[stylist] CK Gratitude prompt, plus bonus track
Bill Outman
woutman at earthlink.net
Mon Dec 10 20:48:40 UTC 2012
Hi, Chris.
Sorry to be so late in looking at this.
I just read through your gratitude story and enjoyed it as well as the music
track.
When I came to the part about taking pills I had to stop and finish taking
mine for today. I had gotten distracted from while working on email.
Your comment about the I-70 signs was understandable to me. It's clear if
the reader has put it in the context of the whole story. Instead of "or one
of those other uncharacteristic states" I mitght have gone with"or some
other Midwestern state" for clarity.
Otherwise this is a good slice-of-life story that touches on a number of
difficult life issues.
Bill Outman
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