[stylist] Word: cacophony
KajunCutie926 at aol.com
KajunCutie926 at aol.com
Fri Dec 2 14:38:20 UTC 2011
I did see that...and enjoyed it. Slate and Style has not been read yet...
having major eye issues right now so both my computer and reading time
have been limited again...
a really quick haiku for you
Autumn has arrived
Bringing chill to bayou's morn
Winter waits its turn
In a message dated 12/2/2011 8:29:18 A.M. Central Standard Time,
Shawn.D.Jacobson at hud.gov writes:
Myrna
Did you seem my poem in Slate and Style? That's about the only think new
I've done except for a Haiku about New York City that I did in part of an
Email chain.
Here it is as I remember it.
This vertical place
All dimensions are expressed
In resplendent light.
Shawn
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Thank you Shawn.. that's how I see it... hey anymore short verse coming
from your way? I finished my book of short and semi-short verse and it
is
aptly named Bits and Pieces...That book was both a challenge and a
wonderful
learning experience....
In a message dated 12/2/2011 7:00:17 A.M. Central Standard Time,
Shawn.D.Jacobson at hud.gov writes:
Myrna
I love it, "feathered baton", that is a cool way to look at it. And the
idea that the discord is a sign of joy at being alive and well is really
neat.
Shawn
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When I saw the word I had to share a piece I'd written actually titled
'Cacophony'. It is written in a poetry form developed by myself and a
friend,
called a tankabun, a hybrid if you will of a haibun. I just hope you
enjoy the piece..
Cacophony
Such a discordance
Of chirps, tweets, and warbled voice
Makes me wonder
If the master composer
Has misplaced his feathered baton
It is not the beauty of song that draws me outdoors, braving the damp
frigidity of this winter morning. It is the sheer noise! This is not a
collaborative effort becoming one avian voice. This is not harmony of
sparrow and
wren, warbler and finch. No, this is an exclamatory oration from each,
determined to be heard in their collective audacity. I laugh, joining
the
non-melodious flock, as realization shivers through me. These are the
off-key
mutterings of winged friends, discovering that winter has neither frozen
their wardrobes nor silenced their voices. The master's baton has not
been
misplaced after all and even he applauds them and this, an impromptu
composition of feathered cacophony.
In a message dated 11/30/2011 5:16:04 P.M. Central Standard Time,
lists at braddunsemusic.com writes:
cacophony
ka-KAH-fuh-nee
(noun)
harsh or discordant sound : dissonance;
specifically : harshness in the sound of words or phrases
"His speech was a cacophony relating to employee
tardiness, personal use of the internet, and poor efficiency rating."
Brad Dunsé
"Inspiration is sweating over the pen...
then smiling at what was written." --Capt'n Frank
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