a corridor that seems to be lit with flickering candles.
>> Suddenly her long deceased mother is talking to her.
>> Jennifer, whose life is dismal due to the constant anti Semitic
>> derisions by her classmates, wants to stay with her mother.
>> But her mother tells her that its not yet her time to stay.
>> She has to learn, "To live. To love. To hope. To know who
>> you are, and what you are!" Jennifer tries to change her
>> mother's mind, but minutes later slams back into her body,
>> aware of the pain.
>>
>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with
>> her injured foster daughter. While heading to her car she
>> remembers the strange messenger a few months earlier who
>> delivered the only possessions left by Jennifer's parents, a
>> little book with an inserted paper written in foreign writing.
>> The messenger handed Sheila the items and left. After closing
>> the door Sheila ran to her window to watch him drive away, but
>> no car appeared on the street or driveway. She couldn't see a
>> man walking away from the house. Now she thought about
>> Jennifer's survival of what should have been a deadly accident.
>> She wondered about the items in her possession that the
>> messenger told her to give to Jennifer on her seventeenth
>> birthday. The story begins with all this mystery surrounding
>> an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>
>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg
>> is talking to her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive
>> personality, Pessi disagrees with her mother about getting
>> involved with the girls at school. Pessi insists that it's her
>> life and if she wants to be alone so be it. She stomps out of
>> the house like a belligerent child leaving her mother on the
>> sofa in the dining room of their poverty stricken home.
>>
>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school.
>> Her classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the
>> protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life
>> is a bout to change forever.
>>
>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room
>> to help her only to discover a cold motionless body lying on
>> the mattress. Totally bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's
>> remains begging her to say something.
>>
>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty
>> she has believed in her entire life. For the first time in her
>> life she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she
>> tries to overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish
>> identity. Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting
>> her registered in an observant Jewish summer camp hoping that
>> the camp can teach Jennifer something about her roots and
>> identity. Jennifer returns from camp intent on living as an
>> observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in getting her
>> placed with a family in Jenna. This family doesn't work out,
>> and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into
>> their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove,
>> and the lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish
>> Girls' school in Jenna become entwined forever.
>>
>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a
>> fixture in Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn
>> the Hebrew language that both the small book and letter are
>> written in. She is able to learn from the letter her Hebrew
>> name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high
>> school principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew
>> name. She tells the principal her Hebrew name. The principal
>> asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the small packet
>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these things.
>>
>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet
>> in a safe place.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she
>> will never accept this.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>> Criminals get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from
>> a Jenna street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like
>> a hunted animal and the criminals proceed to have a drinking
>> party. When her abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer
>> works off the ropes binding her arms, slides off the bed and,
>> braced on her now free hands begins hopping to the door.
>>
>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall
>> where another hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the
> police.
>>
>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's
>> true identity are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time
>> dealing with her newly revealed identity. She can't deal with
>> the fact that she is not the same person she has lived with for
>> the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
>> identity throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic
>> changes in their lives. Both characters have to come to an
>> understanding of who and what they are in a world filled with
>> danger, fear and self doubt. Painfula questions experienced by
>> teenagers everywhere.
>>
>>
>> _______________________________________________
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>> http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/>
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>>
>> Message: 7
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 18:50:08 -0400
>> From: Danielle Montour <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <4cbe20b9.a26fe50a.587a.30d4 at mx.google.com>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Nice! That's really good! I like it.
>>
>> Danni
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net
>> To: Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:02:01 -0400
>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>> Does this work? Judith
>>
>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car, looks
>> around the strange place she ended up in. In front of her is a
>> corridor that seems to be lit with flickering candles. Suddenly
>> her long deceased mother is talking to her. Jennifer, whose life
>> is dismal due to the constant anti Semitic derisions by her
>> classmates, wants to stay with her mother. But her mother tells
>> her that its not yet her time to stay. She has to learn, "To
>> live. To love. To hope. To know who you are, and what you
>> are!" Jennifer tries to change her mother's mind, but minutes
>> later slams back into her body, aware of the pain.
>>
>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with her
>> injured foster daughter. While heading to her car she remembers
>> the strange messenger a few months earlier who delivered the only
>> possessions left by Jennifer's parents, a little book with an
>> inserted paper written in foreign writing. The messenger handed
>> Sheila the items and left. After closing the door Sheila ran to
>> her window to watch him drive away, but no car appeared on the
>> street or driveway. She couldn't see a man walking away from the
>> house. Now she thought about Jennifer's survival of what should
>> have been a deadly accident. She wondered about the items in her
>> possession that the messenger told her to give to Jennifer on her
>> seventeenth birthday. The story begins with all this mystery
>> surrounding an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>
>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg is
>> talking to her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive
>> personality, Pessi disagrees with her mother about getting
>> involved with the girls at school. Pessi insists that it's her
>> life and if she wants to be alone so be it. She stomps out of
>> the house like a belligerent child leaving her mother on the sofa
>> in the dining room of their poverty stricken home.
>>
>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school.
>> Her classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the
>> protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life is
>> a bout to change forever.
>>
>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room to
>> help her only to discover a cold motionless body lying on the
>> mattress. Totally bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's
>> remains begging her to say something.
>>
>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty she
>> has believed in her entire life. For the first time in her life
>> she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries
>> to overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish identity.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered
>> in an observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach
>> Jennifer something about her roots and identity. Jennifer
>> returns from camp intent on living as an observant Jewess. Again
>> Sheila is helpful in getting her placed with a family in Jenna.
>> This family doesn't work out, and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father,
>> agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
>> the lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls'
>> school in Jenna become entwined forever.
>>
>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a
>> fixture in Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn
>> the Hebrew language that both the small book and letter are
>> written in. She is able to learn from the letter her Hebrew name
>> is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high
>> school principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew
>> name. She tells the principal her Hebrew name. The principal
>> asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the small packet
>> out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>> things.
>>
>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet
>> in a safe place.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she
>> will never accept this.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>> Criminals get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from a
>> Jenna street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a
>> hunted animal and the criminals proceed to have a drinking party.
>> When her abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer works off
>> the ropes binding her arms, slides off the bed and, braced on her
>> now free hands begins hopping to the door.
>>
>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall where
>> another hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the
>> police.
>>
>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's true
>> identity are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time dealing
>> with her newly revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact
>> that she is not the same person she has lived with for the past
>> 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
>> identity throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic
>> changes in their lives. Both characters have to come to an
>> understanding of who and what they are in a world filled with
>> danger, fear and self doubt. Painfula questions experienced by
>> teenagers everywhere.
>>
>>
>> _______________________________________________
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>> http://www.nfb-writers-division.org
>> <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/
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>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 8
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 22:46:47 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <949B2C8F3C0D4EDE9BFEDBC5FB65E005 at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=response
>>
>> Thanks Danni, Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Danielle Montour" <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 6:50 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>>> Nice! That's really good! I like it.
>>>
>>> Danni
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net
>>> To: Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org
>>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 17:02:01 -0400
>>> Subject: [stylist] synopsis
>>>
>>> Does this work? Judith
>>>
>>> Jennifer Rabinowitz, unconscious after being hit by a car, looks
>>> around
>>> the strange place she ended up in. In front of her is a corridor
> that
>>
>>> seems to be lit with flickering candles. Suddenly her long deceased
>>> mother is talking to her. Jennifer, whose life is dismal due to the
>>> constant anti Semitic derisions by her classmates, wants to stay
with
>> her
>>> mother. But her mother tells her that its not yet her time to stay.
>> She
>>> has to learn, "To live. To love. To hope. To know who you are,
and
>> what
>>> you are!" Jennifer tries to change her mother's mind, but minutes
>> later
>>> slams back into her body, aware of the pain.
>>>
>>> Jennifer's foster mother, Sheila, spent most of the day with her
>>> injured
>>> foster daughter. While heading to her car she remembers the strange
>>> messenger a few months earlier who delivered the only possessions
> left
>> by
>>> Jennifer's parents, a little book with an inserted paper written in
>>> foreign writing. The messenger handed Sheila the items and left.
>> After
>>> closing the door Sheila ran to her window to watch him drive away,
> but
>> no
>>> car appeared on the street or driveway. She couldn't see a man
>> walking
>>> away from the house. Now she thought about Jennifer's survival of
>> what
>>> should have been a deadly accident. She wondered about the items in
>> her
>>> possession that the messenger told her to give to Jennifer on her
>>> seventeenth birthday. The story begins with all this mystery
>> surrounding
>>> an orphaned Jewish girl from Curtis Cove, New York.
>>>
>>> Meanwhile, on the same day in Jenna, New York Pessi Goldberg is
>>> talking to
>>> her very ill mother. Shrouded in her reclusive personality, Pessi
>>> disagrees with her mother about getting involved with the girls at
>> school.
>>> Pessi insists that it's her life and if she wants to be alone so be
>> it.
>>> She stomps out of the house like a belligerent child leaving her
>> mother on
>>> the sofa in the dining room of their poverty stricken home.
>>>
>>> That afternoon Pessi decides to attend a lecture at her school. Her
>>> classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring her out of the protective shell
>> Pessi
>>> has shrouded herself in. Pessi's life is a bout to change forever.
>>>
>>> One morning a few months later Pessi goes to her mother's room to
> help
>>
>>> her
>>> only to discover a cold motionless body lying on the mattress.
>> Totally
>>> bereft Pessi gently shakes her mother's remains begging her to say
>>> something.
>>>
>>> Heart broken, Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty she has
>>> believed in her entire life. For the first time in her life she has
>> her
>>> solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she tries to overcome her
>>> devastating loss.
>>>
>>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her depressing Jewish identity.
>>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
>> an
>>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent
>>> on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
getting
>> her
>>> placed with a family in Jenna. This family doesn't work out, and
>> Rabbi
>>> Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer into their home.
>>>
>>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and
the
>>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna
>>> become entwined forever.
>>>
>>> The small book and letter left by her parents has become a fixture
in
>>> Jennifer's backpack. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew
>> language
>>> that both the small book and letter are written in. She is able to
>> learn
>>> from the letter her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother Channah.
>>>
>>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
>> tells
>>> the principal her Hebrew name. The principal asks her how she knows
>> this
>>> and Jennifer pulls the small packet out of her backpack. The
>> principal
>>> pales when she sees these things.
>>>
>>> Later that day the principal asks Rabbi Levy to put the packet in a
>>> safe
>>> place.
>>>
>>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
>>> never
>>> accept this.
>>>
>>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
>>> Criminals
>>> get hold of this information and kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
street.
>>> They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted animal and
> the
>>
>>> criminals proceed to have a drinking party. When her abductors fall
>> into
>>> a drunken slumber Jennifer works off the ropes binding her arms,
>> slides
>>> off the bed and, braced on her now free hands begins hopping to the
>> door.
>>>
>>> With her legs still tightly bound she hobbles into the hall where
>>> another
>>> hotel guest brings her into his room and calls the police.
>>>
>>> Eventually the contents of the letter containing Jennifer's true
>>> identity
>>> are disclosed to her. But she has a hard time dealing with her
newly
>>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
>> same
>>> person she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>>
>>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their
identity
>>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in
> their
>>
>>> lives. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who and
>> what
>>> they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
> Painfula
>>
>>> questions experienced by teenagers everywhere.
>>>
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>> Message: 9
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 22:45:36 -0500
>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu>
>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Synopsis
>> Message-ID:
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>> Judith,
>> This is better, although some sentences still sound awkward.
(I.E.
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
newly
>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
> same
>> person she has lived with for the past 17 years. Could be:
Eventually,
>> Jennifer is freed and finds out about the contents of the letter.
>> Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her newly revealed identity.
She
>> struggles with the fact that she is not the same person she thought
> she
>> was for the past 17 years.)
>> Think about your main conflict. (This was the "hook" you used in
>> your query letter to that publisher.) Base everything in your
synopsis
>> off that main theme. I don't think you will need to mention the
> readers
>> or the novel itself in the synopsis. Just start with the main
> conflict,
>> stating it, along with the resolution, in a few sentences at the
>> beginning of your synopsis, then go from there. I hope you find this
>> helpful. --Katie
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 27
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 12:40:50 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Message-ID: <C9B70F9E06084868A7C2DB20A46E8CE5 at dell5150>
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>> reply-type=original
>>
>> I want it in there to demonstrate Jennifer's emotional state.
Because
>> of
>> her identity problems, she can't commit to an emotional relationship.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>>
>>
>> I still think you could leave Randy out of the synopsis altogether.
> Lori
>> On Oct 19, 2010, at 12:04:39 PM, "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> wrote:
>>
>> From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] synopsis
>> Date: October 19, 2010 12:04:39 PM EDT
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, "Writer's Division Mailing List"
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Hi Joe, Here's my latest attempt. I think this is more along the
lines
>> everyone was talking about. Bottom line, do you think it sells the
> book?
>> Thanks, Judith Jennifer Rabinowitz, living in Curtis Cove New York,
>> begins our novel with a near death experience and questions about her
>> identity. Her foster mother, Sheila has rushed to Jennifer's side to
> be
>> with her after the accident. Sheila's flashback to the day she
> received
>> the only objects left by
>> Jennifer's
>> long dead parents leaves the reader wondering about Jennifer, her
>> parents and the mystery surrounding the letter left to their
daughter.
>>
>> Jennifer's best friend is Randy, captain of her high school football
>> team. Randy wants more from Jennifer than friendship, but Jennifer
>> reveals that she can't begin an emotional relationship until she
>> understands more about her own identity.
>>
>> The reader is introduced to the bigotry surrounding Jennifer's
> identity
>> as a Jew. This bigotry is all she knows about Judaism on her journey
> to
>> find out just who and what she is in the world she has lived in since
>> being orphaned when she was two.
>>
>> Pessi Goldberg begins the story with a mother dieing of cancer and a
>> reclusive personality. Pessi's classmate Chavy Levy starts to bring
> her
>> out of the protective shell Pessi has shrouded herself in since
> entering
>> her present school the year before. Pessi's life is complicated by
the
>> poverty shrouding her once affluent family.
>>
>> Eventually Pessi's mother passes away from the cancer that has
ravaged
>> her body. Heart broken Pessi now questions the motives of an Almighty
>> she has believed in her entire life. She questions why the Almighty
> has
>> taken a mother away from her two younger siblings. For the first time
> in
>> her life she has her solid faith in the Almighty challenged as she
> tries
>> to overcome her devastating loss.
>>
>> Jennifer continues to puzzle over her Jewish identity that has only
> been
>> a part of her life during the chiding of anti-Semitic classmates.
>> Eventually her foster mother is helpful in getting her registered in
> an
>> observant Jewish summer camp hoping that the camp can teach Jennifer
>> something about her roots and identity. Jennifer returns from camp
>> intent on living as an observant Jewess. Again Sheila is helpful in
>> getting her placed with a family in Jenna, New York. This family
> doesn't
>> work out, and Rabbi Levy, Chavy's father, agrees to take Jennifer
into
>> their home.
>>
>> The lives of Jennifer from the public schools of Curtis Cove, and the
>> lives of Pessi and Chavy from an observant Jewish Girls' school in
>> Jenna, New York become entwined forever. The small book and letter
> left
>> by her parents has become a fixture in Jennifer's backpack. In her
>> darkened bedrooms Jennifer clings to these possessions left by her
>> parents and talks to them. She eventually begins to learn the Hebrew
>> language that both the small book and letter are written in. She is
> able
>> to learn from the letter that her Hebrew name is Breindle and her
> mother
>> Channah.
>>
>> The day before the Jewish New Year, Rosh Hashannah, the high school
>> principal Mrs. Newman asks Jennifer if she has a Hebrew name. She
> shyly
>> tells the principal her Hebrew name is Breindle and her mother
> Channah.
>> The principal asks her how she knows this and Jennifer pulls the
small
>> packet out of her backpack. The principal pales when she sees these
>> things and tells Jennifer to put them in a safe place.
>>
>> Rabbi Levy is an investment banker. The principal asks him later that
>> day to put the packet in a safe place and he places it in his safety
>> deposit box at the bank.
>>
>> Pessi learns that her father intends to remarry. She vows she will
> never
>> accept this change in their family. More problems for Pessi who,
since
>> her mother's illness and death has become a class leader, experiences
>> more turmoil over the change that is about to take place in her
> family.
>>
>> Unbeknownst to Jennifer, the letter has a financial section.
Criminals
>> get hold of this information and they kidnap Jennifer from a Jenna
>> street. They take her to a hotel room, tie her up like a hunted
animal
>> and the criminals proceed to have a drinking party. Jennifer, lying
on
>> one of the beds, tries to block out the sounds and odors of her
>> abductors' drinking party and spends the time reviewing school work
in
>> her mind. When her abductors fall into a drunken slumber Jennifer
> works
>> the ropes binding her arms off, slides off the bed and, braced on her
>> now free hands begins hopping to the door.
>>
>> She prays her abductors do not awaken and, with her legs still
tightly
>> bound, makes it into the hall where another guest in the hotel brings
>> her into his room where the guest's wife is packing. He calls the
>> police, but Jennifer's abductors try to get her back into their
> custody.
>>
>> Eventually Jennifer is freed and the contents of the letter becomes
>> known to Jennifer. But Jennifer has a hard time dealing with her
newly
>> revealed identity. She can't deal with the fact that she is not the
> same
>> person she has lived with for the past 17 years.
>>
>> Both Pessi and Jennifer have to overcome problems with their identity
>> throughout the novel. Both have to deal with drastic changes in their
>> lifestyle. Both characters have to come to an understanding of who
and
>> what they are in a world filled with danger, fear and self doubt.
>> Painful questions experienced by teenagers all over the world.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 10
>> Date: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:13:27 -0500
>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu>
>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>> Message-ID:
>> <EDBE9878551309429B866E05149A18ED4AC3A0A869 at exchmb1.uww.edu>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
>>
>> Hello everyone,
>> Since we are on the subject of synopses, I thought I'd throw mine
>> out there for critique. It is for my young adult, fantasy novel,
> titled
>> "Changes." Enjoy, and let me know what you think. Does this make you
>> want to read the book? --Katie
>>
>>
>> Changes Plot Synopsis
>>
>> Main Conflict:
>> Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a blind
>> person, but she has trouble accepting herself as a werewolf. She
> avoids
>> phasing unless it is the time of the full moon-or unless absolutely
>> necessary. While attending college in present-day Denver, Colorado,
>> circumstances force Casey to accept her duel nature.
>>
>> Synopsis:
>> On a warm Thursday in September, Casey's human best friend,
>> Justine, invites Casey to go to a club with her and her boyfriend,
> Tony,
>> that night. Casey agrees to go. She meets Tony at a restaurant
>> beforehand. She is horrified when she discovers that Tony isn't
human.
>> He doesn't eat anything at dinner, and his scent is too sweet. Casey
>> struggles to keep her inner wolf in check, so she doesn't change into
> a
>> wolf in the middle of the crowded restaurant.
>> Later, at the club, Casey is attacked by werewolf Rob. She is
>> rescued by werewolf Nate and his Alpha, Seb. Casey is attracted to
> Nate;
>> this is the first time she meets others of her own kind.
>> The next day, (Friday) Justine discovers Casey is a werewolf when
>> Casey phases in front of her accidentally.
>> Justine breaks down emotionally, but when Tony calls her, her
mood
>> shifts to one of a giddy romantic. Casey warns Justine, but it
doesn't
>> change Justine's feelings for Tony.
>> The following day, (Saturday) Casey and Justine go downtown, and
>> come across Nate and Seb. Nate tells Casey he is a werewolf, and he
>> knows that she is, too. She is glad to have found another like her.
> Nate
>> also tells Casey that his twin, Marissa, was with him when he phased
>> once. He fears that he may have bitten her, and that Marissa may be a
>> werewolf. They go to Marissa's dorm and discover she is still human.
>> Nate accidently phases in front of Marissa. Marissa faints, and Casey
>> hopes Marissa will just wake up and think it was a bad dream.
>> The day after that, (Sunday) Casey goes to get ice cream. She
> finds
>> Marissa working at the ice cream shop. Marissa has figured out that
> Nate
>> is a werewolf, and tries to talk to Casey about it; Casey is
reluctant
>> to share, although she likes Marissa.
>>
>> The next night, (Monday) Casey saves her roommate, Georgina, from
> a
>> vampire.
>> Later that night, Casey discovers that Tony's scent is similar to
>> that of the vampire, and he reveals to her and Justine that he is a
>> hybrid-half human, half vampire. Justine's love for him is unchanged.
>> The next day, (Tuesday) Nate and Casey go on a "date". Georgina
>> tells Casey that she is moving out immediately because she knows
about
>> Casey's duel nature. Casey accidentally phases in front of Georgina,
>> almost killing her.
>> Nate takes Casey to Ouzel Falls-where she was changed into a
>> werewolf. Casey remembers that it was Seb who bit her.
>> The day afterward, (Wednesday) Casey finds Marissa. In need of a
>> new roommate, Casey asks Marissa if she will move in with her.
Marissa
>> agrees, because she knows Nate will be hanging around Casey. She gets
> in
>> a car accident while moving her things to Casey's apartment. Nate
> gives
>> Marissa his blood, saving her life, but the blood changes Marissa
into
> a
>> werewolf.
>> A few days later, Casey kills Seb in a fight and becomes Alpha.
> She
>> discovers that she can feel Nate and Marissa's emotions, and she has
> an
>> influence over whether the twins change forms.
>> Two weeks pass, and Casey is consumed by her duties as Alpha.
>> Justine confronts Casey, saying that she has seen reports of a
>> guy-Seb--who looked to have died from wild dogs. His body was found
> in
>> a dumpster, and Justine suspects Casey. Casey is made aware of how
>> different she is from humans because of her instincts, and wonders if
>> werewolves have an immortal soul. Marissa and Nate come up with no
>> concrete evidence proving that they have souls. Casey is concerned
> about
>> where she will spend eternity, and whether she can still be friends
> with
>> Justine, even though they are members of different species.
>> A few nights later, (Thursday) Casey gets a call from Justine's
>> cell phone, but it isn't Justine-it is Georgina. Georgina informs
> Casey
>> that she has captured Justine, and Casey figures out that Georgina is
>> now a vampire. Casey and the twins are able to save Justine before
>> Georgina drinks her blood, but Georgina has bitten her. Georgina also
>> bites Casey, but Tony arrives and is able to suck both of their blood
>> clean.
>> The next day, (Friday) the same vampire tries to attack Marissa
> and
>> she is able to transmit her memories to Casey, since Casey is her
> Alpha.
>> When Casey arrives, she finds another werewolf, Jenae, waiting with
>> Marissa. Tony and Justine arrive. Tony thanks Casey for saving
> Justine
>> and invites her and Nate to go out with them that night. Casey
> accepts,
>> although she is suspicious of Tony's true motives. Later that night,
> he
>> gets Casey alone with him, and tries to kill her. Casey sends her
>> memories of the attack to Nate and Marissa, and Nate arrives just in
>> time. He kills Tony. Later that night, Nate reveals to Casey that he
>> plans to go home and work at a hospital to earn money for medical
>> school.
>> The following morning, (Saturday) Justine thanks Casey for saving
>> her from Tony and admits that Casey was right about him. Later that
>> morning, Nate takes Casey Geo-Caching in the woods and admits his
love
>> to her. This makes Marissa angry because she feels like Nate is
> leading
>> Casey on. Casey goes out for coffee with Jenae to find out more
>> information about her, since Jenae wants to join Casey's pack.
>> Meanwhile, Marissa attacks Nate, forcing him to leave before
> originally
>> planned.
>> Justine suggests that the girls go out for burgers, and while
they
>> are at the restaurant, Rob shows up. He points a gun at Casey, but
> Jenae
>> jumps in the way, taking the silver bullet instead. Casey accepts
> Jenae
>> into her pack as she dies.
>> Casey spends the next month in a daze. She meets Savannah, a
human
>> who likes to party. Depressed and inebriated most of the time, Casey
>> tries to cope with Jenae's death and Nate's absence.
>> Casey has an epiphany; she realizes that she only half-knows
>> herself, and decides to spend some time in her wolf form.
>> While in the woods running as a wolf, Casey meets an actual wolf
>> who almost instantly guesses what she is. He explains the
> differences-in
>> his mind-that exist between humans and wolves. Casey decides she
likes
>> being human better, because she feels the human world gives her goals
> to
>> achieve and a more purposeful life. That night, the vampire attacks
> Nate
>> while he is at work. Nate survives, escapes and sends his memories to
>> Casey.
>> The next day, Nate returns. Later that day, Savannah calls,
>> informing Casey that a vampire is looking for her. The vampire
> captures
>> Savannah, and Casey and her pack run to Savannah's rescue.
>> When they arrive, they find Savannah staring into space. Everyone
>> except for Casey falls into a similar state. Casey is unaffected
> because
>> she is blind and cannot see the illusions created by the vampire.
> When
>> Casey attacks the vampire, his movement frees the others from his
>> visions. Casey's pack destroys the vampire.
>> The twins tell Casey they saw the souls of the people the vampire
>> killed, including those of werewolves. Convinced she isn't damned for
>> eternity, Casey realizes she has accepted herself as a werewolf.
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 11
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 00:25:58 -0400
>> From: Danielle Montour <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>> Message-ID: <4cbe6f6f.8e4ee50a.33fd.0675 at mx.google.com>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1; format=flowed
>>
>> Hi,
>> Well, this synopsis seems more like a list of events than a
>> flowing transitional piece between each character's life. I
>> would like to read the book, and understand what you are saying,
>> however, I'd deliver it different, for example, even
>> "Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a blind
>> person, but she has trouble accepting herself as a werewolf."
>> might be a good starting sentence to your main synopsis.
>>
>> HTH
>>
>> Danni
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu
>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:13:27 -0500
>> Subject: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>>
>> Hello everyone,
>> Since we are on the subject of synopses, I thought I'd throw
>> mine out there for critique. It is for my young adult, fantasy
>> novel, titled "Changes." Enjoy, and let me know what you think.
>> Does this make you want to read the book?
>> --Katie
>>
>>
>> Changes Plot Synopsis
>>
>> Main Conflict:
>> Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a
>> blind person, but she has trouble accepting herself as a
>> werewolf. She avoids phasing unless it is the time of the full
>> moon-or unless absolutely necessary. While attending college in
>> present-day Denver, Colorado, circumstances force Casey to accept
>> her duel nature.
>>
>> Synopsis:
>> On a warm Thursday in September, Casey's human best friend,
>> Justine, invites Casey to go to a club with her and her
>> boyfriend, Tony, that night. Casey agrees to go. She meets Tony
>> at a restaurant beforehand. She is horrified when she discovers
>> that Tony isn't human. He doesn't eat anything at dinner, and
>> his scent is too sweet. Casey struggles to keep her inner wolf
>> in check, so she doesn't change into a wolf in the middle of the
>> crowded restaurant.
>> Later, at the club, Casey is attacked by werewolf Rob. She
>> is rescued by werewolf Nate and his Alpha, Seb. Casey is
>> attracted to Nate; this is the first time she meets others of her
>> own kind.
>> The next day, (Friday) Justine discovers Casey is a werewolf
>> when Casey phases in front of her accidentally.
>> Justine breaks down emotionally, but when Tony calls her,
>> her mood shifts to one of a giddy romantic. Casey warns Justine,
>> but it doesn't change Justine's feelings for Tony.
>> The following day, (Saturday) Casey and Justine go downtown,
>> and come across Nate and Seb. Nate tells Casey he is a werewolf,
>> and he knows that she is, too. She is glad to have found another
>> like her. Nate also tells Casey that his twin, Marissa, was with
>> him when he phased once. He fears that he may have bitten her,
>> and that Marissa may be a werewolf. They go to Marissa's dorm
>> and discover she is still human. Nate accidently phases in front
>> of Marissa. Marissa faints, and Casey hopes Marissa will just
>> wake up and think it was a bad dream.
>> The day after that, (Sunday) Casey goes to get ice cream.
>> She finds Marissa working at the ice cream shop. Marissa has
>> figured out that Nate is a werewolf, and tries to talk to Casey
>> about it; Casey is reluctant to share, although she likes
>> Marissa.
>>
>> The next night, (Monday) Casey saves her roommate, Georgina,
>> from a vampire.
>> Later that night, Casey discovers that Tony's scent is
>> similar to that of the vampire, and he reveals to her and Justine
>> that he is a hybrid-half human, half vampire. Justine's love for
>> him is unchanged.
>> The next day, (Tuesday) Nate and Casey go on a "date".
>> Georgina tells Casey that she is moving out immediately because
>> she knows about Casey's duel nature. Casey accidentally phases
>> in front of Georgina, almost killing her.
>> Nate takes Casey to Ouzel Falls-where she was changed into a
>> werewolf. Casey remembers that it was Seb who bit her.
>> The day afterward, (Wednesday) Casey finds Marissa. In need
>> of a new roommate, Casey asks Marissa if she will move in with
>> her. Marissa agrees, because she knows Nate will be hanging
>> around Casey. She gets in a car accident while moving her things
>> to Casey's apartment. Nate gives Marissa his blood, saving her
>> life, but the blood changes Marissa into a werewolf.
>> A few days later, Casey kills Seb in a fight and becomes
>> Alpha. She discovers that she can feel Nate and Marissa's
>> emotions, and she has an influence over whether the twins change
>> forms.
>> Two weeks pass, and Casey is consumed by her duties as
>> Alpha.
>> Justine confronts Casey, saying that she has seen reports of
>> a guy-Seb--who looked to have died from wild dogs. His body was
>> found in a dumpster, and Justine suspects Casey. Casey is made
>> aware of how different she is from humans because of her
>> instincts, and wonders if werewolves have an immortal soul.
>> Marissa and Nate come up with no concrete evidence proving that
>> they have souls. Casey is concerned about where she will spend
>> eternity, and whether she can still be friends with Justine, even
>> though they are members of different species.
>> A few nights later, (Thursday) Casey gets a call from
>> Justine's cell phone, but it isn't Justine-it is Georgina.
>> Georgina informs Casey that she has captured Justine, and Casey
>> figures out that Georgina is now a vampire. Casey and the twins
>> are able to save Justine before Georgina drinks her blood, but
>> Georgina has bitten her. Georgina also bites Casey, but Tony
>> arrives and is able to suck both of their blood clean.
>> The next day, (Friday) the same vampire tries to attack
>> Marissa and she is able to transmit her memories to Casey, since
>> Casey is her Alpha. When Casey arrives, she finds another
>> werewolf, Jenae, waiting with Marissa. Tony and Justine arrive.
>> Tony thanks Casey for saving Justine and invites her and Nate to
>> go out with them that night. Casey accepts, although she is
>> suspicious of Tony's true motives. Later that night, he gets
>> Casey alone with him, and tries to kill her. Casey sends her
>> memories of the attack to Nate and Marissa, and Nate arrives just
>> in time. He kills Tony. Later that night, Nate reveals to Casey
>> that he plans to go home and work at a hospital to earn money for
>> medical school.
>> The following morning, (Saturday) Justine thanks Casey for
>> saving her from Tony and admits that Casey was right about him.
>> Later that morning, Nate takes Casey Geo-Caching in the woods and
>> admits his love to her. This makes Marissa angry because she
>> feels like Nate is leading Casey on. Casey goes out for coffee
>> with Jenae to find out more information about her, since Jenae
>> wants to join Casey's pack. Meanwhile, Marissa attacks Nate,
>> forcing him to leave before originally planned.
>> Justine suggests that the girls go out for burgers, and
>> while they are at the restaurant, Rob shows up. He points a gun
>> at Casey, but Jenae jumps in the way, taking the silver bullet
>> instead. Casey accepts Jenae into her pack as she dies.
>> Casey spends the next month in a daze. She meets Savannah,
>> a human who likes to party. Depressed and inebriated most of the
>> time, Casey tries to cope with Jenae's death and Nate's absence.
>> Casey has an epiphany; she realizes that she only half-knows
>> herself, and decides to spend some time in her wolf form.
>> While in the woods running as a wolf, Casey meets an actual
>> wolf who almost instantly guesses what she is. He explains the
>> differences-in his mind-that exist between humans and wolves.
>> Casey decides she likes being human better, because she feels the
>> human world gives her goals to achieve and a more purposeful
>> life. That night, the vampire attacks Nate while he is at work.
>> Nate survives, escapes and sends his memories to Casey.
>> The next day, Nate returns. Later that day, Savannah calls,
>> informing Casey that a vampire is looking for her. The vampire
>> captures Savannah, and Casey and her pack run to Savannah's
>> rescue.
>> When they arrive, they find Savannah staring into space.
>> Everyone except for Casey falls into a similar state. Casey is
>> unaffected because she is blind and cannot see the illusions
>> created by the vampire. When Casey attacks the vampire, his
>> movement frees the others from his visions. Casey's pack
>> destroys the vampire.
>> The twins tell Casey they saw the souls of the people the
>> vampire killed, including those of werewolves. Convinced she
>> isn't damned for eternity, Casey realizes she has accepted
>> herself as a werewolf.
>>
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>> Message: 12
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 08:49:41 -0400
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
>> Message-ID: <BCCAD78B50754350BB9C924F58412AF0 at Rufus>
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>> How to Write a Synopsis
>>
>> by Marg Gilks
>>
>> Writers will spend years writing, lovingly polishing and then
> marketing
>> a novel, and yet they shrug off the synopsis with a comment like "I
> hate
>> writing synopses."
>>
>> I hate writing synopses, too. I used to hate them because the ones I
>> wrote sucked all the life from the novel, reducing it to bare-bones
>> sentences that did nothing to capture the depth of the novel itself.
> Now
>> I hate writing synopses because they are much more difficult to write
>> than the novel ever was. It's not easy distilling 100,000-odd words
> into
>> a few pages. But it's important.
>>
>> The synopsis is the most important part of your submission package
> and,
>> as such, it has to be developed and sweated over and polished with
the
>> same attention you devoted to the novel itself. Along with the cover
>> letter, the synopsis is what sells the editor on the manuscript. If
> they
>> don't see anything they like in the synopsis, they won't even glance
> at
>> your chapter samples.
>>
>> The synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb for
>> your novel (the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the
>> publisher's art and advertising departments, if the novel is
> purchased),
>> and write it as though you're trying to entice a casual bookstore
>> browser to buy the novel and read it. Which isn't too far from
>> actuality.
>>
>> "Okay," you say, "you've sold me. This is something I have to do, and
> do
>> well. But how?"
>>
>>
>> One Step at a Time
>> Rather than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it
> down.
>> Do it step by step.
>>
>> The first step, of course, is realizing that you're going to have to
>> write a synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The
>> best time to realize this is just before you sit down with your
>> manuscript for the final reading preparatory to declaring the thing
>> completed.
>>
>> Sit down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As
you
>> finish reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph
> summary
>> of what happened where, and to which character, in that chapter.
>>
>> Notice any themes running through your chapters as you're reading?
>> Symbolism you didn't realize you'd woven through the story while you
>> were slogging away at the computer for all those months? (The
>> subconscious mind is a wonderful thing.) Take note of themes, too.
You
>> may just discover your one-line story summary that agents and editors
>> like so much, if you didn't know what it was before. Or even if you
>> thought you knew what it was, before (surprise, says the Muse, you
> were
>> wrong).
>>
>> What you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel
>> outline, what I call my author's outline. This is pretty dry reading,
>> and since chapter-by-chapter outlines seem to have fallen out of
favor
>> with editors and agents, this will likely remain one of your most
>> valuable writing tools, and that's about it. Don't throw this away
> when
>> you've done your synopsis, either. You may know the story intimately
>> now, but you do forget details over time. You may decide to revise
the
>> novel in the future, and this outline will help you. I've used mine
to
>> make sure I'm not duplicating character names from one project to the
>> next. (The subconscious mind can also booby-trap you.) Reading an
>> outline is much easier than leafing through or rereading an entire
>> novel.
>>
>> Anyway. There is an immediate use for that outline. What you are
> doing,
>> basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
> manageable
>> packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most important plot
> points
>> in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
>>
>> Notice I said the most important points. We're talking about only
> those
>> events and motivations that moved the story forward in a major way.
>> We're talking about only the most important characters, the ones your
>> reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right now, we
>> are striving for bare-bones.
>>
>> "Yup," you say, "that's bare-bones, all right, and just as boring as
>> ever."
>>
>> Yes, it is. It's also probably still too long, but don't worry about
>> that right now.
>>
>>
>> Let's See Some Enthusiasm!
>> Now I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that
>> synopsis:
>>
>>
>> Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the novel, one that
> will
>> pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her want to buy
> the
>> book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a feel for
>> how it's done.
>>
>>
>> You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing it to your
> friend.
>> You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and shot him and
>> that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic, that sounds
>> like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things like,
> "The
>> good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the evil Dr.
> Death,
>> the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after Dr. Death, falls,
>> somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him with the Good
Guy
>> Death-ray to save the world."
>>
>> That's how your synopsis is going to sound, when you're done:
>> enthusiastic. Enticing. A description that makes the reader want to
> pick
>> up the manuscript and find out how this happens! How can you make
your
>> synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main character and his or
> her
>> crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or quote briefly from the novel
>> itself. Don't neglect to reveal the character's emotions and
>> motivations, those points that explain why a character does
something,
>> but keep it brief. If the setting is exotic, inject a taste of it
into
>> the synopsis with a brief paragraph. This includes any background
>> information that is absolutely necessary for the reader to understand
>> the story. Build excitement as you near the conclusion of the story
>> summary by using shorter sentences and paragraphs. The synopsis is a
>> sample of your writing; it is a taste of what reading the actual
novel
>> will be like, so give it your all.
>>
>> Don't forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of
the
>> story that you discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your
>> cover letter. Editors and agents like having this distillation; not
> only
>> will it pique their interest, but it's something they can use when
>> presenting the novel to the buying board. It's also something you can
>> use, the next time someone politely asks you, "What's your novel
> about?"
>>
>> "Wow," you say at last, "this is pretty good! It reads almost as good
> as
>> the novel!"
>>
>>
>> Shalts and Shalt Nots
>> But wait, there's more. Now we get to the "thou shall and shalt
nots."
>>
>> First, acceptable length. One guideline is to allow one synopsis page
>> for every twenty-five pages of manuscript, but even that could be
> longer
>> than most editors and agents want to see. Most editors and agents,
> busy
>> people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to ten pages. The
>> busier ones like five pages at most. I personally consider two pages
>> ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight page. If
>> you've written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't worry if it's
> ten
>> or more pages long
>> -- but it had better be gripping.
>>
>> Edit, edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the
>> synopsis must remain interesting and supply the necessary
information.
>> Yes, this is the hardest part. Don't know what to cut? Lose the
>> adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and "flavor" of the
story.
>>
>> You have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the
> first
>> three chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four. Don't
> leave
>> out the ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to request the
> full
>> manuscript in order to find out what happens. What they will do is
>> decide you're an amateur.
>>
>> No matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is
always
>> written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to
>> Jerry went to the bullfight.)
>>
>> Format: there seems to be disagreement as to whether you should
> single-
>> or double-space your synopsis. To be on the safe side, double-space;
>> it's easier to read. In terms of layout, format your synopsis much as
>> you did your novel, or a short story.
>>
>> The first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it in
>> CAPITAL letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by
>> referring to a character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans" the
>> first time, "Jerry" the next, and "the doctor" another time). It's
> also
>> advisable to identify which character(s) is the point of view
> character
>> by typing "(POV)" after the first instance of the character's name.
>>
>> Yes, writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this
> way:
>> not only are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're honing
> your
>> writing skills at the same time.
>>
>>
>> Copyright C 2001 Marg Gilks
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Message: 13
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 09:02:03 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>> Message-ID: <8CE371F3E7A74E4AAA97CB5F8C83329D at dell5150>
>> Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset=iso-8859-1;
>> reply-type=response
>>
>> I agree that it sounds like a list of events. What drove me nuts was
>> the
>> constant reference to days (Monday, Tuesday etc.). It is a list of
>> events.
>> Try to make it more creative.
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Danielle Montour" <hypoplexer at gmail.com>
>> To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 12:25 AM
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>>
>>
>>> Hi,
>>> Well, this synopsis seems more like a list of events than a flowing
>>> transitional piece between each character's life. I would like to
>> read
>>> the book, and understand what you are saying, however, I'd deliver
it
>>> different, for example, even "Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is
>> okay
>>> with herself as a blind person, but she has trouble accepting
herself
>> as a
>>> werewolf." might be a good starting sentence to your main synopsis.
>>>
>>> HTH
>>>
>>> Danni
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Watson, Katherine M" <WatsonKM05 at uww.edu
>>> To: "stylist at nfbnet.org" <stylist at nfbnet.org
>>> Date sent: Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:13:27 -0500
>>> Subject: [stylist] Changes: a plot synopsis
>>>
>>> Hello everyone,
>>> Since we are on the subject of synopses, I thought I'd throw
mine
>>> out
>>> there for critique. It is for my young adult, fantasy novel, titled
>>> "Changes." Enjoy, and let me know what you think. Does this make
you
>> want
>>> to read the book?
>>> --Katie
>>>
>>>
>>> Changes Plot Synopsis
>>>
>>> Main Conflict:
>>> Eighteen-year-old Casey Newman is okay with herself as a blind
>>> person,
>>> but she has trouble accepting herself as a werewolf. She avoids
>> phasing
>>> unless it is the time of the full moon-or unless absolutely
> necessary.
>>
>>> While attending college in present-day Denver, Colorado,
> circumstances
>>
>>> force Casey to accept her duel nature.
>>>
>>> Synopsis:
>>> On a warm Thursday in September, Casey's human best friend,
>>> Justine,
>>> invites Casey to go to a club with her and her boyfriend, Tony, that
>>> night. Casey agrees to go. She meets Tony at a restaurant
>> beforehand.
>>> She is horrified when she discovers that Tony isn't human. He
> doesn't
>> eat
>>> anything at dinner, and his scent is too sweet. Casey struggles to
>> keep
>>> her inner wolf in check, so she doesn't change into a wolf in the
>> middle
>>> of the crowded restaurant.
>>> Later, at the club, Casey is attacked by werewolf Rob. She is
>> rescued
>>> by werewolf Nate and his Alpha, Seb. Casey is attracted to Nate;
> this
>> is
>>> the first time she meets others of her own kind.
>>> The next day, (Friday) Justine discovers Casey is a werewolf
when
>>> Casey phases in front of her accidentally.
>>> Justine breaks down emotionally, but when Tony calls her, her
> mood
>>
>>> shifts to one of a giddy romantic. Casey warns Justine, but it
>> doesn't
>>> change Justine's feelings for Tony.
>>> The following day, (Saturday) Casey and Justine go downtown, and
>> come
>>> across Nate and Seb. Nate tells Casey he is a werewolf, and he
knows
>> that
>>> she is, too. She is glad to have found another like her. Nate also
>> tells
>>> Casey that his twin, Marissa, was with him when he phased once. He
>> fears
>>> that he may have bitten her, and that Marissa may be a werewolf.
> They
>> go
>>> to Marissa's dorm and discover she is still human. Nate accidently
>> phases
>>> in front of Marissa. Marissa faints, and Casey hopes Marissa will
>> just
>>> wake up and think it was a bad dream.
>>> The day after that, (Sunday) Casey goes to get ice cream. She
>> finds
>>> Marissa working at the ice cream shop. Marissa has figured out that
>> Nate
>>> is a werewolf, and tries to talk to Casey about it; Casey is
> reluctant
>> to
>>> share, although she likes Marissa.
>>>
>>> The next night, (Monday) Casey saves her roommate, Georgina,
from
>>> a
>>> vampire.
>>> Later that night, Casey discovers that Tony's scent is similar
to
>> that
>>> of the vampire, and he reveals to her and Justine that he is a
>> hybrid-half
>>> human, half vampire. Justine's love for him is unchanged.
>>> The next day, (Tuesday) Nate and Casey go on a "date". Georgina
>> tells
>>> Casey that she is moving out immediately because she knows about
>> Casey's
>>> duel nature. Casey accidentally phases in front of Georgina, almost
>>> killing her.
>>> Nate takes Casey to Ouzel Falls-where she was changed into a
>> werewolf.
>>> Casey remembers that it was Seb who bit her.
>>> The day afterward, (Wednesday) Casey finds Marissa. In need of
a
>> new
>>> roommate, Casey asks Marissa if she will move in with her. Marissa
>>> agrees, because she knows Nate will be hanging around Casey. She
> gets
>> in
>>> a car accident while moving her things to Casey's apartment. Nate
>> gives
>>> Marissa his blood, saving her life, but the blood changes Marissa
> into
>> a
>>> werewolf.
>>> A few days later, Casey kills Seb in a fight and becomes Alpha.
>> She
>>> discovers that she can feel Nate and Marissa's emotions, and she has
>> an
>>> influence over whether the twins change forms.
>>> Two weeks pass, and Casey is consumed by her duties as Alpha.
>>> Justine confronts Casey, saying that she has seen reports of a
>>> guy-Seb--who looked to have died from wild dogs. His body was
found
>> in a
>>> dumpster, and Justine suspects Casey. Casey is made aware of how
>>> different she is from humans because of her instincts, and wonders
if
>>> werewolves have an immortal soul. Marissa and Nate come up with no
>>> concrete evidence proving that they have souls. Casey is concerned
>> about
>>> where she will spend eternity, and whether she can still be friends
>> with
>>> Justine, even though they are members of different species.
>>> A few nights later, (Thursday) Casey gets a call from Justine's
>> cell
>>> phone, but it isn't Justine-it is Georgina. Georgina informs Casey
>> that
>>> she has captured Justine, and Casey figures out that Georgina is now
> a
>>
>>> vampire. Casey and the twins are able to save Justine before
> Georgina
>>
>>> drinks her blood, but Georgina has bitten her. Georgina also bites
>> Casey,
>>> but Tony arrives and is able to suck both of their blood clean.
>>> The next day, (Friday) the same vampire tries to attack Marissa
>> and
>>> she is able to transmit her memories to Casey, since Casey is her
>> Alpha.
>>> When Casey arrives, she finds another werewolf, Jenae, waiting with
>>> Marissa. Tony and Justine arrive. Tony thanks Casey for saving
>> Justine
>>> and invites her and Nate to go out with them that night. Casey
>> accepts,
>>> although she is suspicious of Tony's true motives. Later that
night,
>> he
>>> gets Casey alone with him, and tries to kill her. Casey sends her
>>> memories of the attack to Nate and Marissa, and Nate arrives just in
>> time.
>>> He kills Tony. Later that night, Nate reveals to Casey that he
plans
>> to
>>> go home and work at a hospital to earn money for medical school.
>>> The following morning, (Saturday) Justine thanks Casey for
saving
>> her
>>> from Tony and admits that Casey was right about him. Later that
>> morning,
>>> Nate takes Casey Geo-Caching in the woods and admits his love to
her.
>>> This makes Marissa angry because she feels like Nate is leading
Casey
>> on.
>>> Casey goes out for coffee with Jenae to find out more information
>> about
>>> her, since Jenae wants to join Casey's pack. Meanwhile, Marissa
>> attacks
>>> Nate, forcing him to leave before originally planned.
>>> Justine suggests that the girls go out for burgers, and while
> they
>> are
>>> at the restaurant, Rob shows up. He points a gun at Casey, but
Jenae
>>> jumps in the way, taking the silver bullet instead. Casey accepts
>> Jenae
>>> into her pack as she dies.
>>> Casey spends the next month in a daze. She meets Savannah, a
>> human
>>> who likes to party. Depressed and inebriated most of the time,
Casey
>>> tries to cope with Jenae's death and Nate's absence.
>>> Casey has an epiphany; she realizes that she only half-knows
>> herself,
>>> and decides to spend some time in her wolf form.
>>> While in the woods running as a wolf, Casey meets an actual wolf
>> who
>>> almost instantly guesses what she is. He explains the
differences-in
>> his
>>> mind-that exist between humans and wolves. Casey decides she likes
>> being
>>> human better, because she feels the human world gives her goals to
>> achieve
>>> and a more purposeful life. That night, the vampire attacks Nate
>> while he
>>> is at work. Nate survives, escapes and sends his memories to Casey.
>>> The next day, Nate returns. Later that day, Savannah calls,
>> informing
>>> Casey that a vampire is looking for her. The vampire captures
>> Savannah,
>>> and Casey and her pack run to Savannah's rescue.
>>> When they arrive, they find Savannah staring into space.
> Everyone
>>
>>> except for Casey falls into a similar state. Casey is unaffected
>> because
>>> she is blind and cannot see the illusions created by the vampire.
>> When
>>> Casey attacks the vampire, his movement frees the others from his
>> visions.
>>> Casey's pack destroys the vampire.
>>> The twins tell Casey they saw the souls of the people the
vampire
>>> killed, including those of werewolves. Convinced she isn't damned
> for
>>
>>> eternity, Casey realizes she has accepted herself as a werewolf.
>>>
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>> Message: 14
>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 09:23:27 -0400
>> From: Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
>> <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
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>>
>> Joe, This is fabulous! I'm going back to try to do what she's
>> suggesting.
>> Later, Judith
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Joe Orozco" <jsorozco at gmail.com>
>> To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 8:49 AM
>> Subject: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
>>
>>
>>> How to Write a Synopsis
>>>
>>> by Marg Gilks
>>>
>>> Writers will spend years writing, lovingly polishing and then
>>> marketing a novel, and yet they shrug off the synopsis with a
comment
>>> like "I hate writing synopses."
>>>
>>> I hate writing synopses, too. I used to hate them because the ones I
>>> wrote sucked all the life from the novel, reducing it to bare-bones
>>> sentences that did nothing to capture the depth of the novel itself.
>>> Now I hate writing synopses because they are much more difficult to
>>> write than the novel ever was. It's not easy distilling 100,000-odd
>>> words into a few pages. But it's important.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is the most important part of your submission package
>>> and, as such, it has to be developed and sweated over and polished
>>> with the same attention you devoted to the novel itself. Along with
>>> the cover letter, the synopsis is what sells the editor on the
>>> manuscript. If they don't see anything they like in the synopsis,
> they
>>
>>> won't even glance at your chapter samples.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb
for
>>> your novel (the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the
>>> publisher's art and advertising departments, if the novel is
>>> purchased), and write it as though you're trying to entice a casual
>>> bookstore browser to buy the novel and read it. Which isn't too far
>>> from actuality.
>>>
>>> "Okay," you say, "you've sold me. This is something I have to do,
and
>>> do well. But how?"
>>>
>>>
>>> One Step at a Time
>>> Rather than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it
>>> down.
>>> Do
>>> it step by step.
>>>
>>> The first step, of course, is realizing that you're going to have to
>>> write
>>> a
>>> synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The best
> time
>> to
>>> realize this is just before you sit down with your manuscript for
the
>>> final
>>> reading preparatory to declaring the thing completed.
>>>
>>> Sit down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As
> you
>>
>>> finish reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph
>>> summary of what happened where, and to which character, in that
>>> chapter.
>>>
>>> Notice any themes running through your chapters as you're reading?
>>> Symbolism
>>> you didn't realize you'd woven through the story while you were
>> slogging
>>> away at the computer for all those months? (The subconscious mind is
> a
>>> wonderful thing.) Take note of themes, too. You may just discover
> your
>>> one-line story summary that agents and editors like so much, if you
>> didn't
>>> know what it was before. Or even if you thought you knew what it
was,
>>> before
>>> (surprise, says the Muse, you were wrong).
>>>
>>> What you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel
>>> outline,
>>> what I call my author's outline. This is pretty dry reading, and
> since
>>> chapter-by-chapter outlines seem to have fallen out of favor with
>> editors
>>> and agents, this will likely remain one of your most valuable
writing
>>> tools,
>>> and that's about it. Don't throw this away when you've done your
>> synopsis,
>>> either. You may know the story intimately now, but you do forget
>> details
>>> over time. You may decide to revise the novel in the future, and
this
>>> outline will help you. I've used mine to make sure I'm not
> duplicating
>>> character names from one project to the next. (The subconscious mind
>> can
>>> also booby-trap you.) Reading an outline is much easier than leafing
>>> through
>>> or rereading an entire novel.
>>>
>>> Anyway. There is an immediate use for that outline. What you are
>>> doing, basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
>>> manageable packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most
> important
>>
>>> plot points in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
>>>
>>> Notice I said the most important points. We're talking about only
>>> those events and motivations that moved the story forward in a major
>>> way. We're talking about only the most important characters, the
ones
>>> your reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right
>>> now, we are striving for bare-bones.
>>>
>>> "Yup," you say, "that's bare-bones, all right, and just as boring as
>>> ever."
>>>
>>> Yes, it is. It's also probably still too long, but don't worry about
>>> that right now.
>>>
>>>
>>> Let's See Some Enthusiasm!
>>> Now I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that
>>> synopsis:
>>>
>>>
>>> Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the novel, one that
>>> will pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her want
to
>>> buy the book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a
>>> feel for how it's done.
>>>
>>>
>>> You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing it to your
>>> friend. You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and shot
>>> him and that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic,
that
>>> sounds like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things
>>> like, "The good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the
>>> evil Dr. Death, the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after
> Dr.
>>
>>> Death, falls, somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him
>>> with the Good Guy Death-ray to save the world."
>>>
>>> That's how your synopsis is going to sound, when you're done:
>>> enthusiastic.
>>> Enticing. A description that makes the reader want to pick up the
>>> manuscript
>>> and find out how this happens!
>>> How can you make your synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main
>>> character and his or her crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or
> quote
>>> briefly from the novel itself. Don't neglect to reveal the
> character's
>>> emotions and motivations, those points that explain why a character
>> does
>>> something, but keep it brief. If the setting is exotic, inject a
> taste
>> of
>>> it
>>> into the synopsis with a brief paragraph. This includes any
> background
>>> information that is absolutely necessary for the reader to
understand
>>the
>>> story. Build excitement as you near the conclusion of the story
>> summary by
>>> using shorter sentences and paragraphs. The synopsis is a sample of
>> your
>>> writing; it is a taste of what reading the actual novel will be
like,
>> so
>>> give it your all.
>>>
>>> Don't forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of
> the
>>> story
>>> that you discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your cover
>>> letter.
>>> Editors and agents like having this distillation; not only will it
>> pique
>>> their interest, but it's something they can use when presenting the
>> novel
>>> to
>>> the buying board. It's also something you can use, the next time
>> someone
>>> politely asks you, "What's your novel about?"
>>>
>>> "Wow," you say at last, "this is pretty good! It reads almost as
good
>>> as
>>> the
>>> novel!"
>>>
>>>
>>> Shalts and Shalt Nots
>>> But wait, there's more. Now we get to the "thou shall and shalt
> nots."
>>>
>>> First, acceptable length. One guideline is to allow one synopsis
page
>>> for every twenty-five pages of manuscript, but even that could be
>>> longer than most editors and agents want to see. Most editors and
>>> agents, busy people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to
> ten
>>
>>> pages. The busier ones like five pages at most. I personally
consider
>>> two pages ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight
>>> page. If you've written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't
worry
>>> if it's ten or more pages long
>>> -- but it had better be gripping.
>>>
>>> Edit, edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the
>>> synopsis must remain interesting and supply the necessary
> information.
>>
>>> Yes, this is the hardest part. Don't know what to cut? Lose the
>>> adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and "flavor" of the
> story.
>>>
>>> You have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the
>>> first three chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four.
>>> Don't leave out the ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to
>>> request the full manuscript in order to find out what happens. What
>>> they will do is decide you're an amateur.
>>>
>>> No matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is
> always
>>
>>> written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to
>>> Jerry went to the bullfight.)
>>>
>>> Format: there seems to be disagreement as to whether you should
>>> single- or double-space your synopsis. To be on the safe side,
>>> double-space; it's easier to read. In terms of layout, format your
>>> synopsis much as you did your novel, or a short story.
>>>
>>> The first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it
in
>>> CAPITAL letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by
>>> referring to a character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans"
the
>>> first time, "Jerry" the next, and "the doctor" another time). It's
>>> also advisable to identify which character(s) is the point of view
>>> character by typing "(POV)" after the first instance of the
>>> character's name.
>>>
>>> Yes, writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this
>>> way:
>>> not
>>> only are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're honing your
>>> writing
>>> skills at the same time.
>>>
>>>
>>> Copyright C 2001 Marg Gilks
>>>
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>> Date: Wed, 20 Oct 2010 11:21:12 -0400
>> From: Donna Hill <penatwork at epix.net>
>> To: jsorozco at gmail.com, Writer's Division Mailing List
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>> Subject: Re: [stylist] How to Write a Synopsis
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>> Hi Joe,
>> Thanks so much for finding and posting this. It's excellent. I
haven't
>> yet re located the section in Sarah Parsons Zackheim's "Getting Your
>> Book Published for Dummies" about query letters and synopses for
>> fiction, but, if memory serves, this article is in agreement with her
>> perspective.
>>
>> My gut reaction in creating my own synopsis, which isn't done yet, is
>> that I'd like to keep it between 500 and 800 words. That would be in
>> line with the author's preference for 2 pages. I think my reasoning
>> stems from my indoctrination as a writer for Suite 101; they tout
>> research claiming that readers respond best to pieces that are
between
>> 400 and 800 words.
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>> On 10/20/2010 8:49 AM, Joe Orozco wrote:
>>> How to Write a Synopsis
>>>
>>> by Marg Gilks
>>>
>>> Writers will spend years writing, lovingly polishing and then
>>> marketing a novel, and yet they shrug off the synopsis with a
comment
>>> like "I hate writing synopses."
>>>
>>> I hate writing synopses, too. I used to hate them because the ones I
>>> wrote sucked all the life from the novel, reducing it to bare-bones
>>> sentences that did nothing to capture the depth of the novel itself.
>>> Now I hate writing synopses because they are much more difficult to
>>> write than the novel ever was. It's not easy distilling 100,000-odd
>>> words into a few pages. But it's important.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is the most important part of your submission package
>>> and, as such, it has to be developed and sweated over and polished
>>> with the same attention you devoted to the novel itself. Along with
>>> the cover letter, the synopsis is what sells the editor on the
>>> manuscript. If they don't see anything they like in the synopsis,
> they
>>
>>> won't even glance at your chapter samples.
>>>
>>> The synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb
for
>>> your novel (the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the
>>> publisher's art and advertising departments, if the novel is
>>> purchased), and write it as though you're trying to entice a casual
>>> bookstore browser to buy the novel and read it. Which isn't too far
>>> from actuality.
>>>
>>> "Okay," you say, "you've sold me. This is something I have to do,
and
>>> do well. But how?"
>>>
>>>
>>> One Step at a Time
>>> Rather than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it
>>> down. Do it step by step.
>>>
>>> The first step, of course, is realizing that you're going to have to
>>> write a synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The
>>> best time to realize this is just before you sit down with your
>>> manuscript for the final reading preparatory to declaring the thing
>>> completed.
>>>
>>> Sit down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As
> you
>>
>>> finish reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph
>>> summary of what happened where, and to which character, in that
>>> chapter.
>>>
>>> Notice any themes running through your chapters as you're reading?
>>> Symbolism you didn't realize you'd woven through the story while you
>>> were slogging away at the computer for all those months? (The
>>> subconscious mind is a wonderful thing.) Take note of themes, too.
> You
>>
>>> may just discover your one-line story summary that agents and
editors
>>> like so much, if you didn't know what it was before. Or even if you
>>> thought you knew what it was, before (surprise, says the Muse, you
>>> were wrong).
>>>
>>> What you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel
>>> outline, what I call my author's outline. This is pretty dry
reading,
>>> and since chapter-by-chapter outlines seem to have fallen out of
> favor
>>
>>> with editors and agents, this will likely remain one of your most
>>> valuable writing tools, and that's about it. Don't throw this away
>>> when you've done your synopsis, either. You may know the story
>>> intimately now, but you do forget details over time. You may decide
> to
>>
>>> revise the novel in the future, and this outline will help you. I've
>>> used mine to make sure I'm not duplicating character names from one
>>> project to the next. (The subconscious mind can also booby-trap
you.)
>>> Reading an outline is much easier than leafing through or rereading
> an
>>
>>> entire novel.
>>>
>>> Anyway. There is an immediate use for that outline. What you are
>>> doing, basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
>>> manageable packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most
> important
>>
>>> plot points in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
>>>
>>> Notice I said the most important points. We're talking about only
>>> those events and motivations that moved the story forward in a major
>>> way. We're talking about only the most important characters, the
ones
>>> your reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right
>>> now, we are striving for bare-bones.
>>>
>>> "Yup," you say, "that's bare-bones, all right, and just as boring as
>>> ever."
>>>
>>> Yes, it is. It's also probably still too long, but don't worry about
>>> that right now.
>>>
>>>
>>> Let's See Some Enthusiasm!
>>> Now I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that
>>> synopsis:
>>>
>>>
>>> Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the novel, one that
>>> will pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her want
to
>>> buy the book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a
>>> feel for how it's done.
>>>
>>>
>>> You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing it to your
>>> friend. You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and shot
>>> him and that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic,
that
>>> sounds like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things
>>> like, "The good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the
>>> evil Dr. Death, the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after
> Dr.
>>
>>> Death, falls, somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him
>>> with the Good Guy Death-ray to save the world."
>>>
>>> That's how your synopsis is going to sound, when you're done:
>>> enthusiastic. Enticing. A description that makes the reader want to
>>> pick up the manuscript and find out how this happens! How can you
> make
>>
>>> your synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main character and
his
>>> or her crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or quote briefly from
the
>>> novel itself. Don't neglect to reveal the character's emotions and
>>> motivations, those points that explain why a character does
> something,
>>
>>> but keep it brief. If the setting is exotic, inject a taste of it
> into
>>
>>> the synopsis with a brief paragraph. This includes any background
>>> information that is absolutely necessary for the reader to
understand
>>> the story. Build excitement as you near the conclusion of the story
>>> summary by using shorter sentences and paragraphs. The synopsis is a
>>> sample of your writing; it is a taste of what reading the actual
> novel
>>
>>> will be like, so give it your all.
>>>
>>> Don't forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of
> the
>>
>>> story that you discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your
>>> cover letter. Editors and agents like having this distillation; not
>>> only will it pique their interest, but it's something they can use
>>> when presenting the novel to the buying board. It's also something
> you
>>
>>> can use, the next time someone politely asks you, "What's your novel
>>> about?"
>>>
>>> "Wow," you say at last, "this is pretty good! It reads almost as
good
>>> as the novel!"
>>>
>>>
>>> Shalts and Shalt Nots
>>> But wait, there's more. Now we get to the "thou shall and shalt
> nots."
>>>
>>> First, acceptable length. One guideline is to allow one synopsis
page
>>> for every twenty-five pages of manuscript, but even that could be
>>> longer than most editors and agents want to see. Most editors and
>>> agents, busy people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to
> ten
>>
>>> pages. The busier ones like five pages at most. I personally
consider
>>> two pages ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight
>>> page. If you've written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't
worry
>>> if it's ten or more pages long
>>> -- but it had better be gripping.
>>>
>>> Edit, edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the
>>> synopsis must remain interesting and supply the necessary
> information.
>>
>>> Yes, this is the hardest part. Don't know what to cut? Lose the
>>> adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and "flavor" of the
> story.
>>>
>>> You have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the
>>> first three chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four.
>>> Don't leave out the ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to
>>> request the full manuscript in order to find out what happens. What
>>> they will do is decide you're an amateur.
>>>
>>> No matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is
> always
>>
>>> written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to
>>> Jerry went to the bullfight.)
>>>
>>> Format: there seems to be disagreement as to whether you should
>>> single- or double-space your synopsis. To be on the safe side,
>>> double-space; it's easier to read. In terms of layout, format your
>>> synopsis much as you did your novel, or a short story.
>>>
>>> The first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it
in
>>> CAPITAL letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by
>>> referring to a character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans"
the
>>> first time, "Jerry" the next, and "the doctor" another time). It's
>>> also advisable to identify which character(s) is the point of view
>>> character by typing "(POV)" after the first instance of the
>>> character's name.
>>>
>>> Yes, writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this
>>> way: not only are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're
>>> honing your writing skills at the same time.
>>>
>>>
>>> Copyright C 2001 Marg Gilks
>>>
>>>
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