[stylist] CK Gratitude prompt, plus bonus track

[Bill Outman]

Hi, Chris.  

 

Sorry to be so late in looking at this.  

 

I just read through your gratitude story and enjoyed it as well as the music
track.  

 

When I came to the part about taking pills I had to stop and finish taking
mine for today.  I had gotten distracted from while working on email.  

 

Your comment about the I-70 signs was understandable to me.  It's clear if
the reader has put it in the context of the whole story.  Instead of "or one
of those other uncharacteristic states" I mitght have gone with"or some
other Midwestern state" for clarity.  

 

Otherwise this is a good slice-of-life story that touches on a number of
difficult life issues.  

 

Bill Outman