[stylist] Critique this story, if you have time

[vejas]

Hi Bridgit,
I will be sure to e-mail it in the text as well, but will have to 
do that in the next draft because I semi-changed the story 
(didn't have much time) and it's a bit messy.
Thanks.
I was a little disappointed today because I read my story to my 
friends, and they had absolutely no cqticism.  We need that.  I 
commented upon an error which my friends seemed not even aware 
of.
Anyway, I'll edit the story.  Though we can't change our parents, 
I can change these made-up parents.
Vejas


 ----- Original Message -----
From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org
Date sent: Wed, 30 Nov 2011 14:51:49 -0600
Subject: [stylist] Critique this story, if you have time

Vejas,

The next time you post a draft for us to read, can you please 
paste it
into the body of your post as well as attach it? I've never been 
able to
retrieve email attachments from any NFB listserve.  I'm not sure 
if my
email server won't allow it, but I would like to read what you 
have
written so far.

And for the comments not making sense, perhaps you can be more 
specific
with those who commented.  They can explain their meaning and 
give you
more clarity.

I also do a lot of editing for family and friends, and I am 
always
willing to give a little feedback if anyone request it.  I've 
helped with
both creative writings and more PR-based writings.  If you ever 
want some
feedback, just email me at bpollpeter at hotmail.com.

And Stylist has a great group of writers who have been writing 
for
years, professionally and for leisure.  It's a wealth of 
experience,
smile!

Sincerely,
Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter
Read my blog at:
http://blogs.livewellnebraska.com/author/bpollpeter/

"History is not what happened; history is what was written down."
The Expected One- Kathleen McGowan

Message: 13
Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2011 07:10:31 -0800
From: vejas <brlsurfer at gmail.com
To: Writer's Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org
Subject: Re: [stylist] 90 tips from authors
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I find the tips written kind of complicatedly and I think the
wording is a bit weird, but maybe you get it a little better 'cuz
most of you are older?
Vejas


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