[stylist] Hood exercise

[Donna Hill]

Bridget,
Great job, and very timely and poignant in light of yesterday's school 
shooting in Nebraska.
Donna

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On 1/5/2011 9:14 PM, Bridgit Pollpeter wrote:
> Here is an attempt at the exercise I prompted.
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> Bridgit
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> Kimberly sat tapping her finger nails on the side of her laptop.  Her
> stomach grumbled while she tried to concentrate on the hand-out Mr.
> Hansen had distributed to the class.  Papers rustled on nearby desk, and
> pens scratched across fellow students papers.  The clock on the wall
> tick-tocked as she struggled to keep her eyes opened.  Flipping the top
> of her Braille watch up, she checked the time .  She kept popping her
> eyes open and jamming them shut in an attempt to wake herself up.
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> "Miss Michaels, are you okay?"
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> Kimberly blinked in Mr. Hansen's direction.  Blushing, she played with
> the ear bud cord dangling from her laptop.  "No, sorry."
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> Mr. Hansen chuckled.  "This is what happens when they assign classes
> before lunch."
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> Kimberly smiled and returned to the assignment.  Placing her ear bud in
> her ear again, she tried to pay attention to the droning electronic
> voice of JAW's.
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> Voices punctured the silence shouting in the distance.  Kimberly tilted
> her head trying to make sounds out.  A metallic bang bellowed through
> the empty halls.  She froze, fingers paused above her keyboard.  A
> buzzing surrounded the room as classmates whispered together.  She heard
> the click of the door as it opened.  The muffled shouting formed into
> words.
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> "Get back in your rooms!" a disembodied voice yelled.
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> The door slammed shut as people rushed down the hall.  The phone by Mr.
> Hansen's desk rang.  His voice quavered as he answered the call.
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> Students abandoned the whispering.  Zippers clinked on bookbags, books
> and papers swooshed off of desks.  Keys clacked furiously as students
> sent text messages.  Kimberly, trying to catch her breath, gripped her
> white cane.
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> "Kids, we need to stay put-someone in the school is firing shots."
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> The tension that had been bubbling on the surface now erupted filling
> the room with commotion.  Kimberly clutched the sides of her desk.  She
> tasted vanilla and cherries as she licked her lips.
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> "Calm down-we need to stay calm," Mr. Hansen shouted.
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> Kimberly slid down in her chair.  Closing her eyes, she slipped the hood
> of her sweat shirt over her head.  Shrouded by her oversized hoodie, a
> tear trailed down her cheek while she steadied her breathing.
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> Sam eyed the chocolate layered cake tempting him from the corner of his
> desk.  He shuffled numerous reports stacked in front of him.  Checking
> paper reports to electronic ones, he looked up when a knock rapped on
> his door.
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> "Hey, Detective Holms-great party.  Ready to retire?"
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> "After forty years, I guess it's about time I concentrated on other
> things.  Maybe I'll do some traveling."
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> "Headed out, just poppin' in to say good-bye."
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> "Hey Stanton, want some cake?"  Sam pushed the cake forward.
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> Stanton smiled.  "Already had two pieces-thanks though."
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> Sam grunted.  "Sheri has me on a diet."
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> "Good luck with that."  Stanton laughed as he walked down the hall.
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> Sam rubbed his eyes as he turned back to his reports.  Ready to leave,
> He stood and stretched as the phone rang.
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> "Holmes."  His face hardened as he sat back down.  After a minute, he
> sat the phone back in its cradle.  Walking to the door, he shouted out,
> "We have a code red!"
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> He slumped back in his chair.  Leaning forward, he held his head in his
> hands.  He turned his eyes up as an officer entered.
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> "Code red, sir?"
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> Sam sighed.  "A shooting happened out at Southwest high school.  They
> think a student was the shooter."
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> "I'll send the APB out, sir."
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> "When will these hoodlums learn?"  Sam picked up the phone to call his
> wife.  His last day of work would be a full day.
>
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