[stylist] Cry

[Barbara Hammel]

Those are nice poems.  I think they perfectly depict what older folks get to 
be like.
One question, though.  In a villanelle aren't the repeating lines supposed 
to rhyme with each other so there are only two rhyme schemes in the poem?
Of course, anyone is free to make up their own form that resembles another.
Barbara




Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. -- Carl Sandburg
-----Original Message----- 
From: Lynda Lambert
Sent: Tuesday, March 06, 2012 2:33 PM
To: Writer's Division Mailing List
Subject: [stylist] Cry

I am sending you 2 poems, written about my mother at age 80. Some things 
that make us cry are silent tragedies that are going on around us every day, 
not noticed by many people, not written up in newspapers, and not recognized 
by anyone for a long time.

Lynda Lambert
104 River Road
Ellwood City, PA 16117

724 758 4979

My Blog:  http://www.walkingbyinnervision.blogspot.com
My Website:  http://lyndalambert.com











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