[stylist] Song writing prompt

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

Bridgit

I think I got lost in the timing.  First you have the baby.  Then there is an unresolved issue with the baby that goes on and on.  You're holding the baby, your mourning the baby.  I think I got confused and it is probably because I didn't pay enough attention to the piece.  There was a lot of Email on the group this weekend and I may have gotten lost.

Sorry if I misunderstood the piece.

Shawn

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Shawn,

Can you expand, please? I'm not sure what you mean by fragmented.

Sincerely,
Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter, editor, Slate & Style Read my blog at:
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C. S. Lewis

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Date: Mon, 11 Feb 2013 15:09:38 -0500
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Wow, that was intense.

>From "The Wizard of Oz" to troubled pregnancy.  I think it was a very
good piece, but it seems fragmented at times.

Shawn


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