[stylist] New Story

Fri Apr 29 17:44:01 UTC 2011

I really enjoyed this read. As I went along you had me hooked and was 
getting anxious if you made the spare, and then the strike. We've all 
been in that spot trying to turkey out in the tenth coupled by 
additional pressure of the point possibilities. It left me with the 
feeling you, and me the reader, knew you could knock those suckers 
down and are deserving of the stamps other than a minor balance mess 
up, but rightly so you walked out without them. A good example to me 
that principle and inner knowledge is worth more in life than 
material things. Nice job.

brad

>----- Original Message ----- From: "Jacobson, Shawn D" 
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>>Here is my latest.  It's a change of pace for me, not science 
>>fiction, it's more of a childhood memory tale.
>>
>>I hope you enjoy
>>
>>Shawn Jacobson
>>Mathematical Statistician
>>Phone# (202)-475-8759
>>Fax# (202)-485-0275
>>
>>A Night at the Totem Bowl
>>
>>If you want to start a fight in my family, just say the bowling is 
>>not a sport.  I know that some people see it as an excuse to drink 
>>beer, but in my family, bowling was serious business.  Dad was a 
>>truly good bowler, not quite good enough to go pro, but good enough 
>>to bowl in tournaments all over the place and sometimes win 
>>money.  And mom was the best women bowler at the Totem bowl.
>>So when we went there to bowl for green stamps, I know we would 
>>have fun in a serious way.  "Remember to wait till the bowler on 
>>the right is finished before you start your approach" dad reminded 
>>me "and when you're finished go back and sit down.  Don't wait at 
>>the end of the approach until the pins fall."  This was going to be 
>>my first chance to bowl for green stamps with the adults, and dad 
>>wanted to make sure I acted the part.
>>We went into the bowling alley past the Indian inspired tile art, 
>>and walked up to the counter on the right to pay.  I didn't need to 
>>see to know that I was in a bowling alley.  The smell of wax, oil, 
>>and rubber along with the crazy music of falling pins would tell me 
>>where I was even if I were totally blind.  "Let's get supper" mom 
>>said.  "Then it will be time to get our bags."
>>We had supper in the lounge.  Kids weren't supposed to go in there 
>>because they sold beer.  But they let us in whether due to my mom 
>>having worked there before or because they didn't think a blind guy 
>>could cause trouble, I don't know.  Sighted people's motivations 
>>baffle me sometimes.
>>The lounge wasn't that interesting, even if it was adults only; it 
>>was just a dimly lighted room full of tables and chairs with a bar 
>>along the side across the kitchen from the lunch counter; the place 
>>kids could eat. It was about as interesting as the Papoose room 
>>where the nursery was. The area around the coat racks with its 
>>wooden carvings of Indian spirits was more interesting.  So were 
>>the halls that led back past carved totem poles to the room where 
>>you could see the automatic pinsetters from the rear, now that was 
>>cool.  The lounge was, well, boring.  At least the food was good.
>>I had my usual, a cottage cheese salad with a cherry on top, and a 
>>tenderloin sandwich made with a big piece of fried pork that 
>>dwarfed the bun that pretended to hold it.  Then there was desert, 
>>a big chunk of coconut cream pie full of sweet creamy goodness.
>>Then it was time to bowl.  I got to throw the first ball and, I 
>>guess I was over excited, but I threw the ball wide; gutter ball, 
>>darned if I didn't hate that.  This get guffaws of laughter from 
>>the college aged kids that were sharing the alleys with us.  I 
>>assumed they were college aged kids because they had Hawkeye sweaters on.
>>"Stay calm, don't lose your cool" dad said "go up there and pick up 
>>that spare."  Dad knew that I tended to get mad when the game 
>>wasn't going my way.  I almost didn't get to bowl tonight because 
>>I'd lost my temper during a practice game a few days ago.  I 
>>screwed my temper down, picked up the ball and tried again.  No 
>>spare, but at least I kept this one on the alley.
>>My first big chance at green stamps came in the fourth frame.  I 
>>looked up at the rack; the color wasn't quite normal.  Was that a 
>>yellow headpin?  I squared my shoulders to the pins and pushed 
>>off.  The shot felt right, the good feel of a well executed swing, 
>>the ball rolled down the alley and, boom! The pins flew about in a 
>>blur.  Strike!
>>"That's the way tiger" mom yelled.  "Now get your stamps."
>>I bounded up the three steps from the bowling area to find the 
>>table where the stamps were.  "Over there" dad said then, seeing my 
>>confusion "Right, no, now forward."   I got to the table and picked 
>>up my sheet of stamps. Dad later said there were 80 stamps, but I 
>>didn't count them.  I just got a death grip on my prize and headed 
>>back.  Unlike the sportsmanship award I had been given, I think for 
>>being blind, I had actually earned this by doing something well, an 
>>honest sheet of stamps for an honest strike.
>>We went back to bowling.  We all did pretty well, I even had some 
>>more strikes, but we didn't get a lot of chances for a big stamp 
>>total.  Mom got 100 stamps for a strike with a green headpin and 
>>dad had one strike worth 50 stamps, but nothing else big.
>>The kids who were bowling with us had a couple of shots at 500 
>>stamps, but by then their games had pretty much fallen apart.  I 
>>guess it had something to do with the amount of beer they were 
>>drinking.  I didn't know how you could be so thirsty that you 
>>needed five or six drinks each like they had, I only wanted two 
>>pops the whole night, but they must have been real thirsty because 
>>they kept drinking.
>>Dad had bought some raffle tickets, and his number was drawn for a 
>>chance to win 2,500 stamps.  He went up, through a good ball, but 
>>when it was over he still had the eight pin standing.  Dad plodded 
>>back shaking his head and muttering about the only true tap in 
>>bowling.  After all the raffle shots, we went back to bowling.
>>Throughout the night, everything else, the Indian art, the 
>>desolation of another year at the Braille school, even the antics 
>>of the people bowling with us seemed to fade into the 
>>background.  Only the game was important. For that night, the game 
>>was at the center of the universe, the only thing that mattered.
>>Then it was the tenth frame of the last game, my last chance for 
>>something exciting to happen.  I looked up and saw, to my dismay, a 
>>rack of white pins; not a colored pin in sight.  "Get a strike and 
>>you get another chance" dad reminded me; but I already knew that; I 
>>knew the rules.
>>I threw the ball.  I looked like it could be a strike, but it was 
>>too far to the right, too light on the headpin.  The ball chopped 
>>the headpin in front of the two; it ricocheted off the side and 
>>kicked the four pin out from between the two and the seven, the 
>>left-side baby split.
>>"You know how to pick that up" encouraged mom "just hit the two on 
>>the left side and let the ball hook into the seven."
>>So I throw the ball, but, again, it was too far right.  I stood at 
>>the end of the approach trying every bit of body English I could to 
>>get the ball to go just a bit further left.  It rolled, rolled, and 
>>just clipped the two.  It bounced of the side and just hit the 
>>seven pin with barely enough force to make it fall.  "Great spare" 
>>yelled mom.  "That's the way!"
>>I went back to the return for my ball, picked it up and looked at 
>>the next set of pins.
>>At first, it looked like the pin setter had broken and only set up 
>>part of the rack of pins.  Then I realized what I was seeing, 
>>colored pins.  Just then mom got real excited; "Wow! You can get 
>>5,000 stamps if you get a strike.  Go get em tiger!"
>>I backed up to the very back of the approach and prepared for the 
>>shot. This was the one I'd been fantasizing about all night, indeed 
>>for the last week since mom and dad had told me I could bowl with 
>>them.  I fiddled with the ball to get in the exact, most 
>>comfortable, position, squared my shoulders to the pins the way dad 
>>had told me, checked my feet, tried to relax, and, innocent of the 
>>fear of failure, I launched myself down the approach.  Step one: I 
>>pushed the ball out so that my right arm could take the ball 
>>back.  Step two: I let gravity and my arm start the ball on the 
>>back swing.  Step three: I let the momentum of the ball carry it 
>>back and up as my knees started to bend so I wouldn't drop the 
>>ball.  Step 4:....
>>"Hay blind boy, let me show you how to get to the pins" one of the 
>>college kids, sounding like the alley drunks I had met, yelled as 
>>he headed for the approach.  I don't know if it was the kid or my 
>>dad bellowing at him to shut up stat started me, but my final step 
>>faltered and the slide became a stumble.  The ball thudded onto the 
>>lane.  I had too much follow through, so I teetered on the brink of 
>>the foul line.  How the shot was as good as it was I have no 
>>idea.  It kind of wobbled down the alley going bump, bump, bump as 
>>it rolled over the thumb hole, then that stopped and the ball 
>>started to hook to the left of the headpin.  Meanwhile I flailed 
>>like you would if you slipped on unexpected ice.  I wind milled 
>>myself around, but I knew I would fall.  The ball hit the pins and 
>>they all went down, but it was no use, I finally stumbled over the 
>>line; it wouldn't count.
>>I picked myself up finding myself in a sudden madhouse.  Dad was 
>>yelling at the college kids with words that made my mouth taste of 
>>lava just listening to them.  Dad didn't show his temper much, but 
>>it was on display now.  I think he wanted to murderize someone and 
>>might have hurt someone except that the manager had run down to the 
>>lanes to try to calm him down. The manager was trying to cool dad 
>>off while telling the kids that they were done for the night and 
>>not to come back until they grew up in maybe ten years or so.  I 
>>wanted to cry, and even more I wanted to go slug someone, but the 
>>college kids were bigger than I am and I've never been much of a fighter.
>>Mom was at the stamp table imploring them to give me the stamps 
>>anyway since all the pins had fallen.  I knew my blindness was part 
>>of the conversation, it always is.  I couldn't hear what she was 
>>saying, but I could imagine and the imagining was enough to be 
>>embarrassing.  "Come on" said dad in a tired disgusted voice "let's 
>>get out of here."  He pulled mom away from the scorer's table, I 
>>think mom wanted to say more but knew better than to argue with dad 
>>when he was in one of those moods.  We headed out.
>>"Promise me you'll never act like that on a bowling alley ever" dad 
>>admonished.
>>"I won't" I replied as we walked out into the parking lot.
>>"I mean it son.  Always take the game seriously" dad continued "promise!"
>>"Sure" I replied.  "I promise."
>>I saw the bowling alley disappear behind us.  Summer vacation was 
>>almost done and school loomed darkly in the future.  At least, I 
>>would have something to tell the other kids at Vinton when I got there.
>>
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