[stylist] Haiku mania

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

Here's one more

My starship soul sails
Cross the interstellar void
That is loneliness.

Shawn

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Sent: Tuesday, October 18, 2011 7:32 AM
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Subject: Re: [stylist] Haiku mania

Jim,

Good catch. So much for using  fingers on both hands to count lol. Here we are:

>No more cricket's song
>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>Flakes close automn's baggy eyes

Brad


On 10/18/2011  06:05 AM Homme, James said...
>Hi Brad,
>Very good, but the last line has six syllables.
>
>Jim
>
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>On Behalf Of Brad Dunse'
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> >I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info
> >Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element
> >of emotion, seasonal, etc.
>
>No more cricket's song
>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>   Flakes close the eyes of fall
>
>Brad
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