[stylist] Information about Tanka and its writing
KajunCutie926 at aol.com
KajunCutie926 at aol.com
Wed Jun 8 18:41:54 UTC 2011
As promised, Donna, here is the information on Tanka writing. It is a
very traditional form .... however, it has been modernized and some elements
have been changed or at least made not so strict once the English began
writing them. As this article says it is because of the difference in
syllabication between the Japanese and English languages. This information is from
ShadowPoetry.com. It is a source I've have used extensively over the
years. I will share more Tanka and as you will see even I strayed from the
traditional syllable count. As I side note, my tanka collaborator and I
developed a form which we call the Haibun's cousin, the Tankabun. It includes
one tanka and a prose edition. If you are interested in it do let me know.
I can also share an example of that form too.
For those who are not familiar with Haibuns they are Haiku and prose
combined in one piece. Here is the article on Tanka...
Definition of Tanka
An unrhymed Japanese poem consisting of five lines of 5/7/5/7/7 (5 kana in
the first line, 7 kana in the second line, 5 kana in the third line, 7
kana in the fourth line, and 7 kana in the fifth line) totaling 31 kana.
General thoughts on Tanka
Tanka is generally written in two parts. The first three lines is one
part, and the last two lines is the second part.
Tanka in English is relatively new, so there are not as many guidelines as
with haiku and senryu. You may include kigo (season words), but it is not
necessary.
One exercise for beginners is to write a haiku and add two more lines.
However, tanka is not really a longer haiku, and should not be thought of
as such. While tanka does use many of the same elements such as
juxtaposition, concrete imagery, and is usually centered around nature, tanka is less
constrictive.
You may use metaphor, simile, and many of the other devices generally not
used in haiku or senryu. You may show a more personal and emotional
viewpoint.
If tanka were seen in a book that contains only Japanese poetic forms,
they would be easily recognizable. However, if the same poems were seen in a
freestyle poetry book, they may be confused with any other five line poem.
English tanka has not totally found its voice.
Three ways to write tanka
There are three basic ways to write tanka.
1) Write 5 lines of 5/7/5/7/7. Just replace one syllable for one kana.
Most English speaking writers do not do this, as there are too many vast
differences between the Japanese and English language.
You are certainly free to do this, however, your tanka will be about
one-third longer than the Japanese tanka. There are some Japanese who think this
is the only real way to write tanka, but there are others who feel that
making English writers adhere to the form serves no purpose.
2) Write 5 lines of 31 syllables or LESS, following the
short/long/short/long/long form. This way, your tanka will achieve the same basic effect as
the Japanese tanka.
3) Write 5 lines of 31 syllables or LESS, letting the poem dictate the
line length. You are free to experiment more with this last option.
Everyone who writes tanka must make their own personal decision on which
form they want to use. Some experiment with all three forms and find their
own paths.
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