[stylist] Fantasy prompt

Chris Kuell ckuell at comcast.net
Mon Apr 22 14:26:12 UTC 2013


Donna,

Sorry I missed this when I was reading other prompt responses yesterday. For 
some reason it landed in my spam folder.

This reads well, and you have me intrigued as to where the kids will go with 
their cloud ship. Very clever. My only words of writing advice are to go 
easy on the exclamation marks. Too many and they lose their impact.

Thanks for sharing, and I hope the publishing process is moving along well 
for you.

chris
 





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