[stylist] Fantasy prompt
Chris Kuell
ckuell at comcast.net
Mon Apr 22 14:26:12 UTC 2013
Donna,
Sorry I missed this when I was reading other prompt responses yesterday. For
some reason it landed in my spam folder.
This reads well, and you have me intrigued as to where the kids will go with
their cloud ship. Very clever. My only words of writing advice are to go
easy on the exclamation marks. Too many and they lose their impact.
Thanks for sharing, and I hope the publishing process is moving along well
for you.
chris
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