[stylist] Mark Twain didnt finish

[Eve Sanchez]

Thank you Chris. It was fun to write. I do understand what you mean about
prologue/epilogue and yes, Jim's death would have ruined the whole story if
known ahead of time. Back when I was a more visual artist, I loved doing
studies of Monet and Seurat. I guess this takes the place of that being
that I, in a way, am copying from a great artist. Fantastic way to learn.
Eve

On Tue, Dec 4, 2012 at 11:46 AM, Chris Kuell <ckuell at comcast.net> wrote:

> Eve,
>
> I have to tip my hat to you on this one. I don't think there is a harder
> author to try to mimic than Twain, and you really did an admireable job.
> Except for poor old Jim, this could almost be the prologue of the book as
> well--you know how sometimes books start in the present, and then go back
> in time and tell the story?
> My one critique is that I thought it ended somewhat abruptly, almost as
> though you had a little more to say. But really, wonderful job.
>
> chris
>
>
>
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