[stylist] News release feedback

[Brad Dunse']

Thanks Jim. I did tweak it slightly, for the better in just a couple 
areas with additional info, but basically I took one of Bridgits 
formats and replaced it with like, yet different, info :). I'm way 
late on getting it out, too late for one paper and not sure on the 
other :). Oh well, it was good practice writing.

Brad



On 11/9/2011  05:55 AM Homme, James said...
>Hi Brad,
>I wouldn't change anything. It's great.
>
>Jim
>
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>Perhaps this paste will give proper line spacing. :)
>
>Minnesota Association of Songwriters
>Wayne Hamilton
>St. Paul, MN
>info at mnsongwriters.org
>
>For Immediate Release
>Contact:
>Wayne Hamilton
>Minnesota Association of Songwriters
>info at mnsongwriters.org
>
>Minnesota Association of Songwriters Hosts
>Songwriting Workshop of Berklee School of Music Professor Pat Pattison
>
>St. Paul, Minn, Nov 12, 2011Minnesota Association
>of Songwriters Educates songwriters with its
>fourth professional workshop in 2011 on Saturday, November 12.
>
>Minnesota Association of Songwriters (MAS) (and
>its former appellation Minnesota Songwriter's
>Association (MSA,)) since 1980, has been helping
>songwriters in the Midwest reach their
>songwriting goals ranging from personal
>development to Grammy Award winning songwriters.
>With their 8-member Board of Directors and 70
>plus membership, MAS offers two monthly meetings,
>on-line song evaluations, showcase opportunities,
>monthly educational speakers, downloadable
>interviews with Nashville writers, MAS Radio (an
>on-line streaming radio portal) featuring songs
>from its members, networking opportunities, and
>professional songwriting workshops instructed by
>some of the nation's best writers.
>
>The fourth workshop of 2011 held at McNally-Smith
>School of Music in St. Paul, MN will be
>instructed by nationally recognized author and
>professor, Pat Pattison. A Minnesota native
>Pattison has stretched his career from band
>member, to author, to professor for the past
>thirty-six years at Berklee College of Music in
>Boston, Mass.; one of the most recognized music
>college's in the country. Author of "Songwriting
>Without Boundaries," "Writing Better Lyrics,"
>"The Essential Guide To Rhyming," and
>"The Essential Guide To Lyric Form"; Pattison
>will bring his vast knowledge in lyric writing to
>songwriters in the greater Twin Cities area.
>
>* When: November 12, 2011  10:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m.
>* Where: McNally-Smith School of Music (auditorium),
>19 Exchange St. St. Paul, MN
>
>The five hour workshop registration fee is
>thirty-five dollars ($35.00) for non-members and
>free to MAS current members. All non-member
>attendees may opt-in for a one-year membership at
>no additional cost for the $35 workshop registration.
>
>To learn more about what the Minnesota
>Association of Songwriters has to offer, how to
>get involved, or obtain registration for the
>Pattison workshop visit:
>http://www.mnsongwriters.org/ or contact Wayne
>Hamilton at info at mnsongwriters.org
>
>The Minnesota Association of Songwriters is a
>volunteer, member supported, non-profit
>organization. Its mission is to inspire, educate
>and strengthen the songwriting and performance
>skills of its members through seminars,
>workshops, review meetings, showcases and
>networking opportunities, while encouraging
>collaboration and exploration of the creative
>process. MAS meets twice monthly to learn about
>the craft of songwriting, to review and provide
>commentary about each other's music and to
>exchange information about topics ranging from
>song contests and conferences to legal issues and internet concerns.
>
>
>
>Brad Dunse
>
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