[stylist] humor assignment

[Bernadetta Pracon]

Barbara:
You're poem is fun. I found the bit about the baby canibal pretty 
funny, although it seemed just a little detached from the rest of the 
poem, kind of random. But that's also what made it funny.
I'd pose one challenge though. In the first verse, pain and insane 
rhyme, but that verse is sort of predictable, so it's not as amusing. 
If you ever wanted to revise it for any reason, think of some other 
words you could rhyme with pain to replace  insane, that you can also 
tie into the poem to make it a bit more interesting.
 All in all, a fun, silly little poem.

Bernadetta

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