[stylist] Haiku mania

[Jacqueline Williams]

Brad,
I do love your Haiku. I think, however, that line 2 has eight syllables. You
can't count wind-blown as one,
And I think the last line has six syllables.

If this is your first, Please keep going. As short as they are, I find them
the hardest. I don't relate that much to seasons and nature in poetry.
Jackie

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Subject: [stylist] Haiku mania


>I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info 
>Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element 
>of emotion, seasonal, etc.

No more cricket's song
Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
  Flakes close the eyes of fall

Brad




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