[stylist] Haiku mania

[Brad Dunse']

Boy, I can tell structured writing is something I need to practice. 
That and my math skills.  Instead of subtracting syllables on the 
last line of that sample Haiku I added them.  Plus the middle line 
has 8 syllables not 7. I think I'll stick to songs lol.

Brad


On 10/18/2011  06:34 AM Homme, James said...
>Hi Brad,
>Beautiful. The only reason I caught it was that my coffee is 
>beginning to work.
>
>Jim
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>Jim,
>
>Good catch. So much for using  fingers on both hands to count lol. 
>Here we are:
>
> >No more cricket's song
> >Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
> >Flakes close automn's baggy eyes
>
>Brad
>
>
>On 10/18/2011  06:05 AM Homme, James said...
> >Hi Brad,
> >Very good, but the last line has six syllables.
> >
> >Jim
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> > >I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info
> > >Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element
> > >of emotion, seasonal, etc.
> >
> >No more cricket's song
> >Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
> >   Flakes close the eyes of fall
> >
> >Brad
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