[stylist] Sentences and clarity

[James H. "Jim" Canaday M.A. N6YR]

right Bridgit,
I got your meaning.

   and I am Jim.  "jc" is for me like signing a note btw.
I've signed my e-mails this way for 30 years (yes, we had e-mails then.
jc

At 04:46 PM 1/11/2011, you wrote:
>Judith and JC,
>
>My intent was clarity.  The sentence construction was not clear so all I
>tried to do was bring meaning out of the sentence.  It should not matter
>what the rest of the para looks like.  It was different that suggesting
>new info or rewording just to reword.
>
>Bridgit
>
>
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