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[Myrna Badgerow]

Focusing on technique is a good thing but sometimes a form may not be done correctly or whatever. If it!s a form I am not familiar with I usually will not comment on technique. I may say the lines are too long for my tastes or seem chunky. Perhaps the rhyming is a bit too reaching or even too 
simplistic. 
Does that make sense? I hope so. If someone can suggest something to improve my technique I am so welcoming of that but if poetry is not their thing but my words touched them on some level, then I am elated that my words have found a reason to be written. That's what I was trying to say. 
Babysitting for a rather over active grandson while his parents are moving. My thoughts are scattered this morning... all over the floor actually along with every toy on the box lol
Myrna

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On Apr 6, 2013, at 12:07 PM, "justin williams" <justin.williams2 at gmail.com> wrote:

> Oh, wow. Didn't realize that.  Maybe I focus on technique to much.
> 
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> I like it too!! And Lynda is so right, Justin. Poetry is, as some would say,
> very subjective to the reader. If it touches you in some way, that's what
> most poetry writers like to hear. 
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> Sent from my iPhone
> 
> On Apr 7, 2013, at 11:32 AM, "Lynda Lambert" <llambert at zoominternet.net>
> wrote:
> 
>> When I was walking my dogs through the woods this morning, I was inspired
> to write down what we were experiencing. Here is what came out of our
> morning walk. I have attached the poem. Pantoum form.
>> 
>> Lynda
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> <Poem_Early Morning Walk.docx>
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