[stylist] A Haiku I Wrote This Morning

[Homme, James]

Hi Jacky,
Ah. Never knew that. I'll try again.


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From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Jacqueline Williams
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Jim, 
Another good one. There is a rule that says Haiku has no title. In this case
your title is part of your poem.  You might have to re-write it so that the
leaves are incorporated into the poem.
Keep at it.
Jackie

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Hi Jackie,
How are you so creative?

Here's one I wrote after I saw what happened as I took the dogs out on
Saturday.

Saturday Leaves

Blasted from your perch,
Piled against my front gate, dead,
You'll feed my garden.

Jim

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Jim, 
You have just written your second Haiku!

Tone deaf-listening-
the great symphony of life
is inspired by you.

While Haiku are usually written about a snapshot of nature, I much prefer
the ones written about human qualities. If I recall, the ones dealing with
human nature may be called a Senryu. They are both Japanese and if you are
not entering a contest, who cares.
Jacqui 


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Hi Jackie,
I just want to say that you are inspiring me to keep trying. In this group I
feel like a tone-deaf listener to the symphony.

Jim

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Shawn and Jim,
These are both great Haiku. They show great insight. Both could also be
"Poetweets."
Jackie

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Hi Shawn,
I love it.

Jim

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And here's a haiku that kind-of explains my absence from the list of late.

Mighty flood of life
That sweeps me to the future
In vain I struggle.

Shawn

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Subject: [stylist] A Haiku I Wrote This Morning

Harvest

How many layers
in my onion? pealing prompts
pain, pleasure, my core.

Jim

Jim Homme,
Usability Services,
Phone: 412-544-1810.


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