[stylist] new writing prompt

Brad Dunsé lists at braddunsemusic.com
Fri Feb 3 23:08:15 UTC 2012


The bulky clothes reminded me of the Christmas 
Story where Ralphy's  little brother couldn't put 
his arms down ahah. We use to do the round saucers and innertubes.

Brad



On 2/3/2012  02:40 PM Barbara Hammel said...
>Hey, for once it's not a poem! SLEDDING Erin 
>couldn't feel the coldness of the dented metal 
>saucer sled she held in her mittened hands, but 
>she knew it was. Her housemother said it was ten 
>degrees, colder than it was yesterday when Anna 
>got her tongue stuck on it. Why did little kids 
>always have to try that? She'd gotten her tongue 
>stuck to the window frame on the bus a couple of 
>years ago which taught her that lesson. Erin set 
>the sled down at the top edge of the first of 
>three hills behind the Old Hospital building. 
>She sat down on the sled and pulled her booted 
>feet out of the foot-deep bank and folded them 
>Indian-style. She fumbled with the rope handles 
>before she finally got her hands tucked in them. 
>Then rocking herself back and forth, she finally 
>propelled the sled forward. The sled made a 
>squeaking sound as it began to pick up speed. By 
>the time it reached the level before the second 
>hill, it was whooshing along. The second hill 
>gave her more speed and she practically flew 
>over the level before the third hill. Going down 
>the third hill, the snow sprayed in her face as 
>she rushed along. She almost felt butterflies in 
>her stomach going down that hill. She sped 
>across the flat ground and as the sled began 
>it's ascent toward the street, Erin tipped into 
>the snow on purpose. It didn't matter to her if 
>it wasn't a busy street; it was wrong to play 
>there and she wasn't going to do it, even if by 
>accident. As she wiped the snow out of her face, 
>she laughed with abandon, as only a child can. 
>That was exhilarating! She couldn't wait to get 
>to the top and do it again. Just as she got to 
>her feet, Emily slid into her and knocked her 
>back down. She was glad the snow was deep. For 
>the second time she wiped the snow out of her 
>face, and struggled to gain her footing. Three 
>pairs of jeans made it hard for her to bend her 
>knees and two shirts and her bulky winter coat 
>made moving her arms hard. The two extra pairs 
>of socks were keeping her feet warm but her 
>pants had come untucked and snow was now inside 
>her right pant leg. Through her two pairs of 
>knitted mittens she again had a difficult time 
>grasping one of the ropes so she could pull the 
>sled. The snow was deep but Erin was glad it had 
>so recently fallen. For, even though she had to 
>flounder through the deep drifts up the fairly 
>steep hills, it wasn't icy like it would be once 
>sled and foot tracks were worn into them. 
>Barbara Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to 
>dance. -- Carl Sandburg -----Original 
>Message----- From: Barbara Hammel Sent: 
>Wednesday, February 01, 2012 12:38 PM To: 
>stylist at nfbnet.org Subject: [stylist] new 
>writing prompt Even though tomorrow is 
>Groundhog’s Day which will set hearts yearning 
>for spring, we haven’t had much winter here in 
>the midwest and I’m longing for a bit of 
>it.  Tell about your favorite thing to do during 
>this time of cold. Barbara Poetry is an echo, 
>asking a shadow to dance. -- Carl Sandburg 
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