[stylist] A Haiku I Wrote This Morning

[Jacqueline Williams]

Brad,
Flakes melt on warm cheeks.
Avalanches rush and crush.
Snow-gentle, deadly.

Now you guys have me doing Haiku which I don't like to do.
I still can see you doing what you just said into a lyric, with the
gradations from quiet, growing to overwhelming.
I'm sending other forms but if you don't like them, consider "poetweets, 140
characters. More leeway, more characters, the computer does the counting.
Jackie


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From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of Brad Dunse'
Sent: Saturday, October 22, 2011 7:54 PM
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Subject: Re: [stylist] A Haiku I Wrote This Morning

Jim did have a cool marriage between season and song. I wonder once 
that flake falls, if it was a gentle light snow gradually 
accumulating if it would be a light soft classical piece, or perhaps 
mix a bit of light wind with a few light drifts if we'd be looking at 
some jazz, or perhaps a full blown storm with plows billowing black 
smoke out the stacks, we'd see some heavy metal or  progressive rock? :)

Brad


On 10/22/2011  09:01 PM Jacqueline Williams said...
>Wow, beautiful. I can just see it settling gently on the composer's face
and
>melting into a song. Brad, could you write lyrics to portray Jim's thought.
>Jackie
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
>Behalf Of Homme, James
>Sent: Tuesday, October 18, 2011 7:36 AM
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>Subject: Re: [stylist] A Haiku I Wrote This Morning
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>Hi,
>Brad, here's one for you.
>
>Before the first note,
>a song is like a snowflake
>To the composer.
>
>Jim
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