[stylist] Another tankabun showing a different flavor

[Eve Sanchez]

Myrna, This is very beautiful. I myself would give it a rythmic title like
Nocturnal Inspriations. Sentences seems so mundane for such beauty. It is
like tagging a fairy princess with Jane or something. This is like the
description of the hurricane we talked about though. The reader can climb
into your essense and feel and sense what you feel and sense. Keep those
lines coming. :) Eve

On Mon, Apr 23, 2012 at 1:40 PM, <KajunCutie926 at aol.com> wrote:

> The tankabun has a bit of different flavor to it than  did 'Icicles'.  As
> you can see your interpretations can be whatever and  wherever you choose
> to
> go.
>
> Sentences
>
>
> Midnight stars whisper
> Upon  velvet slipping into dreams
> And their fading sighs
> Trail shadows of  sentences
> Being written across sky
>
> I hear the words tumbling softly,  one onto the next, like an evening's
> song, a dream-like aria, and I feel each  nuance, each subtle inflection.
>  The
> poignant ink of intimacy flows so  sweetly, and I, lost in its hypnotic
> rhythm, reach for my pen of  curiosity.  Sentences spill forth, one, then
> two...
> sentences written on  the pages of a midnight sky, scribbled on the napkin
> of a sunny day, or left  behind in the journal of a sigh caught in a random
> wind. I almost forget to  breathe as that last whisper slips away, leaving
> me and the sky to  silence.
>
>
>
> © mdbadgerow 2008
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