[stylist] more about my sqry

[Robert Leslie Newman]

Yeah, share it with us. Only after reading it could I even entertain a
thought of a suggestion to alter any of your plot.


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Sent: Tuesday, January 10, 2012 12:06 AM
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Subject: [stylist] more about my sqry

Here's my main plot for the story I'm thinking of, that I might share with
you.
The main character is I think Ariana, although I might change that.  Ariana
and her parents go to Sunday brunch at Ariana's grandparents' house weekly.
She can get along with her grandmother just fine, but her grandfather
neither she nor her parents can seem to reach out to.  Also, Ariana has
discovered that she was the sole survivor of a set of quadruplets, two
identical boys and her identical twin sister.  She feels guilty about the
fact that she doesn't feel she's missing something inside.
Then later in the book we find out that the grandfather, too, was the sole
survivor of a set of quadruplets, also two boys and two girls.  They help
ease each other through the pain.
I'm a multiples geek, aren't I?
Any suggesttions on how my story line could differ?
Vejas

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