[stylist] Another haiku

Bridgit Pollpeter bpollpeter at hotmail.com
Mon Oct 24 16:42:38 UTC 2011


Jim,

Very good. Nice imagery and evokes a lot of emotion. I like the phrasing
too.

Sincerely,
Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter
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Date: Mon, 24 Oct 2011 07:41:26 -0400
From: "Homme, James" <james.homme at highmark.com>
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Subject: [stylist] Another Haiku
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Hi People,
I think I am gravitating to forms because I like the challenge of
forcing my thoughts into the form. This one isn't really about nature,
so maybe it's not really a haiku, but it popped out after I had a
disturbing dream.

Loves fire warms. Hates
Fire burns. Indifference fire
Chills. Cherish fire.

Jim





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