[stylist] Website feedback request

[Robert Leslie Newman]

Pranav 
RE: the writing of text for a website is super important writing and is
getting to be more so with the further development and use of the Internet
So we on this likes and especially those of us who have a website are very
aware that "the reading" of a website is part of what we should concern
ourselves with.

I just checked out your site and thought it is very good. I like the sample
of advice that you have toward the bottom of the home page. Your delivery on
all sections were short, to the point and your words came across in a
friendly and personal way. (You didn't write it like a technical paper; that
would have been bad! This what you have is smart look/sounding.)

[I filled in your on-site contact form.]

 

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of Pranav
Sent: Monday, June 06, 2011 11:43 AM
To: Writer's Division Mailing List
Subject: [stylist] Website feedback request

Hi all,

I hope this is on topic. I have reworked my website. Please see
http://www.security-writer.com.

I am interested in feedback on the site. What kind of impression does it
create on a potential visitor? What can I change to make the site better?
The idea behind the site is that it is going to be my main avenue for
soliciting work and I will be pointing people to it so it is like a
brochure.

Pranav


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