[stylist] Let's get busy

Eve Sanchez 3rdeyeonly at gmail.com
Tue Oct 23 19:25:11 UTC 2012


Barbara, I loved your posting about classic poetry. I really feel you could
expand on that and have a top notch essay. It was fun to read. Dont know if
you meant it to be, but I bet there are a lot of people who would be able
to relate to it.
Shawn, I thought you meant Aslan as well. Trivia; C.S. Lewis was in a
writing group also. Another member of his group was J.R. Tolken. They are
(Not past tense for Cymry) Welshmen.
Robert, Very deep perception. It was actually inspired by a coyote passing
my house one night while I was out there and my dog watching her elusive
travels. I knew she was there as I often do, but I never see them (wonder
why). My daughter told me they are difficult for even her to see as they
move in the shadows and look more like grey ghosts. Inspiration complete.
Love that you were able to get so much out of it.Eve
On Tue, Oct 23, 2012 at 9:47 AM, Barbara Hammel <poetlori8 at msn.com> wrote:

> Yeah, he is Aslan.
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> Barbara
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> Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. -- Carl Sandburg
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> The lion God in the Narnia books.  These are very popular in my church.
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> I may have spelled it wrong.
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> Shawn
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> Who is Alsan?
> Jackie
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> Shawn D
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> Eve
>
> Wow!  I love this one "eternal highway of the night" "the wind on its
> journey eternal".  Very evocative of mood.
>
> So here's a haiku to try to break the silence.
>
> At glory's white throne
> I expect to see Alsan.
> God am I surprised.
>
> Good writing.
>
> Shawn
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> Hey ya'll. I'm tired of this group being so quiet, but I can't complain if
> I also do not post anything. So here is a poem I wrote and am sharing just
> to try and get some conversation started. I'll wait for comments and your
> postings too. :) Eve
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> Desert Ghost
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> With howling in the wind
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> Towards the North she looks
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> Searching with her eyes
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> In the dark of night
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> For the elusive grey ghost
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> Approaching with a grace eternal
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> With grace eternal
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> Silent as the wind
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> An unseen ghost
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> With wonder she looks
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> Through the heart of the night
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> At a pair of glowing eyes
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> With ancient eyes
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> Eternal
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> Hidden in the night
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> Traveling on the wind
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> Towards the East she looks
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> To find the grey ghost
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> The misty grey ghost
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> With star reflected eyes
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> Moves swiftly as she looks
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> Just as the eternal
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> Highway of the night
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> Traveling far above the wind
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> The grey cloud above moves by wind
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> No faster than the grey ghost
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> Through the darkest hours of the night
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> Though the eyes
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> Eternal
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> See all on which she looks
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> To the South she looks
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> Following the path of the wind
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> On its journey eternal
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> She sees the grey ghost
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> Through the inner eyes
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> Moving still through the night
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> With howls carried by the wind she looks
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> With her glowing eyes through the darkness of the night
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> As would any desert ghost with grace eternal
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